Royal's Fakemon Thread

[Wolfwhispers]

Oh, hey! I just saw your comic! Even though its just one page, its awsome! I can't wait to see more of that and more of these pictures. :)

 

[Royal]

Oh, hey! I just saw your comic! Even though its just one page, its awsome! I can't wait to see more of that and more of these pictures. :)

I know... I need to get the second page out today...

Second page of Pokemon Luiva is out!

 

[LugiaFreak]

These are very interesting!

My favorite design by far is definitely Robis and its evolution. I hope that you continue to fill out the data so I learn more about your Pokemon.

So far, great job Royal! :)

 

[Lynx1]

The majority of the designs are rather generic, and the coloring looks flat. You should throw in a couple more colors, as most of your Fakemon only have one or two. As for the designs, they look too much like the animals they're based on. There's definitley potential, and it can be brought out with practice.

 

[Royal]

Hey guys, been a while: I did make a few more but haven't added them up. Sorry, but I'll have them up next week when summer starts for me!

 

[I Laugh at your Misfortune!]

:O Everytime I open a thread here, I get more and more jealous. Seriously, these look completely professional and generally just awesome. :D The only one I don't like is theFarfetch'd evo, but that's just because I love Farfetch'd and hate the idea of adding to its line :P

 

[Shasjas]

those are really good, i like the fire starter. some of them are a bit plain though

 

[ShinjisLover]

Well, looking through your comments, I'm shocked and appalled that no one has given you any sort of constructive criticism. Note that if you don't like/don't want harsh criticism, then you probably shouldn't read what I'm about to write (even though I do so hope you decide to, as if would help you in the future). I'm only going to rate the artwork, though. My review is in the spoilers.

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Spoiler:

Its two back legs are of different sizes. They should probably be evened out.

Its paws are facing upwards toward its head. If you were trying to make it look like Tyranitar's hands in its Emerald sprite:

You didn't do a very good job at all.

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This one just has an overloading of details to it. Frankly, it's a pain to look at. Especially around the paws. None of the toes are the same size and they look terrible.

This one I like, especially the fiery mane on its back.

It just went from like to dislike real quick, but that's personal preference, so it doesn't matter much.

Again, an overload of details. But I do have a compliment: The teeth are perfect.

This one looks too 'generic Gible' for me, but its simplistic style makes it appealing to the eyes.

You screwed up a bit on the base of the tail. It's too small and the lines are a bit scratchy, especially near the highlighted part.

This one has issues with its paws, namely the left front one. It doesn't look like it has a wrist at all.

XD Lolz.

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On its left paw, its thumb and first finger are somewhat conjoined.

And another overload of details, this time for the back.

Ducky! <3

Awww, it's so cute. =3

This rocks. Seriously, dude. It's awesome. The wings especially.

The gem-like appendage on its stomach has a flaw in the left, bottom part.

The hands on this one look way too big for its body.

Now he is totally adorable.

I have issues with his feet. The just look like circles and nothing more. They could've used more detail.

Aww. . <3

Aww! <3 He looks so sinister. >=]

Its back leg looks lumpy, especially around the thigh.
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#516

The ear is sticking just a bit too far out.

He's adorable, except for his back, which is just a bit too hairy. It makes him look like he has no neck.

Its front paws aren't the same size. The left one is fatter than the right.

That little random piece of fur makes him look bald.

Again, we're having issues with the paw-size discrepancies.

I think the toe on the left paw could stand to be a bit bigger. The first one, I mean.

I feel like its tail needs to be a bit thicker. Also, those 'gills' on its neck make the neck look flabby.

It looks like a generic Chikorita. . ._.
Anyway, I think its head it a bit oddly shaped. And its neck looks too big for that little head.

Much better. But I'm not too keen on the 'beads' around its tail.

There are major flaws in both of its arms. The right one is way too big, but the left one is too small.

Those pointy toes just don't go well with this Pokémon.

This one's wings are way too plain if you ask me. They have no detail, which they should. If you take a look at Beedrill's artwork, you can clearly see the veins in its wings.

XD It looks funny. But has no other flaws, really.

Why are the spikes on its underbelly? O.o

Its first, right arm looks like it has no wrist. Either that, or too much of a wrist. Hard to tell.

He's adorable, but why are his paw pads not under his feet?

Oh, my. . What isn't wrong with this? Well, first of all, its wings probably shouldn't droop down like that. And the detail is overwhelming, especially around the neck. Its legs are just awful looking.

XD It kinda scares me, to be honest. Also, it looks furry. Now, I'm not an expert, but I believe this is a ghost-type, right? It shouldn't be furry if it is.

Its body has no defined shape and looks like it was just thrown in there at the last minute.

Its left, front paw has some anatomy issues, especially around the toes.

