Sabrina Fanclub

[Psychic*Absol]

...>> She's one of the best villain's I have seen so far and that's saying alot, knowing that I know Voldemort and stuff...

Ouch. Ouch. I read farther and...just ouch.

"What can I ever do to make up to you?"

Wrong question to ask.

"No, Queen Cynthia!" Sabrina yelled. "Please! I have a daughter, she can't grow up without parents!"

o,o I feared that Cynthia would force Sabrina to give Roxette to her, but thankfully, that didn't happen (yet).
(Now my ever knowing MP3-Player is playing 'Pray'...*sweatdrops*)

"My little sister has!" Cynthia shouted. "She has been forced to live as an orphan thanks to your murders!"

>>;; Well, first, Diane was way older, and second, she still had her sister who apparently didn't care so much about her sister because she didn't even try to take her with her and give her a better life.
Roxette is, I repeat, fourteen days old and only has grandparents, no siblings (yet). >> So, who's more unlucky?

"I'll do anything you want… please just allow me to live… for my daughter's sake."

;.; This is so...sad and cute and sweet and...everything.

"Your daughter can live with me!" Cynthia yelled. "She can have new parents!"

...I hate her.

Lucario threw Sabrina over on to her stomach, then cut his sharp claws into her back in an X, completely slashing apart her back. Sabrina screamed out in immense agony as blood flew through the air.

x.x (I know this smiley is ironic, yet it fits my mood.)

"Now… slash her throat and end her life," Cynthia demanded.

o,o!!!

He was just about to kill her when he found himself being held back by a Jynx.

*falls on her knees* I love you, Will!!! *gets poked by Zammy* XD

"My Pokémon defeated most of his… all but that dreadful Jynx."

Hmpf, and for a second I thought Will had managed to defeat him.
Though...Sabrina and Will have quite a good bond betwen them. Will always knows when she's in trouble. ^,^

then kissed the Fighting/Steel Pokémon.

Why do I have to snicker at this?
(Because if this is the way Jynx defeated Lucian's Pokemon...no, no more thinking about that. XD!)

Jynx picked up the bloody mess that was Sabrina's body.

Either Sabrina is Catwoman in disguise (you know, nine lives) or she is seriously immortal. (*snickers* There can only be one.)

Will looked up to Cynthia with tears in his eyes. "How could you do this to her?" he cried. "You're a murderer!"

"So is your wife," Cynthia replied.

The only thing is...Sabrina has killed your parents when she was not in control of her mind, and you killed over 200 persons (right? I lost count...) when you were in complete control...

Suddenly Diane came running into the room holding Roy.

x.x Does that little girl (+ baby) have to see all the blood?
Though, when I think of what kind of boy Roy will grow up into

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

An absolutely brutal part to write. Sabrina's back getting slashed apart pushed this story into "extremely violent." Yet, thanks to Will getting there in time, she survives again. But what will she be like after finding out about those murders? Will she be able to live with herself? I fear I've tortured her too much, yet it only continues...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I can imagine. o,o I don't know if I should like your rating anymore or not.
(Oh, you spoiled me, I didn't know she would survive! XD)
Hm, hm...I guess I'll have to see. I think she'll be pretty down for some time, now. After all, I guess from her point of view, Cynthia know has a reason to hate and kill- NOT KILL, NOT KILL her....
It only continues...argh, what will the next chapters bring to us me? ><

There was no doubt to her… Sabrina clearly was lying.

Proof, my dear queen?

"Not only is she a murderer, but a liar," Cynthia added.

That's what you think, and you have to proof it.

"It's because she's inherently evil," Lucian explained. "There are some people in this world with no morals… they kill and feel no regrets.

o,o I almost fell out of my chair reading this...does Lucian know he speak more likely about his future wife than Sabrina?

I've read many books about fictional characters like her, but now we see a real-life version."

*giggles* Fictional characters talking about fictional characters...

"Mark my words, even if she survives those wounds, I will kill her," Cynthia stated. "Next time, she won't be so lucky to be tortured first… she will die immediately."

...Sabrina has nine lives, you know that...and if it's lucky to get tortured first...
And there's still Will. ^^

Not even extreme punishment of her parents' murderer would satisfy Diane; only the knowing that the murderer was dead would be enough to console her.

Hm....hm...for a fourteen-year old, she's sure cruel...yet...hm....*evil smile*

Now you've left me with a cliffhanger yet again. >>;;;

 

[Crystal-Heart]

My fav. Sabrina is the new one that they made for FireRed/LeafGreen.

Though, I colored her to resemble the colors she was drawn in GSC.

As I said, I'd happily join the Cynthia Club if one is made. She's awesome.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Oops, I forgot the chapter wasn't over after your last review. Lucian perfectly describes Cynthia in what he says, yet he's totally blinded by his love for her (or could it be something else that blinds him?). Anyway, the next chapter is written, and it doesn't involve nearly as much blood, action or violence, just some fuzziness from Will and a shipping. It will be the chapter after that where I introduce a different twist which I think is going to finally even up the playing field, so to speak. (Meaning, Sabrina won't be the only one with problems.)

That looks really good! I'm not the biggest fan of that Sabrina (she looks too much like a random Rocket to me), but I really like your coloring job!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Hm not only blinded by her love? That makes me interested...
Awwwww...fuzziness? Awww....Psychicshipping FTW!!!! ^^ That's going to be so cute!
A new shipping or an old one? ^^
Hm, who of the group needs problems? If I were to be biased, I would say Cynthia, but then...

I'm going to try to read the next ten chapters now..or less...I have to take notes, after all. ^^

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

A new shipping in the next chapter, and then... oh, I won't give it away. But it should be fun to write.

