Sabrina Fanclub

[Psychic*Absol]

^^ Okay then. Hm...I have started my Chapter 4 as well, and I can say, that's where the action starts. (Not to mention that you'll LOVE Chapter 3...it has Lucian and Cynthia, both hints for and against Snazzyshipping, and....royalty. Mentioned by Lucian. You'll love it. 0=) )

lol, I know these kinds of characters, these little annoying bugs that keep on popping up even though you want to squash them....ehm, no, I'm not sadistic in any way. 0=)
(One of my German readers once said if me and my characters even meet, they're going to murder me brutally. I agreed.)
>>;;; If it's AGAIN a violent scene with Cynthia &Sabrina, I'll report you to the cruelty to fanfic characters association. XD!

You know...I'm still searching for a song for Cynthia, but after finishing last chapter, I know I'll have to include "Getting Away with Murder" somehow. Afte all, now it fits both Sabrina & Cynthia, doesn't it? (Now, where are the lyrics again...)

*g* *gets out the ballons and cakes and presents and everything* You know which date is today? 0=)
(Hm, three days later...hm, hm...and it's a sunday lol)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I'm looking forward to reading your story... and for once Cynthia isn't beating up on Sabrina in this chapter.

Today's Roxette's birthday... well, not even her 1st birthday, just the actual day she was born... and Tuesday will be Roy's birthday... so let's wish them well and hope they don't follow their parents' footsteps!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

(Heck, I thought you would never come online! XD)
Currently still beta-reading, but almost finished. ^^
Not? o,o Whoa, what kept her up? A hurricane? Though, even that wouldn't stop Cynthia...heck, even the apocalypse wouldn't stop her...

*nods* Exactly what I meant. ^^ And will they follow their parents' footsteps? Won't they? 0=) Hm, well, we'll see, we'll see...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

We don't want either of them to become murderers... or maybe we do, if that makes the story all that much better! That'll be in your hands, though.

Oh, and I forgot that there's one line Cynthia says that might make you panic at the end of Chapter 6.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

(posted next chapter, in case you didn't notice)

0=) I thought about killing people in that fic...it may even be Roy commiting a murder, I'm not sure right now. Too clichéd.

Nice that you warn me before *sarcasm*.

Chapter title= Me o,O ....and a good lot of o,o;;;; aka fear, too.

She sent all of the gym leaders to Cerulean City,

See?!?! SEE?!?!?! Misty, I was right, your town is in danger!!!
Ahem. Coincidence: 1 P*A: 5 *ggg*

with Byron to keep a close eye on Candice and Fantina to make sure they would not turn on their own again.

Will that work? I doubt it.

However, the police could not do anything to stop them, as they attacked with a barrage of Pokémon, overpowering Officer Jenny's troops in no time.

Kanto's police must be pretty...weak. Weak and *cough* stupid.

Notably, Candice and Fantina held back from using their Pokémon, but were ignored by Byron as he aggressively used his Steel Pokémon to attack the city.

Told you so. *nods*

and was interrupted by a man who had no idea who she was.

Is that even possible anymore? Someone not knowing her?

Cynthia replied innocently.

You know, I kinda miss her innocence. *sarcasm*

"Have them? Why, they belong to the museum!" the man replied.

Not anymore. 0=)

She then extended her arm and swept it from right to left. As she did, everything in the entire town was reduced to rubble, at the mere extension of her arm.

O,O When I considered the song "God is a Girl" for her, I didn't know how right I would turn out....

Candice then signaled to Fantina to make their move. They jumped to Misty's side and released their Pokémon, beginning to fight against the other Sinnoh gym leaders. Quickly they knocked out all of the Sinnoh leaders' Pokémon.

*foxyay* *cheers for the two* Originally, my favourite Sinnoh leader was Volkner, but now, that may change *snicker*.

"What is wrong with you?"

-_- Correct question is: What is wrong with you?

"Don't you fear Queen Cynthia?"

