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Sabrina Fanclub

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*g* Ah, so at least I did not forget her original pair.
Yep, very interesting to develop. She can only get better after what she did..>>

...hey, I'm not your only reviewer! XD Though it's nice that you write for me...I usually write for myself only, excluding that future fic, though. (Though, even that might turn out to be a writing for myself fic, as I have the one and only chance to write the character's future! XD)

Ehm, getting back on topic, somehow?
 
Well, of course, I write for myself too, but mainly for you. And if I get any other readers, that's a big bonus.

How about this: what do you think Sabrina thinks of Kiyo and the Fighting Dojo?
 
^.^ Thanks. Now, if the story were as I wished, and wouldn't contain Sabrina torture every second chapter, I would be even happier. *g*

What she thinks of them? Well, probably very lowly, if she defeated them for their gym leader status. That and psychics and fighters never really get along, at least in my fandom. The triangle Psychic- Dark- Fighting doesn't reall work out there.
 
I do have a Dark trainer (Karen) getting along with a Fighting trainer (Bruno), but I can't think of any other cases where two of those three get along, except in the two cases of the Psychic/Dark trainers Cynthia and Sabrina.
 
I do have a Dark trainer (Karen) getting along with a Fighting trainer (Bruno), but I can't think of any other cases where two of those three get along, except in the two cases of the Psychic/Dark trainers Cynthia and Sabrina.
First, that's your fanfic *ggg* and second....Cynthia and Sabrina...getting along....ahem...only in an AU, as Zammy likes to say. *g*
Though if you mean getting along as in having both powers...don't forget Cyrus! *g*
And certain other characters...
 
Yeah, I meant Dark-type Cynthia getting along with Psychic Lucian... situations like that. (Sorry, won't be on much today, big basketball day here in America.)
 
Well, Lucian and Cynthia is a very, very special case. For once, I doubt your Sabrina would get along with fighters. (Though first she didn't get along with darklings at all, and now she's one herself...how things can change...)
Okay. ^^ I guess the review belongs to the other club. ^.~
 
A very special case indeed. And you're right, Sabrina probably wouldn't get along with fighters very much... her friends are mostly psychic.

Warning: saddest chapter ever today. I probably won't be online, so please review it all at once. And even if a certain character dies, don't give up on my fanfic... please...
 
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XD!!! Very special case...a one-of-a-kind case, I guess.
In your fic, certainly. In my fic...well, she's also kinda friends with Erica and Misty...

...........do I even need to comment anymore?....>> CPF, once you've reached the end of my list of lives, teh Absol won't be here anymore. No more reviews, understood? I can only survive so many Sabrina-half deaths. ><
I won't give up...yet. I'll give up if you haven't revived Sabrina by chapter 20 or so. (Hey, I can look into the future! I know he'll have her killed off in this chapter! Aren't I great? *sarcasm*)
You want a review, you get it.
Title...yay. *cough* Starts out good, doesn't it??! *blackest sarcasm yet*
Poor Will was helpless – stuck in dark mist, he could do nothing but wait for someone to rescue him… but that person was not coming.
knowing Liza, she'll appear in the very last second before he is forced to say 'yes'....
"Once I put this on your finger, you are officially married to me," Erika told him.
Ehm, just by the way...doesn't he need to be divorced before?!
But suddenly a Medicham appeared, punching Will to the ground and destroying the dark mist.
Coincidence: 2: P*A: 8 *g*
And...ouch. >< Has Liza started to copy Lucian??!
"Will's already married, in case you didn't know."
What I said. ^^
"Love goes deeper than those prison walls, and you know it!"
Awwww...^.^ Girl, you know something about love, finally!
Will struggled to get up from the ground after being punched so hard. "Liza, was that really necessary?" he asked.

Liza giggled. "Maybe, maybe not," she replied.
....Liza HAS started copying Lucian...
The people that Erika invited to the wedding apparently had no idea that Erika was trying to marry a man who was already married.
Idiots
"Would you… help me restore myself?" Erika asked.

