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So Close Yet So Far Away ~ An AAMayL novel ~
- Thread starter Shiny May
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peekachoo
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Oh my gosh!!!! this is like the most awesome AAMayL fan fiction ever!
the emotions of the characters were so well written and detailed that i actually felt like crying at some point!!
keeep it up shiny may!!! i cant wait for more of ur chappys! :):)
the emotions of the characters were so well written and detailed that i actually felt like crying at some point!!
keeep it up shiny may!!! i cant wait for more of ur chappys! :):)
Shiny May
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sorry for having a chap this late cos well I am hardly online here anymore and School is a real pain in the last two/three months :S But here is a new chap for you guys
Chapter 11 Save the Last People
Now that Ash and May confessed to one another that they like each other, both trainers feel much better. But only one thing needs to be done, to save Brock and Max and May?s uncle and aunt.
On their way to save Max and the others, May and Ash walk up a path. Leaning on each other they reach the top of the cliff once again. They notice a rampage, the broken cliff where Ash had fallen from, ropes on the floor and screaming from inside the mountain!
?Who is screaming that loudly?? Ash wondered as they near the entrance of the mountain.
?I recognise that scream,? May told Ash. ?It?s the same scream that always called for my mother.?
?Max!? Ash added and May nodded in agreement.
?Well that at least means that they are still alive,? May said happily as both she and Ash walked into the cave. It was dark and you couldn?t see your own hand nor couldn?t they see each other anymore.
?Well how are we going to find them when it?s so dark inside?? May wondered as she looked around.
?Well if you have a flashlight then it would be good enough, I guess,? Ash suggested.
As Ash leaned against a wall, May looked through her bag, but she couldn?t see what she was holding. But after a while she found a round and long object in her bag.
?I think I found it,? May told her friend as she searched for a button. When she found the push button on it, no light came out of the flashlight. ?Well that?s not helping much, the battery is empty.?
?I?ve got a solution for that,? Ash said happily. ?Pikachu give a small electric boost!?
With that Pikachu fired a small thundershock which fried May and made the flashlight go on.
?Pikachu!? Ash cried out angrily as he saw May?s burned face through the light.
?Pika,? it apologized to May but she walked up to the small rodent and stroke her hand over its head.
?It?s okay Pikachu,? May comforted the small pokemon. ?After all the things you?ve done today, I can hardly be mad at you today.?
?Pika!? it said happily and it jumped on May?s shoulder.
?Are you sure you are okay with it?? Ash wondered as he leaned back on May?s shoulder and they continued to walk.
?Yeah of course,? May told Ash. ?I know Pikachu didn?t do it on purpose, so I don?t really matter.?
?You know, I never thought it could happen, but I like you even more know,? Ash told May as he blushed heavily.
?Stop it Ash!? May shouted at Ash as she blushed heavily.
But May?s shouting could be heard a bit further into the cave and Simon called out for his grunts.
?I don?t know what it was, but I don?t want to take any risks! The three of you,? Simon told three grunts. ?Find out who shouted and bring them here or just finish them off. I don?t care!?
The three grunts ran out of the room through a big entrance. Simon then turned around and looked at Brock, Max and his uncle and aunt.
?It seems like your two friends will join you soon!? Simon told them and he walked off to two other grunts who were sitting behind a computer.
?Do you think it was Ash and May?? Brock whispered to Max.
?Yeah I know it for sure that it?s May?s scream, I?ve heard it many times before,? Max commented as he looked at Brock worringly.
?Then let?s hope they?ll be able to save us,? Brock also commented as he looks at his pokeballs lying on the desk near Simon.
In the meantime, May and Ash hided for the three grunts that were out looking for them. They hided in a large but small hole that was in the mountain wall. They quickly went inside and tried to be silent but Ash stepped on May?s hand and May cried out of pain.
The two grunts noticed May, Ash and Pikachu in the hole and dragged them out of it. Ash, who was already hurt, hit his leg against the wall badly.
?Hey watch it!? May said concerned as she tried to run at Ash but a grunt was holding her. They put Pikachu in a rubber bag and the other grunt threw Ash over his shoulder and they brought them to Simon.
May looked at Ash worringly and saw how he was smirking. May thought Ash had turned mad since this was no time to laugh about anything but then she noticed how the grunts didn?t take her pokeballs. She then looked back at Ash and nodded like if she had a plan.
May then let herself fall on her knees and started to act like she was in major pain.
?My stomache! It hurts!? she cried as she tried to get a pokeball out of her pack. While the grunt stood in front of her to see if she was ok, May managed to grab a pokeball and threw it out of her pack. The pokeball jumped open and in a white flash, Bulbasaur jumped out of it.