...this may be foolish (and brave) to say, but I wouldn't fear her either. Fear only makes you weak and there's one thing that you don't need when you battle someone as powerful as her....

"Destroying the land of Kanto is not the right thing to do!"

Not to mention that there's no reason to destroy it...aside from a personal grudge...

"No, but it's the smart thing to do," a voice said.

Ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch.

...I might overdo myself with reviewing...*g*

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Okay, I'll make sure I read your new chapter soon.

I've thought of lots of good ideas for the upcoming chapters, just you wait and see... and Cynthia's no god, she's just really, really powerful...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

She comes pretty close to god, actually. >> Now, if she were immortal...

"I see you failed me again, all of you,"

But two of them...

"What use do I have for any of you?"

None, I suppose.

"No, you're not! I know you're just lying," Cynthia replied. "Perhaps you would like to know what happens to those who disobey me."

They get kicked around roughly for quite a while, almost die and then get their own dark powers...*ggg*

"No, no, I change… I help you now," Fantina protested.

I doubt that. Not that I'm unhappy about it, either...

"I can sense that you are telling the truth," Cynthia responded.

Hmpf, French sucks. *g*

"As for Candice, you can go ahead and kill her, Lucario."

O,O You said you were not in a killing mood...

Finally she passed out, and Lucario gave her a kick as he walked away.

You said you were not in a killing mood!

knowing that in Candice's final moments of consciousness, she began to wish that she had obeyed Cynthia all along.

...and you told the truth. XD Now, where did I see this scene before? And is there a name for Candice x Fantina yet?

"Don't be afraid," Sabrina said. "I won't use these on you."

*g* As long as you don't annoy me.

"Are you sure?" Will replied.

No. *g*

"Am I sure? What are you talking about?" Sabrina asked. "Of course I'm sure!"

Sabrina sure is over confident.

"Well, I was just worried that if they were to get out of control…"

P*A says nothing, but smiles to herself.

"Will, I'd rather be sucked into my own black hole than to kill you or Roxette by mistake. I'll be very careful," Sabrina said.

Awwwwww....though, if she really wants to be careful, why are these two even watching her? XD She should rather train on her own then... (okay, Roxy can't walk yet, but still...Will should keep an eye on her.)

Her propaganda campaign would start with a television broadcast.

She sure has good agents. *g*

"We're Team ROCKET - as in Riot Or Cynthia Kills Every Trainer.

...I am *so* close to bursting out with laughter and I'm actually crying to keep the laughs away, because I know, if I start laughing now, this review will have to stop here for some whi- *breaks out with laughter*........

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So you like the little Will x Sabrina scene from this chapter? I couldn't feature them much, but I got them in for a little bit of time. As for Candice, I have a different pairing in mind for her... don't jump the gun on my shippings! (Oh, does that give away that she doesn't die? Well, you probably guessed that already.)

That idea for "ROCKET" being an acronym came from the manga's "Raid On the City, Knock-out Evil Tusks"... I though it would make sense for Karen to disguise Team Rocket's name in an acronym. As bad as the one I made is, I don't think it's quite as bad as the one from the manga.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

^^ I love it. (In the context of the end of the chapter, though...><) Though I think it's a bit careless for Sabrina to train in front of the baby, like I already said...it's still so cute. ^^

XD!! It's incredible funny...I laughed out so loud there...I mean, who's stupid enough NOT to figure this out?!?

"And she'll attack your hometown next!" Karen exclaimed. "Don't wait - join Team Rocket before it's too late!

*shakes head* She sounds like this finger pointing guy in American TV..you know, that one with the "The army wants YOU" or something...lol
BTW...any ship planned for Karen?

"Not again," Silver complained.

Karen is desparate, after all...

"Why do you always get me into these things?"

That's what women do. *g*

"Why would she go after Johto?" Gold questioned.

Well, if Sabrina or Roxette end up in Johto, then, maybe...

Her innocent looks had been ruined - she now looked like a mess.

