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She's All Alone

Eliana

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    Well since my Poetry Thread died *again* (XD) I'll just post a song I recently wrote and yes I actually am working on a tune *gasp* XD

    She's All Alone

    She?s leaving home the last time,
    Leaving her problems behind.
    No more lies or accusations,
    She?s finally found inspiration.
    But now she?s all alone?

    Chorus
    No one?s left to hear her screaming,
    She?s trapped inside her world of dreaming,
    There?s no where to go, no where to hide,
    She?s lost out there and bleeding deep inside?


    She?s a rebel of her own kind,
    Death and destruction rule her mind.
    Sick of all she?s ever known,
    Now she?s never coming home.
    But it doesn?t matter now,
    ?Cause she?s all alone?

    Chorus

    She?s gone forever, never coming back?.

    Chorus

    ~~~~
    Hope it isn't too bad XP

    ~Eli
     
    XD I'll go post it there if you'd like, no one ever reads my stuff there...XD Thanks!
     
    Well I only got the chorus...it's REALLY sucky but I'm gonna add the one where I play guitar with it soon...
     
    Awws, thanks! ^_^ *feels flattered* I didn't think it was so good...XD
     
    You thought wrong! That's awesome! *giggles and pasts back* It really was good, and I enjoyed reading it. *confesses* I'm terribly with rhyme schemes, so I envy how effortlessly yours flows.
     
    I can't even write 10 lines that rhyme and made decent, yet you write a SONG and oulled it off quite nicely. Excellent work on your part.
     
    ...Yeah that was me....xD;;;; I think my voice sounds terrible in the mic...xD This afternoon I'll post the guitar one...and then maybe I'll get a tune for the stanzas.

    Phantom Mew- Thanks so much! Yeah rhyming was never a problem for me, it just always worked...o.o
     
    Oh so EMO haha..sorry Eli.

    Its nice though =3
     
    Dang..XD Well as long as the world rebel is in it, I'm fine...thankies! XD
     
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