Are you talking about my most recent story, or a different one? I don't know how much there is to keep track of with Sabrina in my original story...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Hm, I have an idea about one part of the shipping, yet...

I'm talking about Love, War and Games. ^^ After all, Sabrina, Will and the two Sinnoh psychics (and the kids) are not the only ones that appear in my future fic...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

It's Candice, of course. Put up another one on the scoreboard...

Oh, so you're making it about more than just Sabrina's family and Cynthia's family? Awesome... but my first two fics are written so poorly in comparison to my other two... so good luck trudging through them.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Haha, I was right!!! Okay, not that hard to guess.

Of course. 0=) At first, I said only Melody has to survive, but by now, I have quite a character group up...let's see...Giselle and Joe, Karen and Bruno, Erica, Liza...and their kids. ^^ So I have to keep quite a few people in character.
Not to mention that it's cute retro-reading the beginning of Will& Sabrina's relationship.
I may use that for Roy&Roxette...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

What does that make it now, Coincidence: 1, P*A: 7?

I was actually going to kill off two of those characters, just... because. But now they'll have to survive, because they actually now have more of a purpose. I guess I've killed off enough people through my past stories.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Eh, no, I think it was too obvious. 0=)

o,o Really? Who? (if you can answer). After all, I could write it around some of these characters, but it might get difficult...
You have? Hm, I need to count again...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Well, I was thinking that if anyone should die, it would be Karen and Bruno. But by all means, use them, they don't have to die. I've killed off Pryce, Koga, Blaine, Giovanni, several Officer Jennys... oh, and three Sinnoh Elite.

Anyway, the inner struggle of Sabrina is a huge part of next chapter... Will tries to help her out of it.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well, I can't say I haven't thought of that, on my list of possibly killed people, Karen was the number one.
But sadly, I think I need her and Team Rocket AND her kids for the future fic...
...that's going to be epic, now that I think of it. XD! It's going to have quite an epic battle in the end...one that could top Sabrina vs. Cynthia...could...0=)

Awww....just awwww. ^^ Will loves her so much, doesn't he? I'm sure he helps her out. ...I wanted to write 'in the same way Lucian helps out Cynthia', but that would get a bit too far. XD!!!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I'm going to have to leave my entire story unresolved, the way things are going. Otherwise, I'll ruin everything for you, won't I?

Yeah, I wouldn't say that... Lucian knows what Cynthia wants and he gives it to her, so he can get what he wants. Will has a much deeper love for Sabrina than that.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

*sweatdrops* I'm sorry about that. Yet, it's hard to write a plot when you don't know how the 'prequel' ends.
I already said, I could tell you the plot, then, theoretically, it would be easier for both of us, but sadly, it would also spoil all the fun. >>;;;

*nods* I said their relationsships are similar, yet very different in a way. The one of Cynthia and Lucian is...shallow and someone not balanced out. Sabrina and Will's is more relaxed and just better, I guess. ^^ At least Sabrina wouldn't cut Will's head off if he did something wrong...
Remember when Will 'forced' her to join Team Rocket, and then, everything kinda failed? I don't think Cynthia would have forgiven Lucian if the same had been the case with these two...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

*sweatdrops* I'm sorry about that. Yet, it's hard to write a plot when you don't know how the 'prequel' ends.
I already said, I could tell you the plot, then, theoretically, it would be easier for both of us, but sadly, it would also spoil all the fun. >>;;;

It would be a big spoiler... but I sort of want to know it anyway... I don't know whether you should tell me it or not.

*nods* I said their relationsships are similar, yet very different in a way. The one of Cynthia and Lucian is...shallow and someone not balanced out. Sabrina and Will's is more relaxed and just better, I guess. ^^ At least Sabrina would cut Will's head off if he did something wrong...
Remember when Will 'forced' her to join Team Rocket, and then, everything kinda failed? I don't think Cynthia would have forgiven Lucian if the same had been the case with these two...

There will be some development to Cynthia and Lucian's relationship... one way or another (either it gets better or it gets worse, wait and see).

I almost forgot about that... Sabrina was forgiving... a lot thanks to Erika (with a "k"!!!).

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Hm...maybe I can think of a basic plotline that doesn't tell you too much...of course without telling you the end...

Development? Hm, sounds interesting. ^^ (Especially because my couple needs some development, too, as you have noticed...) I'll look in both directions for development, may it be good or bad. XD
XD! Yup, she forgave him. Would Cynthia do the same? I doubt it.
(Yes, I will write it Erika in the future fic. >>;;;)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Hm...maybe I can think of a basic plotline that doesn't tell you too much...of course without telling you the end...

Well of course not the end, not even much besides the beginning. I just want to know what direction I need to push things in... do things get out of control in the Pokemon world, or do things settle down? After all, we're talking about a murderous queen possibly being in power for over a decade...

Development? Hm, sounds interesting. ^^ (Especially because my couple needs some development, too, as you have noticed...) I'll look in both directions for development, may it be good or bad. XD
XD! Yup, she forgave him. Would Cynthia do the same? I doubt it.

Sabrina is in reality a forgiving person, except maybe to herself (*hint*).

(Yes, I will write it Erika in the future fic. >>;;;)

Thank you so much!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well...the beginning...that was actually the part that gave me the whole idea. Put into spoilers for anyone who might stumble over this and read it by accident. XD

Spoiler:

You remember when you said there would be a new country and I first guessed 'Orre'? Well, that's where the story starts. Cynthia has fled (or gone there on her own will 0=) ) to Orre, joined and made herself head of Team Cipher, which was quite easy due to her powers, then she simply overthrew the whole country of Orre, making herself the Queen of Orre. Kanto is not affect by this. So far.

*gets hint* ^.~ Well, I already supposed it would be hard for herto forgive herself, earlier chapters proved this.

Lol, how do you write Loreley again? *g*