Sabrina Fanclub

[Psychic*Absol]

>> Nothing wrong with being queen? Well, I'm always against monarchy, it just doesn't work out in a right, good, legal way most of the times. Even Sabrina would become corrupted if made queen, I'm quite sure of.
XD I doubt that. Hehe, the only person that might get the throne one day is Roy, isn't he? 0=) *hint, hint, hint*

*coughs* Okay, okay, but if I'm wrong...oh, well, I'll give it a try. I think that dark powers = not good for Sabrina. Either they mess up with her and get her, hm, how should I formulate this...evil? Something along this. But actually, this theory is not the most possible one. I rather thought about what would happen if Sabrina indeed defeated Cynthia and became queen...maybe she would be the biggest threat for the pokemon world then!
^ serious theories, crack ideas following now: Liza getting dark powers too, Sabrina & Cynthia teaming up, Sabrina getting trained by either Karen or Giselle...
Hmpf, not as cracky as usual. >>;;; I have too much of my own plot on my mind right now. ><

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Ooh, I like your hint... this should be interesting.

I imagine that Sabrina could end up being corrupted even more than Cynthia, just like with the doll. You haven't guessed the twist, don't worry, but speaking of the doll, it is an event in the past that is the big twist. It might change completely the way you look at certain characters.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD I hope you didn't get me wrong, it is a hint, but not in the way you may think of it...Roy may end up wanting to be 'king', but you think Cynthia would give up her throne as long as she lives?

Phew, so I will be surprised yesterday (I hope, it happend that I guessed things before going to sleep, lying in bed and thinking about the storys again). Hm...changing the way I think about characters...hm...that really got me interested.

Speaking of characters....my Lucian may end up really unlikeable...><

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Even better, even better... that's totally in-character for Cynthia.

It's a much longer chapter, almost as long as the first chapter. And it's in an entirely different format than any other chapter I've ever written. Plus it mainly focuses on one character. That's all the hints for today!

Lucian being unlikable? I'll have to see... as you can tell, my Lucian is pretty much Cynthia's yes-man.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD Yay, I managed to keep your characters in character! (Hopefully, I manage that for the others as well...)
'Cause, you know...this will be the trigger that starts everything in the fic...(I should stop giving hints now, too).

*.* Cool....really cool. Hm....did I ever write something that focused only on one person? Not really, except Mirrors, maybe...

He's rude, he doesn't care much about everyone (except his Cynthia) and even Sabrina describes him as emotionsless. XD Makes him pretty unlikeable...(I should *really* stop...although, Lucian's character is no real spoiler. ^^)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Okay, then it'll make sense for you to write your story in the future after I've written this 5th one. Then later I can go back and squeeze a 6th one in if I want, making it connect between the two even more.

Not totally unlikable, maybe he's just a little shy... and as long as he cares about his Cynthia, well, that's what I care about!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD!!! Hey, a story that focuses on Roy and Roxette has to take place in the future! (Plus, I so want to write a future for these two...my fingers are twitching....*.*)
LOL...well, the start of my fic depends on how you end yours. XD I have a flexible plot, though....I can start with almost every set of characters, depening on which survive. ^^

Shy? No, not at all! XD Currently, he's trying to 'kidnap' Sabrina...*lols*
And *he* cares about her. ^.^ He sure does.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I just have to spare Roy, Roxette, Melody and Cynthia, right... well, don't worry, more will be spared than that. Right now I don't feel in the "killing off" mood... if I kill someone off I know I could regret it later.

"Kidnap" Sabrina? This ought to be interesting...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

LOL Yeah, wouldn't be so bad if you spared more...otherwise, I have to make up even more characters. >>;;;;

XD Well....about this...I bring you good news again. I had a writing fit yesterday and I had an idea on how to divide Chapter 3 a bit, so the 'real' Chapter 3 will come tomorrow. ^^ There, you can read then what I mean with 'kidnapping'...0=) My Lucian's so evil....and yet, we don't know his girlfriend yet.
Second part of good news: The title for the future fic is up, as are all the chapter titles. I could tell you them, though that's up to you. After all, it *is* sorta your fic, only written by someone else. ^^
Aaaaand....I'll try something new with this fic. It will be partly a song fic, with songs woven into the plot. One of these songs is, well, Roy's theme, which I will give you now, because it's such a damn good song.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CkrzKbC9S9s (song itself, exactly the version I found and started to love)
www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/g/green_day/boulevard_of_broken_dreams.html (lyrics, and goodness, they fit the image of Roy quite well...at least my version of him. ^^;;;;)

 

[Mezase Master]

Ooh, can I join? Sabrina's my favorite female leader of all time.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

(I'm not the owner of the club, but after all the years, I think I can claim that title...) Of course you can! ^^ Welcome to the club!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Welcome to the club!

