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    • Seen Aug 14, 2008
    I'm new to this, but I take criticism well so... tear into it.

    Tyranitar @ Choice Band
    Nature: Adamant
    HP 252/ ATK 252/ SPD 4
    -Crunch
    -Earthquake
    -Stone Edge
    -Pursuit (Might change this.)

    Standard CB set from what I've read.

    Lucario @ Choice Specs
    Ability: Steadfast
    Nature: Modest
    DEF 4/ SP. ATK 252/ SPD 252
    -Aura Sphere
    -Vacuum Wave
    -Dark Pulse
    -Dragon Pulse

    Another standard.

    Breloom @ Toxic Orb
    Ability: Poison Heal
    Nature: Adamant
    HP 44/ ATK 252/ SPD 212
    -Substitute
    -Leech Seed
    -Focus Punch
    -Stone Edge

    Not so sure about this one...

    Weezing @ Leftovers
    Nature: Quiet
    252 HP/ 252 DEF/ 4 S.DEF
    -Sludge Bomb/ Thunderbolt (Unsure)
    -Will-o-wisp
    -Haze
    -Explosion

    Lead most likely. This build is to set them up the bomb.

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Nature: Bold
    200 HP/ 252 DEF/ 56 S. DEF
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunder Wave
    -Soft Boiled
    -Toxic (Although I doubt this will stay)

    I cant get S. Toss... Moveset all fuzzled up.

    Skarmory @ Shed Shell
    Nature: Impish
    252 HP/ DEF 252/ ATK 4
    -Stealth Rock
    -Drill Peck
    -Roost
    -Whirlwind

    Only decent Stealth Rocker I could throw on the team...

    Well, have at it. :P
     
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    Pretty good attempt (at least it has walls =D)

    First of all, no status absorber means Hypnosis would hinder your team a lot. I suggest RestTalk Snorlax > Blissey to absorb status and special wall.

    CBtar is not a good lead as it gets outran by many Sleep-inducing leads, and its shut down by Hippo/Bronzong. I would recommend you put 80 Speed EVs to outrun standard Skarm, and not use it as a lead.

    SpecsLuke is infinitely better as a lead, due to most people expecting the common SDLuke. Therefore you should run it as a lead and run to Snorlax if you fear status.

    I recommend Gliscor > Weezing since Skarm already negates Mamo and Weavile. Skarm doesn't need Shed Shell, the trick is to Whirlwind first to scout for Magnezone and switch to Gliscor to drive it away.

    Something else > Breloom since it can't fit in on a speed-based metagame like this. Spore > Stone Edge if you really do want to use it.

    Pretty solid defence, but Mixape and other mixed attackers would ruin your sweep. I recommend a Starmie > Breloom since it helps with Mixape and revenges some pokemon.
     
    Like the above post says, Mixape will eat this team alive, minus Weezing. Everyone takes 2x to most of his attacks, and Ttar takes 4x to fighting. =P So throw in a little variation, Starmie is definately a Pokemon to consider.
     
    I'm new to this, but I take criticism well so... tear into it.

    Tyranitar @ Choice Band
    Nature: Adamant
    HP 252/ ATK 252/ SPD 4
    -Crunch
    -Earthquake
    -Stone Edge
    -Pursuit (Might change this.)

    Standard CB set from what I've read.

    Lucario @ Choice Specs
    Ability: Steadfast
    Nature: Modest
    DEF 4/ SP. ATK 252/ SPD 252
    -Aura Sphere
    -Vacuum Wave
    -Dark Pulse
    -Dragon Pulse/HP Ice

    Another standard.

    Breloom @ Toxic Orb
    Ability: Poison Heal
    Nature: Adamant
    HP 44/ ATK 252/ SPD 212
    -Substitute
    -Spore
    -Focus Punch
    -Seed Bomb

    Not so sure about this one...

    Weezing @ Leftovers
    Nature: Bold
    252 HP/ 252 DEF/ 4 S.DEF
    -Sludge Bomb/ Thunderbolt (Unsure)
    -Will-o-wisp
    -Haze
    -Explosion

    Lead most likely. This build is to set them up the bomb.

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Nature: Bold
    200 HP/ 252 DEF/ 56 S. DEF
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunder Wave
    -Soft Boiled
    -Areomatherapy

    I cant get S. Toss... Moveset all fuzzled up.

    Skarmory @ Leftovers
    Nature: Impish
    252 HP/ DEF 252/ ATK 4
    -Stealth Rock
    -Drill Peck
    -Roost
    -Whirlwind

    Only decent Stealth Rocker I could throw on the team...

    Well, have at it. :P
    Changes in bold. Also go with Aquillae's advice.
     
    Thank you. I took the advice, and I am winning a lot more now, however I notice that I have absolutely nothing to counter a gliscor. I can beat them when I get lucky, but it is tough and I usually lose a poke in the process. Any advice?
     
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