Sabrina Fanclub

[Psychic*Absol]

Depends on her character. Your Sabrina definitely not. Mine not either. I can see fanfic Sabrinas that would make good queens, but not your one. She doesn't want to be one, I can imagine. Not if she weren't possessed or suddenly mad or anything.

XD! You're not scaring me. ...okay, you are. XD I think I would even read the next chapter if you told me what's going to happen, but not knowing that makes it more interesting and the guessing more fun.
The scaring thing for me is...I could actually see the plot moving on without Sabrina. I could see it working out with her dead. And that scares me. Because the possibility is there.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Depends on her character. Your Sabrina definitely not. Mine not either. I can see fanfic Sabrinas that would make good queens, but not your one. She doesn't want to be one, I can imagine. Not if she weren't possessed or suddenly mad or anything.

But wouldn't being pushed around by Cynthia so much drive her to something like that? She's power-hungry herself, you know.

The scaring thing for me is...I could actually see the plot moving on without Sabrina. I could see it working out with her dead. And that scares me. Because the possibility is there.

Believe me, I considered the possibilities when writing this chapter... after all, Liza could become like a mother to Roxette...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

She wasn't just pushed around by Cynthia, she was kicked and hurt and almost killed twice....I think that's enough to make her see that being a queen only makes you hurt others. Isn't that something she never wants to do again?
Besides, she has Will to push around...0=)

;.; You don't know how much this would make me cry...in ten or so years, Roxy sits on Liza's lap and Liza tells her about her real mother...oh, god, I would cry, I would so cry....*sniffs*

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I think that's enough to make her see that being a queen only makes you hurt others. Isn't that something she never wants to do again?

Perhaps, unless she would want revenge on Cynthia for what's she's done.

You don't know how much this would make me cry...in ten or so years, Roxy sits on Liza's lap and Liza tells her about her real mother

Saddest scene ever... now I really don't want Sabrina to die... not that I wanted her to die in the first place...

Oh, and I'm writing Chapter 5 right now, and it has the biggest twist ever. Seriously, you won't guess this one!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Perhaps, unless she would want revenge on Cynthia for what's she's done.

Rvenge =/= being a queen herself. >>
Besides, there's still Karen & Giselle that would like to have word with her concerning royalty...

Saddest scene ever... now I really don't want Sabrina to die... not that I wanted her to die in the first place...

I can really imagine this, though it makes me cry....the two of them sitting in front of a fireplace, maybe even with a picture of Roxy's parents there, and Liza telling her how much of a strong woman Sabrina was...that she always fought till the end...
Argh, I made myself cry.

Oh, and I'm writing Chapter 5 right now, and it has the biggest twist ever. Seriously, you won't guess this one!

XD We'll see, we'll see...
(Crack guesses, not meant to be taken serious: Will falls in love with Cynthia, Lucian falls in love with Sabrina, Liza is declared champion and queen of Kanto, either Sabrina & Will turn out to be darklings in disguise, Cynthia joins Team Rocket, Giselle's head explodes...lol, sorry, I have too much fun with this. XD)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Rvenge =/= being a queen herself. >>
Besides, there's still Karen & Giselle that would like to have word with her concerning royalty...

You're right about that...

I can really imagine this, though it makes me cry....the two of them sitting in front of a fireplace, maybe even with a picture of Roxy's parents there, and Liza telling her how much of a strong woman Sabrina was...that she always fought till the end...
Argh, I made myself cry.

Stop it, stop it! I don't want to cry myself... I should have never put poor Sabrina in this situation...

(Crack guesses, not meant to be taken serious: Will falls in love with Cynthia, Lucian falls in love with Sabrina, Liza is declared champion and queen of Kanto, either Sabrina & Will turn out to be darklings in disguise, Cynthia joins Team Rocket, Giselle's head explodes...lol, sorry, I have too much fun with this. XD)

One of these things actually occurs.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

*g* The image of Karen, Giselle, Sabrina and Cynthia b*tchfighting over the title of queen is quite funny.

