Shinos Sprite comics.

AburameShino

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    Yeah,Im wouldnt call myself a professional Sprite Comic..Maker..Guy but im pretty Good,But yeah Please rate these comics i made 1/10,Im making a new comic its kinda resident evilish but yeah here they are.
    Intro Picture.
    https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v467/acekiddee/Intro-Project.png

    Comic1.
    https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v467/acekiddee/Project.png

    Comic2.
    https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v467/acekiddee/Project02.png

    Ugh!...I cant find the last 3...Crap..;.;..They're in my picture folder somewhere but until then please rate these and tell me whut i need to do better on.. :D
     
    Well, the backrounds, sprites and storyline are good, but in the text boxes, there are grammer mistakes, spelling mistakes, and some of the words are cut off. Improve on your text boxes so that it's bigger than the actual space the text needs.
     
    *image removed* As Moonlight Dreams pointed out your grammar is a little bad. You have nice backgrounds and sprites are solid. Except for one. Your little protoman recolor brought down your score. You should make it more origanal because the time of recolors is over. I suggest you find someone to edit that sprite :\.
     
    Just as the other two said, there are some grammar mistakes. The sprites and backrounds are good, and the storyline seems pretty good. Overall, I'll give it a 7/10
     
    I like it, good sprite usage and backgrounds, but lots and lots of spelling and grammatical mistakes, and THERE'S LOTS OF THESE TYPES OF COMICS! Overused idea, but really well done.
     
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