?What?!? the three grunts yelled at the same time.
?Gotcha!? May smirked as Bulbasaur released a stream of razorleafs and the ropes broke.
?Well lady,? one grunt started. ?You may have forgotten that we still have your friend and his Pikachu!?
?I haven?t forgotten that, who do you think I am? He?s my ...,? May told them but then she didn?t know what to say. Was Ash her boyfriend or still her friend? They didn?t really have time to discuss that.
?I?m her boyfriend!? Ash said happily as he smiled at May which also caused a smile on May?s face.
?You are?? May asked him as he nodded in return. ?Well then you heard it! He?s my boyfriend!?
?Well looks like we?ve got two lovers here!? the grunt smirked. ?Did we interrupt your romantic vacation??
?Well you did ruin my day, so that?s at least something I want to make you pay for and I could think for a lot more reasons!? May said angrily. ?Now let Ash and Pikachu go!?
?I don?t think so!? the grunt told May. ?Go Houndoom!? and the grunt threw out two pokeballs, both revealing the red fire dog Houndoom.
?Return Bulbasaur,? May called out as she returned Bulbasaur to its pokeball. ?Go Skitty and Combusken!?
May threw out two other pokeballs which revealed the red chick pokemon Combusken and the small pink kitten Skitty.
?Houndoom use flamethrower!? the grunt yelled and both Houndoom opened their mouths and released a big stream of fire. The flames headed straight for May and her two pokemon.
?Blizzard Skitty!? May called out and Skitty released a white coloured icy attack which immediately headed for Houndoom?s flames. The two attacks collided and the flames melt the ice but the ice also made sure the flames stopped there.
?Bite!? the grunt ordered his two Houndooms and the Houndooms quickly headed for Skitty and Combusken.
?Double kick Combusken and Skitty use double slap!? May ordered.
As Houndoom approached Combusken and Skitty with their mouths wide open, Combusken throws his legs in the air and kicks one of the Houndoom with his legs. Combusken managed to kick the Houndoom but Houndoom also managed to bite in Combusken?s leg. Houndoom swirled Combusken around and threw him against a nearby wall.
Skitty in the meanwhile managed to slap the Houndoom with its tail multiple times without being bitten by Houndoom. But then suddenly Houndoom released a new set of flames at Skitty which burned a large part of her body. Slowly Skitty managed to get up but is badly wounded.
?This is not good. I don?t know if I can do this!? May told herself as she looked at her pokemon and Ash.
?Come on May, don?t give up! The May I know doesn?t give up this easily!? Ash cheered.
?You?re right Ash!? May shouted back at him. ?Combusken use fire spin!?
Combusken released a large ring of fire at both Houndoom which made them collapse on the floor but they weren?t defeated yet so May continued to battle.
?Double slap, Skitty! Combusken do your double kick again!? May told her pokemon.
Both pokemon leaped forward and they kicked and slapped the Houndoom till they were badly hurt. Houndoom tried to get up but their attempt failed and they collapsed on the floor as the three grunts looked at May frightened.
?Now let Ash and Pikachu go!? May called out as the grunt put Ash back on the floor and released Pikachu out of the bag and made a run for it.
?Great job May!? Ash complimented May as she helped him get back on his feet. As a thank you, he kissed her once again. May?s heart started to beat fast and hard and after the kiss, she smiled at Ash.
?Thanks,? she said with a bright smile on her face as did one appear on Ash?s face.
?You?re welcome,? Ash replied.
?Now let?s save the others!? May suggested.
Together they continue to walk while holding a flashlight and soon they notice light coming out of a room. They come closer where they see the three grunts from before telling the entire story to Simon. They also notice Max and Brock sitting on the ground, so they decide to head inside immediately.
?Howdy Simon,? May shouted as she entered the room. ?Good to see you again! NOT!?
?Well I am pleased to see you,? Simon replied. ?I can now finish off with the two of you myself! It seems like my Salamence wasn?t strong enough for you two. Where did you leave it??
?Near that nice pit you dug out for me and May,? Ash replied.
?Well my Metagross will finish it off for me!? Simon replied as he threw out another pokeball which revealed a big metal pokemon with a large X on its head.
?Skitty, Combusken can you still battle?? May asked her pokemon.
?Skit? ?Combus,? they both replied.
?Great! Then Skitty use assist and Combusken use your flamethrower!?
?Go Snorunt!? Ash called out and his little ice pokemon jumped out of the pokeball. ?Ice beam!?