If you tried to make the thing on its back look like a rock, you failed mserably at it. It looks nothing like a rock.

I don't see anything wrong with this. The pearls on it are nice.

I don't know what that is. . Is it supposed to be a turtle?

The same with this one. It looks majorly deformed. If it's supposed to be a turtle, its underbelly should be a different color than its shell. See: Squirtle.

Its back paws are way too big. As is its snout.

. . . .

Kinda looks like a Pachirisu evolution. Anyway, it's kinda cute, but its neck needs some work, especially where it meets the ears. It has got too big of a slope and makes it look hunched. Also, its tail should be much bigger and fluffier.

WTF is this?

Ah, I see what you did there. >.> Well, its ear is a bit lopsided toward the very top and off to the left.

Aww, he kinda looks like a Polar Bear.

Its back paw is having some issues. It looks like you didn't even care at that point.

I'm not a fan of this one.

Oh, ew. . Its wings, first off, are too droopy. And they have no defined structed. If I didn't know this was supposed to be a bird, I wouldn't even know if they were fingers or wings. The same with the tail feathers. Also, its paws need to be bigger than the legs, meaning the legs need to be slimmer.

No comments.

The claws are mediocre at best and need to be a bit larger to look anatomically correct.

No comments.

Now he is absolutely adorable.

This just looks bad in general.

Same for this.

His tail should be longer and the claws on the wings need to be slimmer. They just kinda come out and don't appear to look. . Well, good. If you look at a dragon with the same type of wings, you'll see what I mean.​

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Also, I checked your comic out. Your people are very badly drawn. The faces are too fat and the noses are too big. The fingers look like crap, to be honest. And that's the first page of chapter 2. One more thing, you spelled Poké Ball wrong. There should be a space between Poké and Ball.

The first page of chapter 1 is also badly drawn. Basically, it's for the same reasons as above. But lolz @ Hitmonchan saying 'Hi?'. XD

Now, hopefully, what I've said hasn't discouraged you, but I'm still not finished. This next piece of advice pertains to all of your Pokémon. They need more shading. The shading isn't just around the body parts and should also be near the bottom of the Pokémon. As for the highlighting, try and get it near the head more, rather than the arms and legs. For the coloring, it's too bland is most of them (like the first three Pokémon). You should try adding more variety to most of the colors to make them look better, which is where shading and highlighting come into play again.

I hope this helps. Also, what do you use to color these Pokémon?
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[Royal]

Well, looking through your comments, I'm shocked and appalled that no one has given you any sort of constructive criticism. Note that if you don't like/don't want harsh criticism, then you probably shouldn't read what I'm about to write (even though I do so hope you decide to, as if would help you in the future). I'm only going to rate the artwork, though. My review is in the spoilers.​

Spoiler:

Its two back legs are of different sizes. They should probably be evened out.​

Its paws are facing upwards toward its head. If you were trying to make it look like Tyranitar's hands in its Emerald sprite:

You didn't do a very good job at all.​

This one just has an overloading of details to it. Frankly, it's a pain to look at. Especially around the paws. None of the toes are the same size and they look terrible.​

This one I like, especially the fiery mane on its back.​

It just went from like to dislike real quick, but that's personal preference, so it doesn't matter much.​

Again, an overload of details. But I do have a compliment: The teeth are perfect.​

This one looks too 'generic Gible' for me, but its simplistic style makes it appealing to the eyes.​

You screwed up a bit on the base of the tail. It's too small and the lines are a bit scratchy, especially near the highlighted part.​

This one has issues with its paws, namely the left front one. It doesn't look like it has a wrist at all.​

XD Lolz.​

​

On its left paw, its thumb and first finger are somewhat conjoined.​

And another overload of details, this time for the back.​

Ducky! <3​

Awww, it's so cute. =3​

This rocks. Seriously, dude. It's awesome. The wings especially.​

The gem-like appendage on its stomach has a flaw in the left, bottom part.​

The hands on this one look way too big for its body.​

Now he is totally adorable.​

I have issues with his feet. The just look like circles and nothing more. They could've used more detail.​

Aww. . <3​

Aww! <3 He looks so sinister. >=]​

Its back leg looks lumpy, especially around the thigh.​

#516

The ear is sticking just a bit too far out.​

He's adorable, except for his back, which is just a bit too hairy. It makes him look like he has no neck.​

Its front paws aren't the same size. The left one is fatter than the right.​

That little random piece of fur makes him look bald.​

Again, we're having issues with the paw-size discrepancies.​

I think the toe on the left paw could stand to be a bit bigger. The first one, I mean.​

I feel like its tail needs to be a bit thicker. Also, those 'gills' on its neck make the neck look flabby.​

