Sabrina Fanclub

[Crazy Packers Fan]

And hmm, as this is the Sabrina club, perhaps I should mention her in here too, XD. At long last, I get another chapter from her perspective. And perhaps those SHIRONA!!! flashbacks you've been asking about. ^_^

Well of course I want to see Cynthia even more... so I'll be most definitely looking forward to seeing her show up.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Shiro-Cynthia flashbacks--> possible ways for me to re-interpret this in yuri ways. Hehehe...
After long last, first part of your review, CPF. Like I said, I'm multi-tasking, so, my typo rate has increased. x.x

Already having missed Sabrina's company for a month

*cough three months cough* Aww, poor guy. ;.;

It must have cost a fortune, he thought.

Only about three trillion yen, a response came to him.

Cynthia's a naughty little mind reader.

Come inside, boy, she added.

Now all men are just 'boy' for her? No names anymore?

But did this mean Cynthia could not read his mind and figure out that he was hiding Sabrina in a ball? He was doing all he could to block her from reading his mind, but surely it could not be enough…

First, apparently, Cynthia really cannot feel Sabrina from inside the ball. o,o Weird for someone as powerful as her. Secondly...she cannot read Will's mind? WTF?

"Now, for the final proof of Sabrina's death…" she said, "kiss me."

I KNEW HE WOULD KISS ANOTHER WOMAN, I KNEW HE WOULD!!! Hahaha, in your face, coincidence! XD

I made a promise to Sabrina… that I'd never kiss another woman as long as I live!

He kissed Erica...>>

Surely Sabrina would not want him to sacrifice his life over something as simple as a kiss, or would she?

I wouldn't be so sure...

he realized that Cynthia was a much better kisser than Sabrina.

I can imagine...*pictures flood mind*....P*A dazes off in daydreams... ...Sabrina is still a better kisser. Just less experienced. XD!
Other part will be in the other club. =3

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Shiro-Cynthia flashbacks

You know, "shiro" means "white" in Japanese... so that would mean "White-Cynthia." And I think she much prefers black.

Now all men are just 'boy' for her? No names anymore?

Something I love doing with Cynthia, simply calling them "boy." She even used Lucian as a footstool!

...Sabrina is still a better kisser. Just less experienced. XD!

Very important, that Will prefers Cynthia as a kisser. I don't think Sabrina will like that very much!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

....heheh, didn't know that. XD Originally, I wanted to say Shirona, but then, a certain someone would have used my trademark cry again, so I changed it in the middle. Didn't know that it would turn out so funnily. XD
...she did. >>
No, Sabrina will not like this very much. Niehter will she like being awaked and immideately be killed by Cynthia because now certain queen knows that she's still alive. Will is, for once, dumb. Very dumb. Argh. >< Lossing his wife over a simple kiss that didn't really need to be mentioned. >.<

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Well, he's not just letting her out over that, he's letting her out because he misses her. He's gone three months without seeing her. And besides, maybe he can hide the kiss from her long enough that it won't be a problem...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I know, I know, but he will miss her even more if Cynthia kills Sabrina just because her FRIGGIN STUPID HUSBAND let her out just to see her again when it was their WHOLE FRIGGIN plan to let her stay in as long as danger, aka Cynthia, is out there. >>
Yeah, he hides it from her for two minutes, then Cynthia comes in and kills her. Problem solved. >>

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Hey, you're acting like the writer is incompetent here... relax, I've got it all under control.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

No, no, no, not the writer is incompetent, the character is! XD It's kinda stupid f Will to do this, that's what I mean. It has nothign to do with your writing, since writer =/= character. =3 (Though sometimes I wish I were Will...you know why...0=) )

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So basically you plan on blaming Sabrina's imminent death, if there happened to be one, on Will. Makes sense, though I think you'd have to blame the writer first. I'll post that chapter sometime when I'm on my computer.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well, yes, I would blame it on Will and Cynthia, but that one is obvious, there's no one else who would/could kill her that easily..
Thing is....characters do stuff that authors don't approve. At least that's my philosophy. I got attacked for something one of my characters did (opening a grave and stealing something from it) by a reader and that's when I formed this rule for myself. My characters do things I would never do, either because these thigns digust me, I don't approve them, I don't want to break rules, I'm too shy, or heck, just because I don't want to. I'm not my characters and they can do whatever they want (kinda). So that's why I blame Will, and not you. ^.^

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Okay, I'm glad you won't blame me. It is my fault that Cynthia is evil, though, that's something that no one thought of before me. But you're right, my characters a lot of times do things that I would never do.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD Of course not, why should I blame yo---wait, does that mean that Sabrina *will* be killed? Oo Okay, in that case, I might get a bit angry at you...XD!

...or they do things you would like to do? 0=)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Sorry, I can't find the pictures of those Sabrina cosplayers.

Do you want me to post the new chapter today? I think I have it ready if you want to see it.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Ah, no problem, I will find some Sabrina cosplayers one day. Or rather, some more cosplayers, as I have already found a few on deviantart. But, so far, only there. >> (And weird other internet sources I cannot name, because they lack a name. o,o)

...why do you even ask me if I want to see the new chapter? XD Isn't my answer kind of obvious?