Combusken released a large stream of flames at Metagross, completely frying it and Skitty did her assist attack which turned out to be an ember attack much to May?s luck. But Metagross didn?t give up and leaped forward and tackled Skitty and Combusken against the wall, knocking it out. May quickly returned the two pokemon to their pokeballs as Ash continues the battle.
Snorunt quickly jumps out of Metagross? way and releases an ice beam attack which freezes a large part of Metagross? body, except for two feet. So quickly Metagross smashes itself against the wall, making the ice break. Even though it hurt itself a little, it can still battle.
?Snorunt use icy wind!? Ash ordered his Snorunt.
A white storm goes around the entire room and it hurts Metagross a little but it doesn?t effect Metagross much.
?Psychic!? Simon commanded his pokemon as it released a purple beam at Snorunt, hurting it badly. It quickly headed for Snorunt, but it jumped up right in time, avoiding Metagross? attack.
?Hyper beam!? Simon quickly commanded and as soon as Metagross unleashes his strong orange colored beam which causes rampage in the entire room. It nearly hit Max and co and does destroy the computers in the room and blasts off a few grunts, leaving Simon behind alone.
?Watch it Metagross!? Simon yelled at his pokemon but it seemed to be on a rampage and stopped listening to Simon.
?Come on out Torkoal!? Ash called as he also released Torkoal out of his pokeball. ?Flamethrower and Snorunt use crunch!?
Torkoal quickly released some flames at Metagross, completely frying it and making it stop firing hyperbeams all around the room. Metagross collapsed on the floor but it does try to get up again, but Snorunt quickly bit Metagross in his leg, making it collaps again. Simon quickly returns his Metagross to its pokeball and runs off.
?I will get my revenge one day!? Simon yelled as he ran out of the room, leaving everybody and a destroyed room behind.
?Yes we did it Ash!? May cried out happily and hugged Ash tightly.
?Hey how about us?? Max cried out as he saw his sister and Ash hugging. ?You guys make me sick, but it?s good to see you happy again sis.?
?Good to see you too max!? May commented as she stops hugging Ash and releases her uncle, aunt, Brock and Max as Ash rests on the ground.
?So everybody is okay?? May asked concerned as everybody agrees that they are all fine.
?Well that?s a nice visit, May,? her uncle replied. ?Shall we do this again someday??
?Sure!? May smirked and with the entire group reunited again, they return back to their uncle?s house. There they try to call their parents to tell them the good news that everybody is safe again but there?s no answer.
?Well why don?t you give it a try in Pallet?? Ash suggested. ?Then you could also meet my mom, May!?
?I?d be happy to meet your mom,? May commented with a large smile on her face.
?Great, then that?s our plan. Do you agree guys?? Ash asked Brock and Max and they both nodded in agreement.
They say their final goodbyes to May and Max?s uncle and aunt and take the bus back to Pallet Town. In the bus Max and Brock sit next to each other and May sleeps on Ash?s shoulder.
?So Ash, so you and May are now a couple?? Max asked in a teasing tone.
?Yeah we are. Is that a problem?? Ash asked Max.
?No, so when am I going to be an uncle?? Max asked teasingly but before Ash could answer, Max received a smash on his head from May.
?You know I wasn?t that fast asleep, Max!? May commented as she looked at Max angrily but quickly had fallen asleep again on Ash?s shoulder.
After a few minutes, all four of them had fallen asleep. When arriving in Pallet Town, the bus driver woke them up and the bus stopped in front of Ash?s house. They stepped out of the bus where they were greeted by Ash?s mom Delia and Mr. Mime. Ash and May were holding each other?s hands as Delia quickly hugged Ash.
?Hi Ash!? his mom greeted happily. ?And you two must be May and Max??
?Yes we are,? May replied politely. ?Nice to meet you mrs. Ketchum!?
?And what is this?? Delia wondered as she noticed May and Ash holding hands.
?Uhm mom, May is my girlfriend,? Ash told his mother.
?Honey that?s great!? Delia told her son as she hugged him once more, which kind of freaked out everybody since it seemed Ash could hardly breath.
?Au!? Ash yelled.
?Did I hurt you honey?? Delia asked concerned.
?A little, it?s just that I?ve jumped off a cliff in order to save May and it wasn?t a painless fall,? Ash explained. His mom felt sorry for him badly so they all took them in for a cup of hot tea.
?Oh yeah mom, could we also call May and Max?s parents? We couldn?t reach them when we were in Orre,? Ash asked his mom and she happily told them it was okay.
May quickly dialed the number and after a few seconds of waiting, both of their parents appeared on the screen. They told them the entire story of how they saved Brock and Max and their aunt and uncle and how Ash and May were now a couple.
