Sneasel's random sprites

[*~Frost Umbreon~*]

Well, since I'm a spriter, I decided to start this thread. :D

Edits:

Revamps:

Devamps:

Splices:

I'll add more soon. :P

 

[Hall Of Famer]

Looks pretty nice, keep it up.

 

[InMooseWeTrust]

The Sneasel devamp's body is too dark and doesn't have enough variety in shading.

The Houndoom looks all right for a revamp, but for a TRUE revamp, it needs to be anatomically correct. That means its nose should be longer and its legs should be thinner and longer.

The baby Articuno works pretty well, but the other two don't.

 

[Azumi]

Well, I doing criticism like this for the first time, so here... we... go!

Onto the legendary birds...

I like the Articuno one and the Zapdos one. The other... no. NO. It looks unnatural, and to top it off, its pose looks strange. You should use a Starly or something.

Now to the Houndoom... (I had to whip out an R/S one to compare.)

Well, well, this is a good revamp. But if you start comparing it to a real Houndoom... Yep. The nose should be longer, and the legs... longer too please. And actually, I just noticed, the Houndoom... doesn't look as fierce as it is now... Maybe the sprite WAS meant to be like that?

...Sneasel.

Now on to the comment: What the hell IS this?! The colour isn't even close, and I even whipped out the DPPt one to compare. The colour should be the green you see in swamps (or the blue you see in... er... dark waters), and there's no shading on the blackish part. You should, and MUST, remake this.


Don't get discouraged though! I'm an amateur at spriting myself (but that doesn't mean I have no sense of "art", if you know what I mean), so let's keep it up!

 

[Suzume]

Now on to the comment: What the hell IS this?! The colour isn't even close, and I even whipped out the DPPt one to compare. The colour should be the green you see in swamps (or the blue you see in... er... dark waters), and there's no shading on the blackish part. You should, and MUST, remake this.

I think it's a devamp, so it's the Sneasel sprite from Platinum made to look more like a sprite from Crystal. At least the colors are from Crystal sprite:

So I don't think it needs to be completely remade, and at least the lights are done with GSC-looking style. (just white dots instead of a lighter color) But I agree that it needs more shades. Like with the Crystal sprite, the hands and legs are mostly black instead of dark grey. So add more black to the shades and it should look better~ ^^

 

[InMooseWeTrust]

The second generation sprites are well-known for being badly shaded and colored. I'm not sure why devamping to it is so popular, but it takes away from artistic quality immensely.

 

[*~Frost Umbreon~*]

I know that Taillow-Moltres looks weird. XD

I'm not that good at revamping, Houndoom was pretty much my first try. :P

And Sneasel is supposed to look like that, I wouldn't use the G/S Sneasel because it's badly colored.

EDIT: Fixed Sneasel.

BEHOLD, MY CRAPPY SHADING SKILLS!

 

[InMooseWeTrust]

I don't really see what the difference is.

 

[*~Frost Umbreon~*]

I don't really see what the difference is.

You don't? Just look closer. :o

 

[Azumi]

OH YEAH, we're talking about devamps here... Oops, my bad. I forgot about the colour difference, etc etc... Sorry, Sneasel...

B4:

After:

I do see the change... But the shading is really... hmm, unnatural. (That's why I hate doing devamps...) The head needs a little shading. Perhaps you could change the postion of lighting (NOT from the middle, it looks strange.) and do the shading over?

I don't really see what the difference is.

NOW you're being unforgiving, aren't you?

 

[Flaps]

Hey I actually think the baby Moltres is awesome! I think the position works because its is similar to the d/p sprite. I also love the zapdos because it actually looks bad tempered. I think the zapdos sprites nowadays look too tame. 0

Not too keen on the artiuno though - I dont think that is your fault though because I absolutly hate the anatomy of the d/p sprite of pidgey.

I can't really make any comment about your sneasel as I don't do devamps and I know nothing of what is good or bad in them.

Good work on the legendary babies hope to see more!

 

[ShaySkymin]

I love Articuno and Zapdos! Although the fires on Moltres should have no outlines, its good anyway.

Keep up the great work!

 

[BurstX]

OH YEAH, we're talking about devamps here... Oops, my bad. I forgot about the colour difference, etc etc... Sorry, Sneasel...

B4:

After:

I do see the change... But the shading is really... hmm, unnatural. (That's why I hate doing devamps...) The head needs a little shading. Perhaps you could change the postion of lighting (NOT from the middle, it looks strange.) and do the shading over?

...ok first for your first devamp its pretty good. the fact that your not using much shading is actually a good thing. if you look at some of the g/s/c sprites some have very little shading. in the case of a snealse compare it more to the g/s/c sprite see how much shading there is. but i must disagree with you azumi the head does not need any more shading, the body does. i hope this helped you a little Sneasel the Cutter.

-Kage

 

[*~Frost Umbreon~*]

Here are new ones:

An Eeveelution splice/recolor. I know it looks weird (IMO, it's kind of cute) but I pretty much started doing them. XD

Arcatales. It's just a recolor to make Ninetales look like Arcanine.

Wobbachu, something I made long ago.

A GSC-styled Shroomish, also made long ago.

I'll make more later. :D

 

[Azumi]

I think you're doing good!

I like this one. The recolour of the Eeveelution to the body and the tail makes it superb.

Looks kinda nice. The tail and the "face fur" needs some more stripes. It looks strange when the body is orange and stripey and then the tail and the "face fur" is... the same. It looks boring.

Whoa, this is one screwed up face. I suggest you make the mouth a little more to the left (the Woubbachu's right)?

Excellent. I like it.
Though I would say something quite bugs me...

YOU'RE IMPROVING! And what does that mean? You can challenge even harder challenges and do the impossible!! YEAH~!

 

[*~Frost Umbreon~*]

Looks kinda nice. The tail and the "face fur" needs some more stripes. It looks strange when the body is orange and stripey and then the tail and the "face fur" is... the same. It looks boring.

It's supposed to look like that. XD

EDIT: Fixed Arcatales and made a new one.

I think that Dragozard/Charinite has been made millions of times. D:

 

[zacnoa345]

I like the Dragonite/Charizard. Nice !!!!!!! Good work

 

[Azumi]

It's supposed to look like that. XD

I... I lost again... TT_TT
Sniff... Sorry~! *cries*

Don't really see the difference. Please explain.
(I'm not much of a observer, so yeah...)

Oh, now I see it. *L thumbs up*

Dis one is perfecto. At least I think so...

 

[*~Frost Umbreon~*]

Here are some new ones, Suizel and Floavile.