Snakes of Eden

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Sithre

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    Beyond even the Psychics sight, the tower began its boom at the citie's core. Enhance Inc., as its sign shines over the densley populated metropolis. Cobalt pillars twisted and embraced its structure, at every gap a large contact pooled outwards. At its tip, the mysterious building reached up into a very curious orb. Invisible to even the greatest of the street curiousities, a women stood engulfing her eyes on all that she could. This had all become below her, she glanced at the Silph Co. building that crutched her own empire. Lilith turned from the window, her shadow dashed across the room from the lowering sun, her gaze struck anothers eyes. The final light of day fell upon the boys frightened face...

    Every Poke'Mart in Kanto seemingly exploded with the new product, that has been named Eden . Cheaper then the average potion, it becomes an instant economic gold mine.

    "Enhance Inc. gurantee's that our easy spray on formula "EDEN" will vastly increase and excel your poke'mon's level in all areas".

    This plants the seed...


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    Knowing Only this you must decide to have either:
    A) Be a starter trainer, and have the EDEN potion.
    B) Be an older trainer.


    If you Choose A.
    Name:
    Age ( 10-15):
    Gender:
    Description:
    Personality:
    Starter Pokemon:
    History:
    Why you want EDEN:
    RPG sample (RECQUIRED):


    If you choose B.
    Name:
    Age (15-20):
    Gender:
    Description:
    Personality:
    Pokemon (2- 6)
    History:
    What you think about EDEN:
    RPG sample (RECQUIRED):




    Let your Journey through Kanto begin.
     
    Name: Patrick "Pat" Herron
    Age (15-20): 15
    Gender: Male
    Description:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Snakes of Eden

    Personality: In most essences, a Megalomaniac. He has a deep selfishness towards most, but strong loyalty and selflessness to those he trusts. His Megalomania brings about a destructive sense of humor, he'll often laugh at the injurys/pain of others. He fights insanely and loves to use big, explosive attacks to make a scene. Over time, it seems that he has grafted this personality onto his pokemon, for they tend to enjoy cuasing destruction as well. He also displays a certain disapproval of modernism, preferring to fly on his pokemon rather than take a Magnet Train for example. Pat is initially distrustful of almost anyone, but will usually open up to a person after getting to know them a bit; unless they're modernized people, then he'll almost never trust them at all.
    Pokemon (2- 6): Velcie (Charmeleon), Lacer (Scyther), Naut (Machamp), Boom (Lugia), Mino (Tauros)
    History: An Ecruteak City native, Pat started his Johto journey with a Charmander sired from his father's Charizard. He spent his early childhood wandering the hills and forests of the surrounding areas, and was known to take the most wild and rural route possible to the next city. As he took on the Johto Gym Challenge, word spread across the region of his destructive and explosive battles. After becoming the Johto League Champion, Pat made the next landmark in his career by capturing a Lugia. Pat remained in Johto for a while after that, drifting around the region as a battling thrill seeker, until he heard word of EDEN in Kanto. Pat himself wasn't interested in it, but he wanted to battle the trainers of the pokemon that were rumored to be so strong because of EDEN. Just another challenge was what he saw it as. Besides, those artificially enhanced pokemon and their trainers needed to be taught a lesson.
    What you think about EDEN: Pat thinks EDEN is no good. Any trainer that has to use something artificial to get strong pokemon isn't a good trainer and doesn't deserve strong pokemon. And its modern...
    RPG sample (RECQUIRED):
    The debris on the beach began to stir, the wind was picking up. Littered papers swirling in the wind, discarded cans rolling across the wood. The wind ruffled the creature's shaggy mane, and it took notice. The creature exclaimed, "CHIPOLINCHUTLI, SHOW THYSELF SO THAT I MAY DESTROY YOU!"

    The wind intensified as a humanoid figure drifted out of the torn sky. In his left hand, he held a war-club, glowing with lightning. Around his right arm, a small tornado formed a small sleeve of swirling dust. The figure's white eyes glowed from its vantage point, like twin flashlights in a dark room. Stormclouds slowly revolved around the descending figure, dropping alongside it.

    The figure stopped its descent, hovering a few feet above the water. The figure spoke, "Atl, as the God of Hurricanes, I accept your challenge. You will join your fellow Gods of the Old in Mictlan soon enough."
     
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    I'd like to join this.

    Name: Namid Sitara
    Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    Description:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Snakes of Eden

    Personality: She is calm and kind but she also has a fiery temper. Though she is not quick to anger, once she is, it's wise to move away. She's a fierce warrior and a strong person who always thinks of what is best for others rather than what is best for herself. She is loyal to her friends and allies and never backs away from a fight. She is very intelligent and a skilled strategist. This makes her all the more dangerous in battle. Her calm nature makes many think she has a rather bland personality but this is far from the truth. She has a good sense of humor and is quite a friendly person. But she also has a mysterious air about her that some find rather unusual.
    Pokemon: Umbreon, Arcanine, (shiny) Manetric, and Flygon
    History:
    What you think about EDEN: It's wrong. Pokemon's power should not be inhanced by a potion, it should be enhanced by training and natural processes. Besides, messing around with nature is dangerous.
    RPG sample: *pouts* RP samples are evil. :P
    The dark forest was eerily silent as Okita walked along the well known path. The light of the setting sun drifted through the trees and cast strange shadows across the ground. But Okita wasn't worried. She had traveled this path many times before.

    The last rays of sun vanished and the mystical glow of the bright moon appeared. But even so Okita didn’t stop. She had to get home soon. But, as she continued on, a cold chill crept down her spine. She looked around casually and quickened her pace. Anything could be hiding in the dense thicket of trees on either side of her. Her hand moved to the hilt of her sword and her gold eyes darted here and there.