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Okay, it's up now, maybe you've seen it by now.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I guess some part of the review will have to come here...*mutters something quietly about a certain husband she still believes to be completely stupid*
Title: Whoah, there *is* a song that has 'Run to you' as the chorus. o,o Though I doubt you know it. "7 years&50 days" by Groove Coverage. o,o And it has something to do with lovers being apart. Hm....

"Just let her out!" Liza exclaimed.

"But then Cynthia will kill her!" Will replied.

"So what?" Liza joked.

"So-"

I haven't figured out yet if I should hate Liza or Will more now...

"So, have you figured a way to stop Cynthia?" Sabrina asked.

*hides* No.

"I missed my birthday!" she screamed.

XD! Ah, so I'm not the only one who remembered!

"Will, what's been going on the last few months?" she asked.

"Nothing, really…" Will replied.

'Nothing' is an understatement.

"I sure didn't marry you for your brains."

XD!!!!!!!!!!!!
No, she didn't, she's no zombie. =2

Liza held out Roxette to Sabrina. "Look, she wants to see her mother," Liza said.

Sabrina held her daughter happily. "I'm so happy to see you," she said.

Awwww....=3

She then gave a suspicious look to Will. "You're hiding something from me, aren't you?"

Will stepped back, in a bit of surprise. "No, no, not at all!" he replied.

No, of course not, what should he hide from her...>>

"Um… happy belated birthday," he said.

"That's not going to be enough to weasel your way out of this one," Sabrina replied.

XD! That joke is *so* going to be in my future fic, too. Poor Will, some things never change and some things can be inheritated. 0=)

I will find out what you're hiding.

And you won't be happy about what you find.

In a flash, she slapped him across the face, then turned away and stomped out the front door of their house.

"She was going to kill me!" Will protested.

And now either Sabrina is going to kill you or Cynthia kills her. There will be corpses one way or the other.

Will met Sabrina outside, where she was sitting on the ground, crying.

;.; Awwwwww......

"It's not just that you kissed her," Sabrina replied. "It was your thoughts while kissing her."

...even I can't deny that. >>

"You fool, I wish you were dead! I have no place in my life for you!"

...-_- She's not that dumb, is she?

"I've done all I could to save you, Sabrina," Will stated. "You're on your own now."

Okay, she is dumb and married a dumb man. Poor Roxy.

"Give me my daughter," Sabrina said. "I'm going to live with my parents."

"She's my flesh and blood," Will replied. "She shall live with me."

She belongs to 'both' of you, not only one! >.<

"Oh, come on, you'd break up over something like this?"

Liza appeared between the bickering couple, holding onto Roxette.

^.^ *pats Liza happily*

"So you know all our secret conversations?" Sabrina asked.

"Not all of them, just… most of them," Liza replied mischievously.

And not only these.

"I guess if I had the chance to kiss Lucian, I'd do the same."

Yet Lucian's not that much of a good kisser. 0=)

Will gave her a quick wave without smiling, as he clearly did not want to see her.

Rather, as his wife did not want him to see her.

opened the door to reveal Roxanne as well as two others – Cynthia's grandparents.

OMG- Zombies!!!! *runs away*

She then bowed her head before Carolina.

Me does not like Sabrina bowing. To anyone.

"I am one of the chosen ones," she bragged. "And perhaps, so are some of you… so I ask now, each of you, to take the pearl… and find out if you are chosen as well."

Interesting...

Other part in the other fanclub. =3

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So Sabrina survives, and actually it did not even cross my mind, the thought of her dying, through this whole chapter. I began to miss her, which is why I had Will take her out of the ball. Maybe this will keep me from thinking of killing her off in the future...

Sabrina will always bow to Cynthia and her family.

Also, I couldn't bear to see Sabrina and Will break up, so I quickly had Liza come in and straighten things out. She can be helpful at times, like this one.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

...o,o it didn't even cross your mind?! WTF?!?!? And all this time, I have been worrying about Sabrina. >>
Okay, if missing her keeps you from killing her, then let Will force her into that ball a few more times. XD! Every chapter that Cynthia tries to kill her in, best. =3

No, she won't always bow to them. 0=)

I couldn't have beared to see this, too (heck why they quickly got together in my fic, too- plus, it gives you the chance to write amazing cuddle and fluffy scenes 0=) ), so that's why I patted Liza this time. She's not as bratty as she seems to be...at least today. XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

She's probably not going back in that ball for the rest of the story... and I almost gave away something about the next chapter here, because I forgot it wasn't up yet.

Yes, she will!

We got some fluffy scenes as well as an argument, so I'd say it was a pretty good chapter for the development of their marriage.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Hm, so her not going back is a important plot thing? Hopefully, not her death... Meh, I rather guess the ball gets destroyed or something. That would at least by the best solution for me, no danger of dying for sweet Sabrina. 0=)

No, she won't.

XD Well, I would have spend a few chapters on this development, knowing my tendency to write ten sentences where one would be enough, but I won't complain about fluffy scenes and marriage development. *g* There's no way to tell which way's better. ^^