"I will," Todd replied.
Erica x Todd? Whoah, great pairing ^.^. ...allow me to give them two sons *ggg*.
She found her way to Sabrina's prison cell, where she pushed the dark mist aside and teleported inside.
....*whistles* CPF.....you really want to kill off yet another life of mine. *whistles*
Was Cynthia about to kill her?
Yep.
That question is kinda stupid, I mean, how big are the chances she wants to have a friendly tea party with you? *sarcasm*
Was it even worth trying to escape anymore?
Considering you still have a husband and a daughter out there...yes. VERY YES.
"I ask one thing of you, murderer," Cynthia stated. "Drop to your knees and bow."
...Cynthia's obsessed with bowing.
"I have a daughter to raise… for her sake, please show me mercy and allow me to live the rest of my life in this prison."
Considering how you may not even be allowed to see them anymore, it's technically rather Will and Liza who'll have to raise her.
The green-haired psychic thought about her daughter and Will as the black hole began to engulf her.

Will… I love you and Roxette more than anything, Sabrina thought.
...I love/hate you. Love you for the fact that you made this so damn romantic and sad, hate you for the fact that you again torture me.
Just remember...the more you anger me, the more I might torture YOU in the future fic. 0=)
Will stood by, just watching the battle. He had offered to help Liza, but she refused his help, wanting to win the battle by herself – and she had.
*eyebrow twitches* Aren't you making Liza a bit too powerful? (And Will too weak?)
leaving Cynthia to face Liza and Will.
Ouch. I don't even want to read the scene where Will gets to know that his wife...died...yet again...
"I think you may want to bow," Cynthia replied. "Because I become very angry when people refuse to bow before me."
...someone needs to teach her a lesson. >>
"What? You actually think I'll bow to you? There's no way I'll-"
*headdesk* *headdesk* *headdesk*
"Very well, then, I shall spare this half of the Saffron family," she stated.
And Roxy?
"Wait – what does that mean?" Will questioned.
It means what it meant the last three times, too...
"Please, I wish to show mercy today,"
.....please tell me she is joking...
"How is this baby going to grow up without a mother? How am I going to live without her? This just isn't fair!"
;.;
Well, Liza co-, no better not. ><And Will HAS to survive, for Roxy's sake (and mine).
"Don't those eyes remind you of Sabrina?" Mr. Saffron commented.

"They always will," Will replied. "Oh, Sabrina…"
Wasn't I suggesting such a scene?
I hope that your Sabrina has violet eyes, too, for that's the colour Roxy's eyes are gonna be. ^^
"I hereby exonerate Sabrina Saffron from any crime," he stated. "She was completely innocent."
*sniffs* ;.; I love you, Oak.
...how did he know about this, though? Oo
That night, Will lay in bed alone, missing Sabrina greatly. He could only cry, thinking all about her. She had truly loved him, unlike his first girlfriend, Karen. She was always there for him. Even as she teased him, she truly cared about him and always looked out for him.
;.; Omg, omg, omg...I feel like crying...damn, I AM crying...this isn't just fair....you've put the poor guy through so much pain....
Can't write much about the next paragraphs, just...;.; omg, you can write so romantic scenes, just why do you always have to write them without Sabrina? Or almost always without Sabrina? It's...kinda cruel....romantic, yet cruel.
As Will cried, a beautiful woman miles and miles away simply smiled. She had finally gotten what she wanted.
...*glares*
 
So, any guesses on what happens next? I'm a little unsure myself... but remember I promised you someone would die in that chapter, and I'm keeping that promise. Now I know you're probably thinking of giving up on the story, but don't do so yet. Just wait...

And wasn't it romantic... and sad? And yes, I stole the idea of Sabrina's matching eyes with Roxette from you. Probably by Monday you'll see the next chapter.
 
Well, I would think Cynthia trying to conquer the whole of Kanto, including the elite four and Will going out for cold blood with problaby high chances of failing ><.
I know you said someone would die, but you said that several times now...and mark my words, I might kill somebody in my fic, too.
I can't give up on that fic. Not until I have written that sequel.

I said so, it was. ^^ Yet...are Sabrin's eyes violet? Roxette's eyes are going to be dark violet...^.~
By Monday? >< It's Friday! That's three days! >.<
 
Maybe Monday, maybe sooner. But mark my words, I still love Sabrina, even though this tragic chapter occurred.