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I for myself think scars are cool. ^^

"I'm just going to have to resign as a gym leader… I can't do what Queen Cynthia wants me to do."

You really think that's a solution? >>

"Maybe we move… move to Kanto," Fantina suggested.

And you think you're save there? *coughcough*

If only someone would rescue her…

Ah! *lightbulb*

"It beats me," Lance said. "Besides, I couldn't convince those trainers to help me before, why would they suddenly run to her now?"

Maybe because she has her own TV show? *gggggggg*

we'll need our heroine Giselle to rescue us again… as if that's what we really want," Lance sighed.

LOL!!!!! No, that's not really what we want...
*sighs* To keep Giselle in character, I'll have to have her win many tournaments, too. It hurts me, but it has to be done...except, maybe, for one, or two...0=)

enjoying another romantic moment together.

YET another. *giggles* Now you know how you inspired me...

"All but one thing… we don't have Sabrina dead," she said. "I want her dead before we get married."

O,O

Simply sucking her off the face of the earth would not be enough… she's caused me so much pain, I want her to suffer every bit of it before she dies. I want her to beg me for mercy as I kill her… I want her to express every bit of remorse, while I absolutely refuse her forgiveness."

O,O;;;; ehm, CPF, you think you're right in this club? (is there even a Cynthia fanclub? If not, why not? XD)

Just go ahead and kill her tomorrow.

So that's why the 15th is an important date...>>;;; Great, next chapter will kill off yet another life of mine. How many do half-kitties have again?

"But wait - she has a daughter now, doesn't she?"

O,O;;;;;;; No you just did not steal my plot did you?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

"You wouldn't show mercy on her daughter, would you?"

O,O!!!!!!!!!!!!

we could take her daughter as our own," Cynthia replied. "The girl would never know."

O,O That's even more whicked that just killing her...omg, I hate Cynthia so much right now.
Not to mention...if this really happens...I hate you to, CPF. For my plot's down the drain then. >>;;;;;;

but why not let me do the honors with Will?" Lucian asked.

Lol the old Will- Lucian, Sabrina- Cynthia...which will continue in the future

"Tomorrow, Sabrina and her husband die, and leave their daughter to us.

Tomorrow, P*A will lose yet another life...
Too funny that *in real life*, Roy isn't even born yet. *g*

As I lost my real parents, so will she

With the teeny, weeny difference that she is two weeks old while your were over TWENTY when that happened. >>;;; Now, who needs her real parents more?

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So I guess it was more than one line... yeah, Cynthia's so cruel. I said before that this is the Sabrina/Cynthia fanclub, and again you see my love for Cynthia. But does that mean she's going to kill off Sabrina (again)? You'll see... in fact, we'll see because I haven't written it yet. Hopefully I get the chance tomorrow morning to write it before you get on, because I probably won't be able to tonight.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Nah, well, more like one line expanded. ^^
I only imagined this plot (with other characters, though) in my darkest dreams, most ending with the child either going against the 'new' parents or something else keeping it from staying happy with them.
CPF, you better be careful now what you're doing with the plot. Not only because you may torture my poor, innocent soul again (that's what will happen anyways, we need a Sabrina - Cynthia showdown), but if you do the wrong thing...I have to find a new plot. >>;;;;

*yawns* I'm writing Chapter 4 right now. Lots of action actually happening. ^^ And because I'm too lazy to reply to the other thread right now... you were right about one thing. The relationship of Lucian & Cynthia in public and the one they have when they are alone are very different. ^^ Though that's not the only interesting thing there...
I'm surprised you haven't noticed the little hints about Will I included...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Don't worry, I won't ruin your plot. You don't know how much I've wrestled over Cynthia's morality... it comes down to whether I want my story to end with some WAFF (warm and fuzzy feelings) or whether I want you to write an evil Cynthia. When it comes to killing off characters, I'm not in a killing mood... but didn't Cynthia say that too?

