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Sexy Lady

code zerro the deluge

I'm a boss.
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    Sexy lady I wanna rock your world.
    Sexy lady give me your number girl.

    Sexy lady I wanna rock your world.
    Sexy lady give me your number girl.


    Sexy lady you should be my baby.
    So that I can call you my lady.
    I love you wooohoo.
    Can't see my self with out you
    I buy you things but you pay me no attention at first
    But know we so close as if riden in a hurse

    Sexy lady I wanna rock your world.
    Sexy lady give me your number girl.

    Sexy lady I wanna rock your world.
    Sexy lady give me your number girl.

    I wanna be closser than friends
    See this happeneig to the end
    Time is not and obsticle it is mine
    So why do you ask is it true
    Heck yeah girl I love you
    Pink-Tiger I want you to understand
    That your my girl and I am your man
     
    Kay, I don't mean to sound harsh, but you really need to start paying more attention to grammar and spelling. You're getting much better in the actual poetry department, though you still have a ways to go. We all do, as I'm fairly sure there aren't any poet lauriets running around here... Anyways, that's something that you NEED to work more on. Other than that, keep it up.
     
    hey, that is a nice poem, since i see how you mean that you love her. i have never met her, so i cant tell you how she would feel. i hope you don't get turned down.
     
    I think the repeat is like a chorus in a song, sissy. XD

    I liked it. Your rhyming's pretty good and your rhythm is pretty good as well.
    ^_^

    Keep it up.
     
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