I look forward to seeing your Chapter 3. And considering you're very dedicated to writing this future fic, I better hurry up and write this current one! (That version of that song sounds so... royal, perfect for someone like him.)

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Will beta-read it myself tonight, and post it tomorrow evening (for me). ^^
You like it? Phew, that's good. ^^ I rather thought of the lyrics fitting him quite well, too, but I guess that's up to interpretation... (Though, Cynthia's possible song doesn't need interpretation XD!!!)
Ahem, review time! (of the chapter with the twist...any last minute speculation, P*A? ...no, better not. Crack ideas overflowed my mind yesterday, leading to some Chapter titles of the future fic...cough)

Title--> you're giving out too many hints. XD
Cynthia's past? OMG...something to look into for me as well, need to get her character straight for The...ehm...future fic. XD *takes notes*

"Our little princess,

*nods* Queens and kings start little. ^^

Cynthia was undefeated after two months of battling,

*cough like Giselle cough*

She went to her room, where she had her own throne to sit on, and a plastic tiara.

*coughs* I know little girls are obsessed with being princess and so (I never was, though...), but Cynthia takes that a bit far....

"I'm Cynthia, but you can just call me Princess," Cynthia responded.

"Princess," the boy responded. "I like that… I'm Lucian."

*g* You can't know that, but...great, you've found out how my Lucian and Cynthia met as well. (Libraries are attracting, aren't they? XD)

"Wouldn't it be great if you were a princess someday?" Lucian asked her.

No. (lol)

"Yes, when I grow up I want to be champion of this region, and then queen," Cynthia responded.

Big plans for an eleven year old girl...(waitasec, birthday in January? Uh oh...)

He immediately spent all of it on buying Cynthia a real crown, made of silver.

Does he know his priorities? Though...he thinks far into the future...

She kissed him on the lips.

"You keep doing things like this for me, and I'll keep giving you what you want," she said.

Lucian took this advice to heart.

Kiss - crown....hm, theoretically, Lucian lost the deal, but for a kiss from Sabrina Cynthia, I would do quite a few things, too....
*takes note* Something to remember for my fic, too.

only having lost several to visiting trainers from Kanto

....visiting Trainers from Kanto...hm....

"I'm so happy that Lucian will get to be with me in the Elite Four," she said to those awarding her the championship.

He loves her and she loves her. *wipes away a tear* Awww....
But probably only as long as he does as she wants him to do....

"Not yet," Cynthia responded. "I'm not queen yet."

"You will be," Lucian replied.

Sadly, she will indeed....

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I want to know what this song is for Cynthia...

This chapter first started out with these long ago moments of how Lucian and Cynthia met and how she was always obsessed with royalty, but as you'll see, it gets more and more involved as it goes on. I tried including everything to do with her, even flashbacks from older stories, in it.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well, right now, I have three songs I'm thinking about. Either "Getting Away with Murder" (quite dark and brutal, but fits her, except for the fac that it's sung by a man), or "I just can't wait to be king" (The song from 'Lion King' a possible duett with her son), or, modified song, original "Return of the King", I might write it into "Return of the Queen" Either one of these or I might search again for a better one. ^^
^^ I'll see.

Yet Sinnoh's league was given little recognition by the Indigo League, not even invited to the big Pokémon League tournament.

*cough because no one here know about Sinnoh back then cough XD*

"They're afraid of us."

"They should be," Cynthia replied.

Correction, they should be afraid of *you*.

It was over that period of time that she began to develop dark powers.

Maybe because of her studies...one of Sinnoh's legendaries is Dark.

"Never abuse that power."

*cough* *cough* Yeah, she definitely won't.

"I want people to recognize my royalty and respect me."

'Even if that means I have to force my will on them' ...

And you may have to use your powers to gain your rightful position."

That 'may'...I think he knows very well that it's not a 'may', but a 'will'.

Cynthia, who had trained to become more powerful than most Pokémon

O,O Just O,O

As she did, all of her vanity and obsession with royalty rubbed off on Karen.

And on Sabrina.

Someday, she promised herself, they would regret this action.

Aka the day she would warp them into nothingness.