?That?s great!? Caroline replied happily. ?I?m happy everybody is ok. You know May and Max, we?ve also got some news for you two.?
?News?? May and Max both wondered. ?What?s the good news??
?Well your mother is pregnant, you?re getting a baby sister or brother!? Norman told his children who looked in awe at the screen in front of them, just like Brock and Ash who were also in awe.
?Pregnant?? May and Max both asked again.
Chapter 11 Save the Last People
Now that Ash and May confessed to one another that they like each other, both trainers feel much better. But only one thing needs to be done, to save Brock and Max and May?s uncle and aunt.
On their way to save Max and the others, May and Ash walk up a path. Leaning on each other they reach the top of the cliff once again. They notice a rampage, the broken cliff where Ash had fallen from, ropes on the floor and screaming from inside the mountain!
?Who is screaming that loudly?? Ash wondered as they near the entrance of the mountain.
?I recognise that scream,? May told Ash. ?It?s the same scream that always called for my mother.?
?Max!? Ash added and May nodded in agreement.
?Well that at least means that they are still alive,? May said happily as both she and Ash walked into the cave. It was dark and you couldn?t see your own hand nor couldn?t they see each other anymore.
?Well how are we going to find them when it?s so dark inside?? May wondered as she looked around.
?Well if you have a flashlight then it would be good enough, I guess,? Ash suggested.
As Ash leaned against a wall, May looked through her bag, but she couldn?t see what she was holding. But after a while she found a round and long object in her bag.
?I think I found it,? May told her friend as she searched for a button. When she found the push button on it, no light came out of the flashlight. ?Well that?s not helping much, the battery is empty.?
?I?ve got a solution for that,? Ash said happily. ?Pikachu give a small electric boost!?
With that Pikachu fired a small thundershock which fried May and made the flashlight go on.
?Pikachu!? Ash cried out angrily as he saw May?s burned face through the light.
?Pika,? it apologized to May but she walked up to the small rodent and stroke her hand over its head.
?It?s okay Pikachu,? May comforted the small pokemon. ?After all the things you?ve done today, I can hardly be mad at you today.?
?Pika!? it said happily and it jumped on May?s shoulder.
?Are you sure you are okay with it?? Ash wondered as he leaned back on May?s shoulder and they continued to walk.
?Yeah of course,? May told Ash. ?I know Pikachu didn?t do it on purpose, so I don?t really matter.?
?You know, I never thought it could happen, but I like you even more know,? Ash told May as he blushed heavily.
?Stop it Ash!? May shouted at Ash as she blushed heavily.
But May?s shouting could be heard a bit further into the cave and Simon called out for his grunts.
?I don?t know what it was, but I don?t want to take any risks! The three of you,? Simon told three grunts. ?Find out who shouted and bring them here or just finish them off. I don?t care!?
The three grunts ran out of the room through a big entrance. Simon then turned around and looked at Brock, Max and his uncle and aunt.
?It seems like your two friends will join you soon!? Simon told them and he walked off to two other grunts who were sitting behind a computer.
?Do you think it was Ash and May?? Brock whispered to Max.
?Yeah I know it for sure that it?s May?s scream, I?ve heard it many times before,? Max commented as he looked at Brock worringly.
?Then let?s hope they?ll be able to save us,? Brock also commented as he looks at his pokeballs lying on the desk near Simon.
In the meantime, May and Ash hided for the three grunts that were out looking for them. They hided in a large but small hole that was in the mountain wall. They quickly went inside and tried to be silent but Ash stepped on May?s hand and May cried out of pain.
The two grunts noticed May, Ash and Pikachu in the hole and dragged them out of it. Ash, who was already hurt, hit his leg against the wall badly.
?Hey watch it!? May said concerned as she tried to run at Ash but a grunt was holding her. They put Pikachu in a rubber bag and the other grunt threw Ash over his shoulder and they brought them to Simon.
May looked at Ash worringly and saw how he was smirking. May thought Ash had turned mad since this was no time to laugh about anything but then she noticed how the grunts didn?t take her pokeballs. She then looked back at Ash and nodded like if she had a plan.
May then let herself fall on her knees and started to act like she was in major pain.
?My stomache! It hurts!? she cried as she tried to get a pokeball out of her pack. While the grunt stood in front of her to see if she was ok, May managed to grab a pokeball and threw it out of her pack. The pokeball jumped open and in a white flash, Bulbasaur jumped out of it.
?What?!? the three grunts yelled at the same time.
?Gotcha!? May smirked as Bulbasaur released a stream of razorleafs and the ropes broke.
?Well lady,? one grunt started. ?You may have forgotten that we still have your friend and his Pikachu!?
