skyscraper

[Zelda]

OKAY SO

A bird explosion. :D;




Not really a "graphics piece" just something I put together because I was really bored and I thought I should stick it in this thread because why not???

& THEN THERE'S THIS. Which I think my inspiration was E.T. and I like it but I'm not sure about it as a whole. Stock is from moments.'s thingy





I wish I knew how to make the wings show up more, but they were so light in the original all my edits made them vanish. :( Otherwise, I tried to turn something a bit boring to more interesting.

 

[moments.]

bird explosion
To the left, there is a straight edge from one of your effects that wasn't erased properly, just clean that up. Otherwise, pretty cool, though the bird is looking rather smothered. Perhaps erase some of the effects over the birds face just so it is a little less messy and you can really see all the detail in the bird. The simplicity of this piece could go really well with some typo as well. Just food for thought.

katy perry e.t
First thing that jumps out is poor quality effects and focal. This is pretty much all due to over contrasting. In other words, the blacks are too black and it has actually caused the effects to lose quality. Tone down the blacks, I'd tone down the colours on her skin as well just a bit, and try and incorporate some more effects, maybe more soft effects around the canvas. Some bokeh would look nice methinks.

faith bird
Really good colours in this one, the only thing that is lacking really is the quality again, and the fact that the wings aren't visible. I know you couldn't get the wings to remain visible with the adjustments, but it looks quite unbalanced without them. as for quality, specifically the tail, which is all blurred and has lost all the details, as well as the chest compared to the head. Where the neck is, the contrast is so high that there is a solid line where the feathers were. Tone down the contrast again, less white this time and even out the tones. Text is alright, I'd move it to the left of the belly, feels all isolated where it is now.