Mr. and Mrs. Celestic (Cynthia's parents)

Town's names as family names...now, where did this happen again, too? *gg*

Mr. and Mrs. Celestic, still working with the Silph Company as they hoped to acquire their Master Balls, were yet quite concerned with the direction the company was heading. Could these Master Balls be used to steal other people's Pokémon? They were definitely against anything like that. When they found out that it was an intention of the company to make the Master Balls able to steal others' Pokémon, they threatened to leak the information to the public. However, Giovanni found out, and told his executives, Sabrina, Lt. Surge, Koga and Blaine.

*HUGE BIG LIGHT BULB POPS UP* *P*A spits out her chocolate milk* O,O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Something must be done about these people, before they ruin us," Giovanni said.

"Leave it to me," Sabrina replied.

O,O Okay, now THAT'S something I did not foresee. OMG....SO have to use that for my future fic....*scribbles down tons of notes*....argh, that way, Roy may start hating Roxette when...hm...*notes, notes, notes*

Mewtwo subsequently used its Fire Blast, Blizzard and Psychic attacks on Mr. and Mrs. Celestic, and killed them.

x.x I really did not foresee this...but heck, THAT'S one big heck of a twist. o,o....omg....and Sabrina does not even remember...ouch....when/once Cynthia tells her...ouchouchouch...
Ehm...Councidence: 1 P*A: 4 .....

Except one… Cynthia.

>.< That explains a lot. Quite a lot. Omg..... The real trigger behind her hate for Sabrina is not the one of her want for being a queen, but this....omg....

*gets over to rewrite certain points of her fic* Though if this works out in your fifth part, I just might leave it out a bit. ^^;;;;

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So this is the huge twist... Sabrina killed Cynthia's parents without knowing. Sabrina remains innocent, and there remains no excuse for what Cynthia did... but Cynthia thinks Sabrina is just as wrong as she is. Will they work it out? Possibly, but my guess is... no. Instead, their way of "working this out" may just be going into an all-out battle... or Sabrina perhaps feeling the guilt for it... we'll see.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I admit, you completely got me there. o,o Never thought that...
Innocent? I tend to disagree....kinda, Sabrina IS guilty for that murder. It's her own fault of getting involved with Team Rocket....
LOL *gets psychologist's couch out again* *puts on beard* Okay, my two ladies, now, we will try to work this out in a peaceful, nice and...*the couch is ripped apart by two psychic blasts hitting each other*...friendly way. ...*sweatdrops*
(Offtopic: I think I got a song for Lucian& Roy....but that song is pretty useless for you without context....)

"You and your sister will have to live with us now."

You know, so far you haven't meantioned her sister...what happened to her?

because there's no one strong enough to at least have his or her mind linked - not even you."

Hm, theoretically, this means that at least at this point, Sabrina was stronger than Cynthia.

Cynthia could not take it anymore, living in such a small house with her sister and her grandparents. This was not a life fit for a queen. She started spending more time away from her home, until she eventually moved in with Lucian in his apartment at the Sinnoh League.

She's 22 now, I think that's old enough for moving out.

"I hate her!" Cynthia exclaimed. "I hate her, hate her, hate her! I will never forgive her! Someday I will sit on my throne as queen, while taking my revenge on her! She will never get away with this!"

She stays pretty true to her words....ouch.

but she ended up regaining her memory while in the midst of trying to kill her own parents, in the same exact way.

Wait, does that mean she remembers now? Or doesn't she? I'm confused....

"She thinks she's the strongest psychic in the world, yet she needs my help. How pitiful."

Hmpf. >> She only wanted help for poor Liza...

I'll challenge her to a Pokémon battle and lose on purpose

*wants to hit something hard* She lost on purpose?!?!?!?!?!

You also think you're a more powerful psychic than me, Cynthia stated.

I don't just think that; that's the truth, Sabrina responded.

You're mistaken, Cynthia stated. There is no more powerful psychic than me.

*hits herself* Why didn't I pay that more attention back then? Okay, who should have known that Cynthia become the villain later? I was even happy you made her psychic...*sighs*
Hm...but since Cynthia was already a darkling back then....I don't think there was any need for her to check Sabrina's psychic powers, as Cynthia's dark powers would have canceled that out.

Reading Sabrina's mind, it was clear to Cynthia that she had no powers other than her psychic ones, and no intention on trying to attack her. This was a bit disappointing to Cynthia, who was partially hoping that Sabrina would attack her, allowing her the opportunity to take revenge. But that moment never happened.

You're desparate, girl. >>

Shirona, Will said, seeing the woman next to Sabrina.