Karen seems to like Will, there's definitely something going on there. In addition Cynthia seems to like him as well, but probably not too much. (I thought you'd notice by now my pairing for Karen is with Bruno, a bizarre pairing to be sure... so bizarre I don't think it has a name yet.)

 

[Psychic*Absol]

...you don't know how much you could ruin my plot. I may have brought up too many little things here and there that need to stay.
...o,o No more evil Cynthia?!?! ...*mind repeats 'does not work, does not work, does not work'* See, that's how much you've influenced me by now!!!!!

>>;;; I won't believe you/ Cynthia anything anymore until I read proof.

0=) Well....that thing with Will & Karen is completely right. One of the spoiler pairings is...Masakudoshipping, Will & Karen. ^.^
And Cynthia..well, that's just her kind of speaking. She likes to adress people with phrases like "cutie, sweety, handsome", etc. It's not actually Will she has a thing for...
And there's still something about Will 'we' need to find out.
I did notice that. (After all, they're all of Team Rocket that's left) It's just...that pairing is too weird for my taste, so, I secretly hoped there would be another.
Though, that makes up an interesting thing for my future fic...fighting + dark= ????

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I really appreciate that you've gone all the way out of your way to take close note of all the little things. Coming up next chapter, I am actually going to go all the way out on a limb and give a character a name. That's right, for like the first time in the history of my fanfics, I will name a character who previously existed but did not have a name. Who could that possibly be? (Hint: female)

I really thought it was cute how Sabrina went and consoled Will, although I was surprised Will was that offended. I mean, he's a man, he shouldn't get his feelings hurt that badly. Well, maybe I'd be like that myself.

Okay, so no WAFF, you want Cynthia evil. But doesn't that mean her getting away with murder(s)? Of course, if you think about it, Janine has gotten away with a lot, too.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

*sweatdrops* I only started taking notes, CPF. I only have notes of the first ten chapters (!!!) so far....>.< Originally, I wanted to go through ten chapters a day, but that proved to be a bit...ehm, too much. XD
Hm..female...could it be...did I ask about this character, before?
(If it's the one I assume, then, bad luck, CPF. I already named her. XD!!!!)

Will has a reason to be offended. He really has. And, at least from my point of view, it's understandable that he kept it away from Sabrina. And no, nothing to do with Team Rocket before you ask. XD

Hey, hey, where did I say I want evil Cynthia? Truth is, I need evil Cynthia. >>;;;;
*gives you link* https://www.dapslyrics.com/display.php?sid=7426
Not all of the lines fit Cynthia, but there's one that just hits the point. XD (hint fourth one hint)
Hm, for Janine, I would more call it Revenge, though....

 

[Crystal-Heart]

A Sabrina/Natsume Club? May I join? Please?
=^.^=

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Of course you may. ^^ Welcome to the club! Have fun here!
Whoa, the second new member in a few days...we're getting better. ...we should keep these chatting posting seasons up, CPF. Maybe we can even convince Zammy to join...just have to find another topic, then. XD!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Welcome to the club!

We've sort of exploded in posts over the last week... we were under 1500, and now we're almost at 1700... of course Sabrina can thank Cynthia for her newfound popularity of her club.

If you named Cynthia's sister, who I was going to name, I need to know her name now. Then we'll see if we agree on the name...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD I see that...we both have exploded in posts, too.
(Okay, okay, I might think about renaming this the Sabrina&Cynthia fanclub...but only if I don't open a Cynthia club myself)

Coincidence: 1, P*A: 6 *g* Exactly. I've named her Diane, for the fact that Cynthia is one of the many names of that goddess (check her bulbapedia entry for further information).

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Now if you open a Cynthia club, where will we talk about our fanfics at? Then again, people might think we're really strange for having a club featuring two "never-met" characters... but people probably think the two of us are strange already. (Alakazam included!)

Figures you'd guess that... I'm not a big fan of the letter "D" (seriously, it's a strange-but-true fact about me), but D comes after C, and she came after Cynthia... though wouldn't it be Diana? (I know, same thing...)