    All at once, she heard a low moaning sound. Okita stopped, every sense on alert. The sound came again, but louder. Goosebumps crept up her arms as she turned. Though she couldn't see anything, she knew that something was standing on the path a few feet from her. Her sharp eyes scanned the darkness trying to catch sight of what was there. But it was too dark. The minutes slipped by. Okita's hand never left the hilt of her sword.

    Then, without warning, the creature bolted. Okita only had enough time to draw her sword before the creature was upon her. A razor sharp claw as long as a dagger ripped through the air. The sound of metal hitting metal rang through the night as Okita swung her sword to block. The creature leapt backward then attacked again. It swiped with its murderous claw again and again and each time Okita blocked and countered with her sword.

    The ferocity of the battle increased until both Okita and the creature were exhausted. The creature leapt backwards into a pool of moonlight. Okita's eyes widened as she saw what it was who had attacked her. Her sword fell to the ground with a clang and she stepped backwards in horror. "Senora?" She whispered in a shaky voice.



    My brain is locked right now so I'll have to add a description and history later. I erased what history I had typed up by accident so I need to kick myself for doing that a few more times before I finish my profile. :P
     
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    *Alana i need atleast a description and History from you, as well as atleast a hint at personality before you can start posting. And Ph, you should add some more to your history if you wish to use a legendary, since you didn't ask. And yes you need an rp sample, both of you.

    This will be the Character i will be using outside of Leading Characters.

    A.
    Name: Ryan ???
    Age ( 10-15): 12
    Gender: Male
    Description: Ryan is about 5'4" skinny teenager. He always wears a dark green coat, with a lime green shirt that has an intricate symbol on it in black. And the average blue jeans most kids his age wear.He has dark brown hair and blue/green eyes.
    Personality: Ryan borders on the line between child and adult, totally void of the stereotypical teen emotions, he either takes charge are dwells and fears what could happen. Because of this, its hard for people to really get attached to him or for him to really create a relationship with anyone else. He has become a loner for only being 14.
    Starter Pokemon: Magnemite
    History: "gotta wait for that"
    Why you want EDEN: "gotta wait for that"
     
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    There Sithre, changed my history and added an RP sample
     
    OOC: Okay Pat, better, and same to you Alana. Both can start there Posts now. I"m gonna start My custom Character, even though i'd like to wait for some more people to really go into the story line.


    "Welcome!", the shopkeep roared over the hustle of new trainers as they scuried around the store. Each one had a backpack and money to stock it with, each one had just began their journies. And to the Owner, each one was a dollar sign waiting to be juiced. An orchestra of amazement and eager voices arose from the store, audible to any ears outisde.

    The morning sun blazed the horizon, Ryan squinted and held his head in his arms. He sat against the wall of the Poke'mart, hoping the crowds would die down, he was uneased by the thought of other trainers. Cradled on his lap, lay a pokeball. It held all his curiousities, and was filled with anxiety to him. Ryan had it for a day, and had not yet released the poke'mon it held.

    "I have a gift for you son", his mom's voice still filled his ears. "This pokemon is yours now, he's yours to-", he had grabbed the poke'ball from her hand and hugged her. Thinking back, he hoped that she didn't see the fear of this gift in his eyes.

    Ryan stood, placing the pokeball in his pocket lazily. The door to the Mart slid open, and he walked in. Cautiously avoiding the others, he skulked around the store. All he needed was a few potions, he needed to get home soon if he hoped to leave home tomorrow. Feeling more relaxed now that most of the other trainers had finished stocking there packs and had left, Ryan made his way to the potions area. Digging into his other pocket, he pulled out a list. Slowly Ryan checked off each item on his list. Ignoring everything that wasn't on his list, he walked up to the counter and spilled the small money pouch his mom had given him. The owner helped Ryan pack the items.

    "Thats everything, all nice and ordered for you", he took the money hesitantly. "Since it looks like your the last of the beginners this morning, i got something to give you". Ryan slung his backpack over his shoulder and waited nervously, he didn't like it when people confronted him. The Owner came back from the back room, carrying a small red bottle. He set it down on the counter, "I just got this stuff in, its pretty new and expensive". The red bottle shined, the words running vertical across its center echoed in his mind. "Its called Eden..."
     
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    "Shitheads..."

    Sitting on a grassy hill north of Saffron City, Pat Herron glared at the 18-wheelers rolling out of the city. Their trailers were marked with "Enhance Inc." The way the radio ads spoke of it, it was as if the trucks were going to deliver miracles to the local PokeMarts.

    More like spreading poison, Pat thought.

    He felt the warm skin of his Charmeleon nudging him. Pat turned to her and said, "Velcie babe, we should go back to Cerulean. I bet there will be alot of cocky trainers just waiting to try out their pokemon after they've sprayed 'em up with that crap Eden. I say they need an asskicking, agree?"

    "Meleon!" she screamed happily.

    "Thats my girl."
     
    Namid sat on a bench watching a truck role by. Her sharp eyes were narrowed in disgust as they scanned the logo on the side. "Enhance Inc." She muttered darkly.

    "Dirt." A slightly larger than average Umbreon gave a soft growl as he watched the truck. Like his trainer, he didn't approve of Enhance Inc. and its "wonder potion".

    "There's nothing we can do. Some misguided trainers are going to use that potion and nothing anyone says can change their mind."

    "Misguided." Umbreon snorted and looked at his trainer. "Dimwitted, power hungry, fools if you ask me. And there's plenty that can be said that'll make 'em change their mind."

    Namid chuckled. "Perhaps." She considered for a moment then grinned. "It's worth a shot isn't it? If we can convince at least one trainer not to use that stuff on their Pokemon it'll be something." She stood and stretched then turned and headed off with Umbreon behind him.
     
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