And don't scratch out everything for the sequel to this one, because you never know what I'll change. You like the Todd x Erika couple? He can replace Brock... I promised that I wouldn't kill Cynthia, but I never promised I wouldn't kill Sabrina... though I bet you think she's coming back, don't you?
 
....great love you have there, really. Even though I torture Sabrina, too, I don't do it EVERY SECOND CHAPTER!!! >.<
Plus, I never kill her off for real, and now, you really made me start wondering if you have killed her off for good by now...it really sounds so.

Speaking of it...next chapter of my fic might be up soon, depends on when Zammy gets online and beta-reads. ^^

...I could write Sabrina out of the sequel, you know. It would, theoretically, work. Yet, that's something I certainly do not want. >>Killing Cynthia, though...
^^ I like it. It fits, just somehow. I could never find the right guy for Erica, either I pair her with Bugsy *sweatdrops* or occassionally, with Gary. ^^ But Todd is very good indeed.

I said I'm starting te believe she's gone for good...and you know why? Because of your very last sentence. Exactly. You've tortured me with nearly killing her several times now, knowing that I would know she comes back. Now you kill her again, a 'joke' which is getting old. What would make it new? To kill her off for real.
Yay. >>

I promise I will never kill Sabrina in my fics....others, though...

Edit: And this, guys, was my 1,500th post. Where I talk about killing Sabrina. Whoah....*sweatdrops*
 
The next chapter is titled "Rest in Peace." Draw your own conclusions...

I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter, especially with evil Cynthia.

I don't know why I originally paired Erika with Todd, but we kept those two together for a very long time. I guess when I started writing Erika into my story I was afraid that Todd was too unknown to be placed in the story, but now I found a way for him to get in.

Well, there goes any suspense on whether Sabrina lives or dies in your fics again... you should have said that before the last chapter of your last fic.
 
....*draws own conclusions* *hopes that Cynthia dies* *gets strangled by CPF* *gggg* Hey, a desparate fan can hope, can't she? >>;;;;

Zammy hasn't given it back yet, so far, but good news are, Chapter 5 part 2 is flowing quite well...well, okay, it's a damn sad/funny chapter, and the same way to write....I need to get my characters drunk, how funny is that? *g*

I wrote somewhere in the back of this club that I liked the Erika/Brock couple...nevermind now, Todd/Erika is better. ^^

Scratch that, I just noticed that I *did* kill Sabrina for real in two of my earlier fics. Can't even keep my own promises, see? *gg*
And just because I might spare her doesn't mean I will spare anyone. ^^
Ehm, review? Yeah, I just fear it wil be a big size review again. (And you flew and can't post inbetween, hmpf.)

Clearly the four were planning something, but what exactly they were planning was still a mystery…
For the reader, not the author. Hopefully. *g*
When Will woke up the next morning, all he could see is green
Aliens!
Sorry, read the next few sentences and couldn't help but make a joke out of joyfullness. ^^
It suddenly came to him what he was seeing, so he tried rubbing his eyes, checking if he was truly awake.
I hope for your sake he is.
"Come on, you haven't stroked my hair in a long time."
*snickers*
"Do you like my boots? I bought new ones just for you. Look, they have high heels…"
....he thought you were dead and all you talk about is SHOES?!?!?! ....omg, Sabrina has turned into a valley girl, RUN!
Sabrina grabbed his face with her hands and planted a kiss on his lips.
^_________^ Aww, Happy Absol! *dance* *g*
"It was," Sabrina replied. "But I have a theory…"

She whispered something to Will.