...you've made me cry quite a few times, so now it's my turn. You know...if Roxette had Sabrina's eyes...how painfull it would be for Will to look at her. He would always be reminded of his wife.

o,o Really? Giselle's head explodes?!?
I KNEW WHICH ONE, OH DAMN IT I'M PSYCHIC!!!! XD j/k

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

You know, I'll have to make sure I never make Sabrina die again... it's so sad thinking about it! Oh well, tomorrow we'll see if she's truly dead or not.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Yeah, next timte you nearly kill someone, make it Will.
...
This was a joke, just in case you didn't get it. XD

Good news and bad news for you, CPF. Good news: The plot for the future fic is up. Meaning that as soon as your fic is finished, I can and will start writing. ^^
Bad news: Chapter 3 of Spring's Revenge will take a bit a longer. >>;;; I fear another week...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

That sounds great... perhaps I should shorten my series to five stories to let you write? Or maybe I let you write the future story, then go back and write a sixth story that fits in the past? We've got some interesting possibilities here...

Oh, and you may want to check ff.net... it's an important chapter for any Sabrina fan today.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

*shrugs* It's left up to you, I guess. I left my plot pretty loose, so I can theoretically cut out and/or intruduce almost everyone. The only characters I really depend on are Roy, Roxette (d'oh), and, surprisingly, Melody. Why, you ask? 0=) I could tell you the plot, though that would spoil all the fun for you.

Yeah, teh day of her funeral. *sarcasm* I waited with reading until you came online. XD!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Oh, all right, I'm all for Melody being in it. Just remember her pairing with Gary Oak!

I noticed no one from Germany had read my fourth chapter yet, so I knew you hadn't seen it yet... I always look for that one hit from Germany, which tells me whether you read it or not.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD Hehe, I won't turn your characters ooc!! I might start re-reading all the parts to get them in character. ^^ I'm a perfectionist. ^^;;;;

XD!!! Well, now it should be there.

Title --> Happy*Absol *ggg*

he noticed something coming out of it… a dark, mysterious mist.

--> Unhappy*Absol You copied my idea!
XD!!!! j/k, of course ^.^ I've already started thinking about some dark attacks for the future fic...after all, there will be dark vs. psychic battles. 0=) A lot of them....

That was when Sabrina opened her eyes, with them glowing a dark red.

She isn't possesed now, is she? Oo

"You're alive!" he shouted

And approximately 19281 other Sabrina fans on the world.

I absorbed some of Cynthia's dark powers when she attacked me, Sabrina explained. And now…

o,o Waitasec....

She reached her hand out, as dark mist poured out.

I am like her, she finished.

O,O WAITASEC!!!!

You mean, you have dark powers too now? Will asked.

That's right, Will, Sabrina replied.

*quotes herself* "either Sabrina & Will turn out to be darklings in disguise"..... Councidence: 0 P*A: 3
Goodness, even when I make CRACK guesses, I'm right. o,o;;;;;;;;;;;;;; I need to get my mind checked.

It took me nearly dying to gain them, but now…

*quote from my fic, said by Karen there* 'Psychic and dark don't mix well.' ...makes quite sense that Cynthia's (!!!!) dark powers would nearly kill her. I wonder how much she got...and if it's permanent effect or just for some time...
You know...imagening Sabrina with dark powers disturbs me. Yet it's damn cool. ^^

I will be able to stand up to her… and I will be the one who defeats her.

Now I don't doubt that anymore. ^.^
But the most important thing is that...

I'm just so thankful you're alive, Will replied, kissing her.

^.^

She stood up, with each and every one of them being completely astounded.

With the possible exception of Will, who's just happy. ^.^

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So yes, Sabrina didn't die, she's still alive. I thought about maybe pushing the reveal a little further into the chapter, but then I figured that you'd just skip until you found the part with her, so I realized there was no point in putting it off anymore. And it's happy!

I like the idea of you getting the characters in the same personality I put them in, so no one's out of ooc. Of course those first two stories are quite ugly compared to the later ones (imo), so I wish you luck with going through them. But actually stuff that happened in the past is going to play a big part in this story, trust me. Not just the last story, but the previous three stories as well.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

You really think I would do this?! Because usually, I don't. XD! Only with fics where I'm not sure if Sabrina appears at all, but not with fics I know she appears in....