It looks like a generic Chikorita. . ._.
Anyway, I think its head it a bit oddly shaped. And its neck looks too big for that little head.​

Much better. But I'm not too keen on the 'beads' around its tail.​

There are major flaws in both of its arms. The right one is way too big, but the left one is too small.​

Those pointy toes just don't go well with this Pokémon.​

This one's wings are way too plain if you ask me. They have no detail, which they should. If you take a look at Beedrill's artwork, you can clearly see the veins in its wings.​

XD It looks funny. But has no other flaws, really.​

Why are the spikes on its underbelly? O.o​

Its first, right arm looks like it has no wrist. Either that, or too much of a wrist. Hard to tell.​

He's adorable, but why are his paw pads not under his feet?​

Oh, my. . What isn't wrong with this? Well, first of all, its wings probably shouldn't droop down like that. And the detail is overwhelming, especially around the neck. Its legs are just awful looking.​

XD It kinda scares me, to be honest. Also, it looks furry. Now, I'm not an expert, but I believe this is a ghost-type, right? It shouldn't be furry if it is.​

Its body has no defined shape and looks like it was just thrown in there at the last minute.​

Its left, front paw has some anatomy issues, especially around the toes.​

If you tried to make the thing on its back look like a rock, you failed mserably at it. It looks nothing like a rock.​

I don't see anything wrong with this. The pearls on it are nice.​

I don't know what that is. . Is it supposed to be a turtle?​

The same with this one. It looks majorly deformed. If it's supposed to be a turtle, its underbelly should be a different color than its shell. See: Squirtle.​

Its back paws are way too big. As is its snout.​

. . . .​

Kinda looks like a Pachirisu evolution. Anyway, it's kinda cute, but its neck needs some work, especially where it meets the ears. It has got too big of a slope and makes it look hunched. Also, its tail should be much bigger and fluffier.​

WTF is this?​

Ah, I see what you did there. >.> Well, its ear is a bit lopsided toward the very top and off to the left.​

Aww, he kinda looks like a Polar Bear.​

Its back paw is having some issues. It looks like you didn't even care at that point.​

I'm not a fan of this one.​

Oh, ew. . Its wings, first off, are too droopy. And they have no defined structed. If I didn't know this was supposed to be a bird, I wouldn't even know if they were fingers or wings. The same with the tail feathers. Also, its paws need to be bigger than the legs, meaning the legs need to be slimmer.​

No comments.​

The claws are mediocre at best and need to be a bit larger to look anatomically correct.​

No comments.​

Now he is absolutely adorable.​

This just looks bad in general.​

Same for this.​

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His tail should be longer and the claws on the wings need to be slimmer. They just kinda come out and don't appear to look. . Well, good. If you look at a dragon with the same type of wings, you'll see what I mean.​

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Also, I checked your comic out. Your people are very badly drawn. The faces are too fat and the noses are too big. The fingers look like crap, to be honest. And that's the first page of chapter 2. One more thing, you spelled Poké Ball wrong. There should be a space between Poké and Ball. ​

The first page of chapter 1 is also badly drawn. Basically, it's for the same reasons as above. But lolz @ Hitmonchan saying 'Hi?'. XD​

Now, hopefully, what I've said hasn't discouraged you, but I'm still not finished. This next piece of advice pertains to all of your Pokémon. They need more shading. The shading isn't just around the body parts and should also be near the bottom of the Pokémon. As for the highlighting, try and get it near the head more, rather than the arms and legs. For the coloring, it's too bland is most of them (like the first three Pokémon). You should try adding more variety to most of the colors to make them look better, which is where shading and highlighting come into play again.​

I hope this helps. Also, what do you use to color these Pokémon?​

Thanks, I do take constructive criticism openly. I know a few of them look pretty much very crappy, but these were rough designs - pretty much just to give people a look at them.

My comic - I can't draw people for my life unless I really take a long time doing so - which would take about two weeks. >.<

 

[Dirtyjerry]

i really like the heracross-looking ones! nice job.

 

[.Tactic.]

Those are brilliant, i could never do something that good, bravo, very proffesional

 

[Royal]

First post was edited with extensive things everyone should know!