"Don't tell anyone," she warned him.
*listens in* ...*doesn't hear anything* Not even the readers? >>
"Sabrina, it's not what you think."
*g* How can he know what she thinks?
"I like your boots…"
Men....*sweatdrops*
"But as important as rings are to me…"
Since when are rings important to her?
All the two wanted was to enjoy a romantic and intimate time together, which they did.
*smile* YESSA! I've been waiting for ages for this moment! Just not fair that Cynthia and Lucian are the only ones benefitting from the higher rating! *ggg*
Karen, Bruno and Clair began mass calling the people who had signed up to be members of the newest incarnation of Team Rocket.
...I don't know, but the image of mass calling makes me smile. *g*
if the Pokémon League will not step in over the constant attacks by Sinnoh
It will, once Giselle gets her ego ruined.
"We will launch a preemptive strike on the Sinnoh League headquarters, and stop them before they attack us again."
I am hopefully not the only one who thinks this is a bad idea.
Jasmine, the land of Kanto is crumbling to pieces! How many more cities must fall before we do something about it?"
Well, there aren't that many cities left already...
"You were fired, all for the sake of freeing me," Sabrina stated. "It wasn't necessary, you know."
He loves you. He would give his life for you. So his job is the last thing he cared about.
He is kinda like Lucian...o,o *frightened sweatdrop*
"You sure are psychic," he told her.
D'oh. ^^
"Stop underestimating my psychic abilities."

"I'm sorry, Sabrina," Will replied. "I guess that's a little helpful that you're so much stronger as a psychic than me."
*shakes head while smiling* Just cute, these two.
Just be prepared, Will, you have two three of these women stronger than you around...0=)
"So, how did you get them?" he asked.

"I went shopping last night," she replied.
O,O She nearly got killed by Cynthia and the first thing she does is going SHOPPING?!?!?
I was told shopping is a woman's biggest hobby, yet, this...Sabrina...*shakes head*
Will was getting crazy over her death and she went shopping? *just continues shaking head*
"I've got everything under control."
Yep, she takes her almost death pretty...lightly...
"But Sabrina, Cynthia's pushed us around over and over again, and nearly killed you on several occasions,"
He's not the first one that noticed that....
He stared into her deep purple eyes
*smiles* Thanks. ^^
My power is growing, and soon enough I will be able to match up with her evenly.
Overconfident she is? No, of course not.
"I'll make her call me queen," she said.
P*A headdesks. Not that again.
She giggled a bit.

"I wanted to make you sweat it out."
*grinding teeth and damn close to strangling her*
Will slammed his hand against the bed angrily. "How could you do that to me – and to Liza – and to your parents?" he asked. "How?"
VERY MUCH AGREED!!! I will repeat: Everyone thought she was dead and she went friggin shopping!
Meanwhile, Cynthia was well aware of the fact that Sabrina was alive.
*headdesk* Nooooo....Cynthia should be getting frustrated by now. *g*
And she knew that still she had her position as queen, while Sabrina was a mere citizen of Kanto
...in the end, we have four (!) woman going for the title of the queen...I think one guy should give it a try now, a fight between four 'queens' and a 'king' might be even more hilarious to watch. 0=)
Or we split Kanto up into four kingdoms. See, it would work that way. *ggg*
The following day, Sabrina and Will went to the Fighting Dojo, telling Kiyo that his time as Saffron City gym leader was short-lived, as Sabrina was taking back her position. Kiyo, however, was indignant.
(I knew something would happen regarding the Fighting Dojo)...waitasecond, his name is Kiyo? Oops....that the family name I chose for Koga, thinking it was his Japanese name. *big sweatdrop*
"If you wish, we can battle-"

"No!" Kiyo shouted.
Hmpf, I would have liked to see an easy battle for a change.
"I don't know why they think they're so much better than us."

"Well, they are…" a fighter in the gym suggested.
*ggg*
"Someday, I vow to gain the leadership position back… but not today."
And not in eighteen years either. *g*
Since he respected Sabrina greatly, as did all the citizens of Saffron, he decided to be merciful to Will in this situation.
Whoppey! ^^
"Lady Erika, I forgive you," she replied.
^^ She calls her Lady.
Erika dropped to her knees and bowed before Sabrina.
This is not going to do well to her consciousness...neither is being called 'Queen Sabrina' mere sentences later. I fear she will be getting overconfident...not to mention that we get another royalty. >>
All was well in Saffron and Celadon again, and there was momentary peace in this portion of Kanto.
Wanna have a waffle? *g*
The nagging question for them, as well as the rest of Kanto, was – how long would it last?
Two chapters.
You know, the next time you nearly kill Sabrina, keep her dead for a few chapters, so I will actually be shocked when I see her alive again. *ggggg*
j/k
Longest, review, ever. x.x
 
So Sabrina survives. No, I really don't plan on killing her off, and I would have gone a few chapters with her dead, except 1) I'm too big of a fan of hers, 2) it would be too sad, and 3) you may stop reviewing. So I brought her back now, and I plan on her not being so weak anymore, but instead being more like what she was called in this chapter - "Queen Sabrina."

