• Ever thought it'd be cool to have your art, writing, or challenge runs featured on PokéCommunity? Click here for info - we'd love to spotlight your work!
  • It's time to vote for your favorite Pokémon Battle Revolution protagonist in our new weekly protagonist poll! Click here to cast your vote and let us know which PBR protagonist you like most.
  • Welcome to PokéCommunity! Register now and join one of the best fan communities on the 'net to talk Pokémon and more! We are not affiliated with The Pokémon Company or Nintendo.
    Register

Shiny OU team

pokemew

    • 103
    Posts
    16
    Years
    • Seen Jan 25, 2014
    Hey everybody this is my shiny OU team. Im new at team-making so rate my team and make suggestions


    *pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed*


    Special Sweeper
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Starmie Modest Nature/Choice Specs/Natural Cure
    EVs:4hp/252spa/252spe
    -Thunderbolt
    -Ice Beam
    -Grass Knot
    -Surf

    He's a good special sweeper. Thunderbolt is for Gyrados and light water types like Vaporeon. Grass Knot is for heavy water types and for Tyranitar. Ice Beam goes great with Thunderbolt. Surf is for stab and will hit fire types hard which is one type that Electivire cant really take out. If there are status effects il just switch out and swith back in and have a healthy starmie


    Special Sweeper
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Porygon-Z Timid Nature/Choice Scarf/Download
    EVs: 4hp/252spa/252spe
    -Tri Attack
    -Dark Pulse
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunderbolt

    Tri Attack is for stab and its damage is increased depending on the opponent. Dark Pulse is for ghost and psychics. And Thunderbolt and Ice Beam have great type coverage.


    Physical Sweeper with Special Mix
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Electivire Lonely Nature/Expert Belt/Motor Drive
    EVs: 252atk/80spa/176spe
    -Thunderbolt
    -Ice Punch
    -Focus Punch
    -Flamethrower

    Thunderbolt is for stab and good for pokes with high defence but low special defense like Skarmory which it will OHKO. Ice Punch is for ground and grass types. Flamethrower is for steel types that resist fighting types like Bronzong and Skarmory. Focus Punch is a powerful fighting type move (since i Have no way of getting a cross chop on a shiny elekid) that requires some prediction when an oponent is switching out on slower foes.


    DD Physical Sweeper
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Salamance Adamant Nature/Life Orb/Intimidate
    EVs: 80hp/252atk/176spe
    -Dragon Claw
    -Dragon Dance
    -Earthquake
    -Fire Fang

    DD is for the speed and attack boost. Dragon Claw is for stab. Earthquake is for steel types which are resisted by my Porygon-Z and Starmie. Fire Fang is for ice types and levitating steel types

    Physical Wall and Lead
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Bronzong Quiet Nature/Lum Berry/Levitate
    EVs: 252hp/74atk/110def/74spd
    -Gyro Ball
    -Hypnosis
    -Earthquake
    -Stealth Rock

    Gyro Ball is a high power attack with quiet nature and 0 speed ivs. Earthquake will handle fire types. Stealth rock is for some support
    Hypnosis is to put to sleep as soon as bronze comes out.

    Special Wall
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Blissey Calm Nature/Leftovers/Natural Cure
    EVs:252def/176spd/80spa
    -Softboiled
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunderbolt
    -Thunder Wave

    Thunder Wave will cripple fast sweepers. Bolt-Beam is for coverage and softboiled is for recovery


    So make suggestions on wat to do
     
    Last edited:
    pokemew said:
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed**pokemonelite2000 image removed*


    Special Sweeper
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Starmie Timid Nature/Choice Specs/Natural Cure
    EVs:4hp/252spa/252spe
    -Thunderbolt
    -Ice Beam
    -Grass Knot
    -Surf

    Use + speed nature for stuff like infernape.


    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Porygon-Z Timid Nature/Choice Scarf/Download
    EVs: 4hp/252spa/252spe
    -Tri Attack
    -Dark Pulse
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunderbolt

    Scarf this so you can revenge stuff, aka things like Gyarados.




    Physical Sweeper with Special Mix
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Electivire Lonely Nature/Expert Belt/Motor Drive
    EVs: 252atk/80spa/176spe
    -Thunderbolt
    -Ice Punch
    -Cross Chop
    -Earthquake / Flamethrower

    w/e. Cross Chop >> Brick break for power. I prefer Flamethrower so zong and forry etc dont go rofl.



    DD Physical Sweeper
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Salamance Adamant Nature/Life Orb/Intimidate
    EVs: 80hp/252atk/176speed
    -Dragon Claw
    -Dragon Dance
    -Earthquake
    -Fire Fang

    176 speed evs (280 speed for Lucario)
    and use fire fang for un resisted coverage (aka for skarm and zong and other steel walls)


     Physical Wall
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Bronzong Relaxed Nature/Leftovers/Levitate
    252 HP / 74 Atk / 110 Def / 74 Sp.D
    -Gyro Ball
    -Hypnosis
    -Earthquake
    -Stealth Rock

    Rain Dance is a waste of a slot (yay lets give kingdra a free sweep lol) when you can just switch to starmie and mence for fire attacks and so is attempting a sweep with calm mind...since it cant do it to well.

    Zong has a lot of very useful support options which you lack currently (e.g Stealth Rock, Hypnosis etc), so utalize them.

    Evs need reworking since max hp should be given >> the defenses initially on most defensive pokemon.

    Special Wall
    *pokemonelite2000 image removed*
    Blissey Calm Nature/Leftovers/Natural Cure
    EVs:252 DEF / 176 SP.DEF / 80 SP.ATT
    -Softboiled
    -Ice Beam / Aromatheraphy
    -Seismic Toss
    -Thunder Wave

    Better ev spread and is an exception to the the "max hp >> defenses rule on defensive pokes" because it already has large hp and gains more defensive potential if you max its defenses ;).

    Use Seismic Toss for Raikou and for more damage in general.

    Id use Aromatheraphy since your team does NOT like status (if you do, move the sp.att evs into hp)
    Click to expand...


    Comments in bold.


    Lead with zong imo (you can use a lum berry on it if you do).
     
    Pokemew, competitive Pokemon isn't a one man show. Each respective Pokemon must has to have synergy with one another on the same team. Compare them with teams in real life, like football, do you think a team can be good if they don't work together? All the members of your team must pave the way for one another in order to be successful. Currently, I don't see that with your team. Inserting some random Pokemon and praying doesn't work.

    I know you're new and eager to be posting your team, but I believe you show lurk just a bit more, look at other successful teams and identify what makes it up. Battle on Shoddy with the team and fix your team accordingly, whether it be weaknesses or whatever. Learn the basics and then compromise. Remember: Synergy. This is the biggest help, me thinks.
     
    You must log in or register to reply here.
    Back
    Top