Oh, oh, then I better get starting with re-reading the other parts and taking notes. That's going to take some time, with all the chapters...but your fith part is going on for some while, so I suppose I have the time. ^^
(After reading the whole chapter, I think I know what you're hinting...though that doesn't mean I like the consequences. >>)

"You still need it!"

"No, I don't," Sabrina replied,

She healed herself, I guess?

"We thought you were dead!"

You, and me, and probably a few reviewers out there, too.

She reached her hands out, creating a small black hole.

My mind keeps on repeating "doesn't work, doesn't work, doesn't work", that pure image is just so...contradicting and weird. XD

Powers or no powers, he was just happy to see her alive.

Very right indeed. ^^ Our worst nightmares haven't come true.

Cynthia lay in bed with Lucian, enjoying a romantic moment. Lucian had both of her hands on her chest, as she squealed in delight. The two could not be happier.

No surprise they have a son. XD

"She must be… but that's not all… her powers have increased," Cynthia answered.

Man, that she knows all of that already...>>;;; Not good.

"So you think now she has your powers?" Lucian asked.

"Maybe some of them," Cynthia replied. "But she's still not nearly as powerful as me."

Hm...some of them...not all though. But I suppose she will train so she will be as strong as Cynthia soon. ^^

"It just involves Kanto, not Johto. Cynthia didn't declare war on Johto, did she?"

*shrugs* She rather declared war on Sabrina, so....

"What?! Are they afraid of being shown up by me once again? Oh, it's probably my fault for making them look so bad by comparison!" Giselle exclaimed.

I won't even COMMENT this anymore....keeping her in character will be so easy, but cruel at the same time. Cruel for me, the writer. ><

"Because you know I can do it all myself anyway."

Yeah, right, of course, whatever you say...

"I heard you had some problems,"

SOME PROBLEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

"She almost died, it's not funny!" Will exclaimed.

NOT FUNNY AT ALL! *glares at Liza*

Sabrina simply reached out her hand, creating some dark mist with it, to show Liza.

"Ooh… how did you get that?" Liza asked.

Ehm, ebay? >>;;;
Seriously, I expected a more surprised reaction from Liza (something like *heart attack*...okay, maybe not *that* drastic....), but then, she is getting closer to Giselle-being-like...ouch.

"Oh, so this was all because of your hunger for power?" Liza asked. "So you risked your life just to gain more power? Where are your priorities, Sabrina?"

Hm...you said that there would be another woman trying to become queen...could it be...?

"If I don't become strong enough to defeat Cynthia, I'll die anyway!" she exclaimed.

Very true.

"Just beg her for mercy, call her queen… she loves flattery, you know."

That's *exactly* what Sabrina did two chapters ago, and we know how that went...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I have to make Liza a little annoying, or really, a lot annoying, that's the way she is. She's not exactly Giselle, but she can get on people's nerves (in this case Sabrina's).

I figured that I would go with the old cliche "whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger" in this case with Sabrina, and allow her to now have a fighting chance vs. Cynthia.

And you like the "T" rating now? It certainly allows me to heat things up a lot more...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

A lot annyoing is the right word. Let's hope Roxy doesn't copy her.

Is that clichéd? I thought it's a saying proved true by life....
Not to mention that the battle between Sabrina & Cynthia will now not be epic, but the ultimate definition of epic. XD

^.^ Now, if it weren't only Cynthia & Lucian profitting from that rating...

"I tried those things,"

*nods* Like I said.

"She wants me dead, and the only way I'm going to survive is by taking her down with my own hands."

--> does that mean Sabrina wants to kill Cynthia now? o,o;;;

You try to beat Cynthia alone, with your newfound powers, and you'll get embarrassed again!"

*nods* Though Sabrina probably hates to admit that, Liza's true here. Sabrina needs to train first. Hopefully not with Giselle...

Will grabbed Sabrina's arm. "No, you're staying right here with me," he said. "Not until you learn how to use your newfound powers will I let you even think about battling her."

^.^ Like I said...
You know...it's cute how it's always Will who pulls her back from such dangerous situations....it may be a bit anti-feministic in the eyes of some, but not in mine. He's just deeply caring about her, and he, unlike her, knows her limits. That's so cute. ^.^

"Sabrina, I almost lost you once," Will told her. "I don't want to lose you again."