By the way, back when I played with LEGO Pokemon characters, I had royalty there. Kanto had Queen Sabrina and Princess Erika, and Johto had Queen Jasmine and Princess Whitney. So royalty has played a part in my Pokemon fandom for a long time, and Sabrina's always wanted to be known as a queen. Will she get her crown? She already has a throne in her gym, if you'll recall the episode.

How did you like Erika's bowing before Sabrina? You think that might make Sabrina hunger for a crown somewhat?

And of course I decided for some romance between Sabrina and Will. The thing about Will is that he really likes boots on women... remember the first time they met?

Also, that secret between Sabrina and Will... that's important. But it's a secret... for now.
 
So Sabrina survives. No, I really don't plan on killing her off, and I would have gone a few chapters with her dead, except 1) I'm too big of a fan of hers,
And yet you still torture her. Nevermind, I do that too. 0=)
2) it would be too sad,
Yeah, it would be, but fanfics need drama. Hence my fifth chapter
and 3) you may stop reviewing.
Nah, only if you really don't bring her back. ^^ Like I said, if she hadn't returned after, say, five chapters, I might have stopped reviewing. *g*
So I brought her back now, and I plan on her not being so weak anymore, but instead being more like what she was called in this chapter - "Queen Sabrina."
I hope so. Epic battle between her and Cynthia only works when they're nearly equal. ^.~

How did you like Erika's bowing before Sabrina? You think that might make Sabrina hunger for a crown somewhat?
I think I made that clear enough- I did not like that much. >> While Sabrina being powerful is nice, her going to for the title of the queen is too much. I thought Cynthia was enough of a bad example to show her this. And now even Will is playing along. >.<

And of course I decided for some romance between Sabrina and Will. The thing about Will is that he really likes boots on women... remember the first time they met?
*g* I very much remember that.^.~ 'You think I look cute in my boots', wasn't it?
Still, no excuse for her torturing her own husband. >> That poor guy cried his soul out, thinking that she was dead and she...you know....went SHOPPING....

Also, that secret between Sabrina and Will... that's important. But it's a secret... for now.
^^ Okay, accepted. I'll wait.
 
Well, I've run out of chances to surprise you over Sabrina dying. That, and you've blackmailed me into keeping her alive, though I plan on it anyway. I've killed off enough people for now, though I just wonder how Cynthia could stop killing after she's killed so many already.

But Sabrina's a woman of power, isn't she? Wouldn't she look so great wearing a crown, going around as a queen herself? Scratch that, I like Cynthia too much as queen. Cynthia's the only queen of the Pokemon world, sorry, Sabrina. But, Sabrina, you may feel free to bow before Queen Cynthia any time you wish.
 
XD Nah, you haven't. Make it a spectacular death without any hint, or, even better...NOT Cynthia killing her. THAT would be shocker.
Blackmailing? Me? You? Never...0=)
If you kill non-important persons, I won't mind. XD Just to make you remember: Sabrina, Will, Roxette= important Everyone else= not. *gggg*

Yes, but no. >> I might be a fan of Sabrina, but Cynthia really drove me off with her evil queen-ness. I'm quite clear on this: Royalty= bad
So I suppose I should actually be happy that Cynthia will the only queen in your world.
Never. >> She bowed once, but never again. Though, someone might bow to her. 0=)
 
The order of importance in my story of the big name couples goes sort of like this: Cynthia, Sabrina, Will, Lucian, Roxette, Roy. Meaning I will not kill Cynthia, you can take that to the bank. She's surviving no matter how evil she is.

You mean, perhaps Will? No way will Cynthia ever bow to Sabrina, but Sabrina may end up bowing to her again...
 
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