 

[SuperBeano11]

DO NOT TAKE IMAGES, NAMES, DATA, ETC. WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!​

ALL FAKEMON ARE GOING UNDER EXTENSIVE EDITTING AND I'LL HAVE NEW ONES. BE SURE TO CHECK IT HERE. NUMBERS WILL RESET TO 001.​

Click spoiler if you want to see original designs.​

NOTE:
1. If people would like to use these Fakemon, PLEASE PM ME. I most probably WILL say yes, but I want to know which ones you want to use. Usage is free, BUT CREDIT MUST BE GIVEN.
2. The region these Fakemon come from is called "Hiberna Ortus".​

New Designs 2010

Official Designs

Spoiler:

None at the moment

Silouettes *NEW*

Spoiler:

#012
Name: ???
Type: ???
The ??? Pokemon​

Old Designs 2008

Spoiler:

#494

Crimtwig
Type: Grass
The Spike Pokemon
Height: 1 foot 3 inches
Weight: 23 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
With its grassy skin and thorn-like spikes on its shoulders, Crimtwig is camouflaged almost completely in forests, woods, and bushes. It used squeals, barks, and howls to communicate with other Pokemon.
Next Evolution Level: 16​

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Smebull
Type: Fire
The Tiny Cat Pokemon
Height: 10 inches
Weight: 31 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
Usually seen sleeping on hot lava rock, this small Pokemon loves to snooze. But when disturbed, this Pokemon's moves can turn deadly.
Next Evolution Level: 14​

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Shampi
Type: Water
The Tiny Shark Pokemon
Height: 1 foot 1 inch
Weight: 25 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
Since SHAMPI can't swim as well as its other evolutions, it usually just walks on the bottom of lakes, rivers, and seas, completely submerged underwater. It will only surface when there are dangerous predators in the water like GYARADOS and TENTACRUEL.
Next Evolution Level: 18​

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Quisi
Type: Bug
The Larva Pokemon
Height: 3 inches
Weight: 4 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
Hanging up in trees, QUISI usually use their STRING SHOT attack to capture and real in prey. They have a good vision since they have six eyes.
Next Evolution Level: 12​

#504

Princieon
Type: Bug/Steel
The Moth Pokemon
Height: 1 foot
Weight: 41 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
This Pokemon is much stronger than its evolution and usually lives with its children and the king of its hive. Its vision is much more advanced than a Quisi's.
Next Evolution Level: King's Stone​

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Wyvell
Type: Flying
The Wing Pokemon
Height: 10 inches
Weight: 10 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
WYVELL usually live up in trees in groups. They usually have a leader and fly south to a warm place for mating season and to lay their eggs.
Next Evolution Level: 18​

#507

Wyvenne
Type: Flying
The Hybrid Pokemon
Height: 1 foot 6 inches
Weight: 19 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
After evolving from Wyvell, these creatures are peaceful and usually live on land almost as long as they live in trees and fly.
Next Evolution Level: 34​

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Robis
Type: Flying
The Robin Pokemon
Height: 3 inches
Weight: 5 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
With its sharp call and even sharper peek, ROBIS are seen flying in groups of five and very rarely are they seen with their evolution.
Next Evolution Level: 22​

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Barkk
Type: Normal
The Puppy Pokemon
Height: 1 foot 10 inches
Weight: 81 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
With a genetic makeup much like an Eevee's, this Pokemon is able to evolve into all different types of Pokemon. Almost as many as Eevee.
Next Evolution Level: Evolution Stone, Friendship, Area​

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Eletribark
Type: Electric
The Thunder Dog Pokemon
Height: 3 feet 4 inches
Weight: 121 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
One of the genetic evolutions of Barkk, ELETRIBARK's tan ears collect electricity and use it to zap enemies that are too close to it.​

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#552

Standibuck
Type: Ice
The Buck Pokemon
Height: 6 feet 2 inches
Weight: 208 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
Seen in icy forests and lands, this Pokemon is very popular amongst Ice trainers because it is not affected by its weakness - fire.​

#553

Daffiyul
Type: Psychic
The Song Pokemon
Height: 2 feet 4 inches
Weight: 81 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
This species of Pokemon usually live on mountains and sing. The bands covering their hands, legs, and neck are hollow and can also tone out special song notes.
Next Evolution Level: 32​

#554

Yulliduf
Type: Psychic
The Song Pokemon
Height: 4 feet 5 inches
Weight: 100 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
This species of Pokemon usually live on mountains and sing. The bands covering their hands, legs, and neck are hollow and can also tone out special song notes.​

#555

Aerominu
Type: Flying/Dragon
The Small Dragon Pokemon
Height: 3 feet 7 inches
Weight: 123 pounds
Pokedex Entry:
Extremely weak and demanding, AEROMINU are usually cared for by their parents. Not much more is known - the much known fact is its one of the legendary prehistoric Pokemon.
Next Evolution Level: Friendship​

Number 500 Looks An Awful Lot Like Gible (How Perculier.........)

 

[Royal]

Yes, yes, I know. T_T

#001's Silouette is up.

 

[Iarama]

Nice looking design can't wait to see it finished I really like your designs your waaay better at using multiple colors than I am I am only good at using one basic type of color instead of mixing them.

 

[Royal]

#001, the Grass starter, has been revealed. Check the official design section.

 

[Cherrim]

Thread closed per request.