He kissed her on the lips, calming her down greatly.

Awwww....(he lost her almost a dozen times...) So damn romantic. ^.^ Get the rating up for these two, too, plz. 0=)

Let's face it, you have an inferiority complex with her."

Had one, then lost it, now it's coming up again...yay, perfect case for the psychologist. *gets out the red couch, the glasses and beard* XD

Sabrina paused to think about it. "I guess you're right,"

o,o Whoa, she admits that? Maybe she's not completely lost.

"I always wanted to be queen," she continued.

Or maybe she is. >>
BTW...Coincidence: 0, P*A: 4.....this IS getting scary.

"Yes, and I forgot all about such plans," Sabrina added. "But now, I feel those feelings again, my insatiable hunger for power. I won't be satisfied until I'm on a throne staring down at that awful Cynthia."

Girl, you have your gym, your psychics, your own damn now doubled powers, not to mention you have a great, nice husband who loves you deeply and a little daughter...what MORE is there that you want to be satisfied? >>;;;;;;

"Relax," Will stated. "I don't think that's exactly what any of us want…"

My words, Will, my words. ...

He was talking to Misty of Cerulean City, who seemed not to care about Cynthia at all.

Cerulean is close to Saffron, so if Saffron is attacked again, Cerulean is in danger, too. You should be worried, girl.

"Right now I'm too busy trying to get some stupid boy to stop caring so much about his Pikachu and start growing up a little bit.

Aka Ritchie. *snickers* XD

You can talk to my sisters, though…"

Oh no, Lance thought.

'Oh, no', yes, right words.

"Hey, Lance, like, what's up?" Lily asked.

"Yeah, like, what do you want from us?" Violet asked.

"Well, I was hoping you would-"

"Now, come on, Lance, out with it! Like, I have a boyfriend, I don't have time for this!" Daisy replied.

"Boyfriend? Now just wait a minute, I have important things to tell you!" Lance exclaimed.

"Oh, he's just taking up our shopping time! If this involves serious matters, like, talk to Misty!" Violet said.

This is, like, too many, like, 'likes', that these, like, sentences. x.x

They'll be the first ones to fall!

They, or Sabrina again. x.x.

"What, are we going to need our hero Giselle to save the day?" Lance asked.

"Heroine," a voice corrected him.

I fear that will be what happens...though, a battle only between Sabrina & Cynthia is cooler.

I've kept it from collapsing!"

When, please?

"If Cynthia and her Sinnoh people attack us again, I'll be the one to stop them, you hear?"

Hopefully, you *do* something. >>

"Finally, a man besides my Joe who realizes he's dependant on a woman!"

*cough* He's not the only one *cough*.

Unfortunately for him, even if this little dream of his came true, it could mean even worse things for the land of Kanto.

Probably...

At first, I thought the big twist would be Sabrina getting dark powers, but since that happened in Chapter 4...hm....no, I won't tell you my ideas about the big twist, not even my crack ideas. Otherwise, if I get right again, you'll declare war on ME. ><

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Sorry, power went out, so I had to take a while before replying. Anyway, yes, Sabrina has been pushed so much by Cynthia that now she wants to be queen, or at least to reign over Cynthia. Fortunately she has Will and Liza who are telling her that may not be the best of ideas...

Ideas for the big twist in Chapter 5? Come on, I want to hear them. This time, I seriously doubt you'll guess it.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

(Np. ^^ Though I had thought that you had went offline for the rest of the day, so I went offline as well...you're lucky I decided to look again. XD)
To some extend, I can understand her. She surely has been pushed around by Cynthia a lot. But that's still no excuse. If she wants to be queen...how much better than Cynthia is she, in the end?
And considering that we're talking about Sabrina here, who's quite a mighty psychic herself...if she REALLY wants to be queen, even Liza and Will can't stop her.

XD! You really want to hear them? Even if I guess right again? I don't know, I would feel bad if I did....;.;

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Well, there's nothing wrong with being queen, it's the whole "I'll suck you into a black hole if you get in my way" thing that Cynthia's done that's been wrong. I don't think you'll see Cynthia concede her throne anytime soon.

If you do guess this time, it won't be because my story's too predictable, you'll just have proved your psychic powers.