You're Will, Sabrina's boyfriend, Cynthia replied.

So what, Lucian's your boyfriend too...wait, both of them have psychic elite trainers as boyfriend...lol....what a coincidence...*coughs*

she was afraid that Sabrina had some sort of trap set for her,

As if. *rolls eyes*

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

You're right, Sabrina did get herself involved with Team Rocket, but if you remember how she became part of Team Rocket, it was because Giovanni used his Mewtwo's powers outside her gym to "convince" her... she never did on her own. So it's still not her fault. And when I say she regained her memory, I do not mean that she remembered killing Cynthia's parents, only that she remembered that she did not want to be a member of Team Rocket.

That story is a lot more interesting when going back and looking at it in this context, isn't it? It was kind of boring at the time, at least by comparison.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Hm, well, I guess it's my kind of morality that says she's guilty, but then, this twist leaves us open to quite some story ideas, doesn't it? After all, Cynthia could force her son to take revenge, and that not only on Sabrina...

Well, for me, it's a bit confusing for me, as I have to re-fit all these things into the plot, but it is more interesting that way.

"Team Galactic has crazy ideas, like awakening legendary Pokémon," Lucian commented. "Why not convince them to attempt to awaken one of them, knowing full well that you can stop them, but force Sabrina to come over here and help us?"

"Perfect," Cynthia responded. "That's exactly what I'll do."

These two sure have weird plans...

"Giselle? Who is she?" she asked Lucian.

"The Indigo League champion," Lucian replied. "I don't know, she must be pretty good."

lol now she fell into her own trap...and Giselle's Indigo's biggest airhead, btw. ^^

with Cyrus utterly confused on why Cynthia was against him

I don't know why, but this reminds me of the second episode with Cynthia, you know, the one where she and Cyrus are all too buddy-like...

"You and your executives will obey my orders and do whatever I say.

Or you'll be sucked into black holes. *nods*

Fantina shocked everyone with two wins in the tournament, but the only other one to win a match was Cynthia, who won four matches before ending up against Giselle in the semifinals.

I guess Fantina's pretty strong, too.^^

A semifinal loss did not prove anything to the Indigo League, who continued to look down upon the Sinnoh League.

To tell the truth, a semifinal loss is not much indeed....

Sabrina could be killed in front of thousands of people in the ultimate act of revenge for her deeds.

Not to mention in front of her husband...;.;

"You're going to have to show them your power," Lucian told Cynthia.

"By… killing them?" Cynthia asked. "Lucian, if I do that I'll never be accepted as a queen by the people."

Hm, so it's Lucian who convinced her to kill...quite interesting.

Maybe… if I convince Sabrina that I'm innocent, Kanto will have their most powerful psychic believing a lie and feeding right into our plan.

Though, that did not went as wanted...

She was forced to kill a dozen security guards in a black hole, her second direct killings in her life.

It's surprising that it's only her second...and that it doesn't seem to have that much influence on her soul.

Sabrina stayed out of the big fight led by Cynthia's former pupil Karen, and thus Cynthia missed out on a second chance to kill her most hated rival.

Maybe then she should have stayed out of the fight as well?

(March 3, 2009)

Cynthia gave birth to her son Roy

0=) *innocent smile* If he ever wants to blame someone for his birthday...

(Today - March 12, 2009)

*lol* I didn't know it's the 12th already...or is that a way for you to slow down the updating now...0=)

So what if she was a murderer, she thought; so was Sabrina.

Hard to be blunt, but Cynthia's right.

affects my conscience.

Hm...so it does have influence on her soul...I wonder in which way.

But it's all been in the quest to see Sabrina be brought to justice for her crimes. And she will, no matter what.

I wonder if that was worth it...and hasn't Sabrina already suffered enough by now?

0=) May I ask about the next chapter? Already written or still in progress?

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

The next chapter is in fact written, it's an obvious bridge to the next one. It was necessary to continue the plot, but it wasn't that fun of a chapter. I was forced to spend some time with the minor characters who take up time and space... only joking, they're necessary too. There's a little romantic scene with Sabrina and Will in it, at least. You'll mainly remember it for one brutal scene, possibly the most violent yet.

I find your opinions on Sabrina really interesting... now if she's a murderer, and so is Cynthia... who's really the better of the two? Is it possible for Cynthia to be redeemed if we assume Sabrina already has been? This should make for some good possibilities.

Also 3/12 was chosen as a rather random date, not any in particular, but as it turns out it makes 3/15 a rather important date...