?I haven?t forgotten that, who do you think I am? He?s my ...,? May told them but then she didn?t know what to say. Was Ash her boyfriend or still her friend? They didn?t really have time to discuss that.
?I?m her boyfriend!? Ash said happily as he smiled at May which also caused a smile on May?s face.
?You are?? May asked him as he nodded in return. ?Well then you heard it! He?s my boyfriend!?
?Well looks like we?ve got two lovers here!? the grunt smirked. ?Did we interrupt your romantic vacation??
?Well you did ruin my day, so that?s at least something I want to make you pay for and I could think for a lot more reasons!? May said angrily. ?Now let Ash and Pikachu go!?
?I don?t think so!? the grunt told May. ?Go Houndoom!? and the grunt threw out two pokeballs, both revealing the red fire dog Houndoom.
?Return Bulbasaur,? May called out as she returned Bulbasaur to its pokeball. ?Go Skitty and Combusken!?
May threw out two other pokeballs which revealed the red chick pokemon Combusken and the small pink kitten Skitty.
?Houndoom use flamethrower!? the grunt yelled and both Houndoom opened their mouths and released a big stream of fire. The flames headed straight for May and her two pokemon.
?Blizzard Skitty!? May called out and Skitty released a white coloured icy attack which immediately headed for Houndoom?s flames. The two attacks collided and the flames melt the ice but the ice also made sure the flames stopped there.
?Bite!? the grunt ordered his two Houndooms and the Houndooms quickly headed for Skitty and Combusken.
?Double kick Combusken and Skitty use double slap!? May ordered.
As Houndoom approached Combusken and Skitty with their mouths wide open, Combusken throws his legs in the air and kicks one of the Houndoom with his legs. Combusken managed to kick the Houndoom but Houndoom also managed to bite in Combusken?s leg. Houndoom swirled Combusken around and threw him against a nearby wall.
Skitty in the meanwhile managed to slap the Houndoom with its tail multiple times without being bitten by Houndoom. But then suddenly Houndoom released a new set of flames at Skitty which burned a large part of her body. Slowly Skitty managed to get up but is badly wounded.
?This is not good. I don?t know if I can do this!? May told herself as she looked at her pokemon and Ash.
?Come on May, don?t give up! The May I know doesn?t give up this easily!? Ash cheered.
?You?re right Ash!? May shouted back at him. ?Combusken use fire spin!?
Combusken released a large ring of fire at both Houndoom which made them collapse on the floor but they weren?t defeated yet so May continued to battle.
?Double slap, Skitty! Combusken do your double kick again!? May told her pokemon.
Both pokemon leaped forward and they kicked and slapped the Houndoom till they were badly hurt. Houndoom tried to get up but their attempt failed and they collapsed on the floor as the three grunts looked at May frightened.
?Now let Ash and Pikachu go!? May called out as the grunt put Ash back on the floor and released Pikachu out of the bag and made a run for it.
?Great job May!? Ash complimented May as she helped him get back on his feet. As a thank you, he kissed her once again. May?s heart started to beat fast and hard and after the kiss, she smiled at Ash.
?Thanks,? she said with a bright smile on her face as did one appear on Ash?s face.
?You?re welcome,? Ash replied.
?Now let?s save the others!? May suggested.
Together they continue to walk while holding a flashlight and soon they notice light coming out of a room. They come closer where they see the three grunts from before telling the entire story to Simon. They also notice Max and Brock sitting on the ground, so they decide to head inside immediately.
?Howdy Simon,? May shouted as she entered the room. ?Good to see you again! NOT!?
?Well I am pleased to see you,? Simon replied. ?I can now finish off with the two of you myself! It seems like my Salamence wasn?t strong enough for you two. Where did you leave it??
?Near that nice pit you dug out for me and May,? Ash replied.
?Well my Metagross will finish it off for me!? Simon replied as he threw out another pokeball which revealed a big metal pokemon with a large X on its head.
?Skitty, Combusken can you still battle?? May asked her pokemon.
?Skit? ?Combus,? they both replied.
?Great! Then Skitty use assist and Combusken use your flamethrower!?
?Go Snorunt!? Ash called out and his little ice pokemon jumped out of the pokeball. ?Ice beam!?
Combusken released a large stream of flames at Metagross, completely frying it and Skitty did her assist attack which turned out to be an ember attack much to May?s luck. But Metagross didn?t give up and leaped forward and tackled Skitty and Combusken against the wall, knocking it out. May quickly returned the two pokemon to their pokeballs as Ash continues the battle.
Snorunt quickly jumps out of Metagross? way and releases an ice beam attack which freezes a large part of Metagross? body, except for two feet. So quickly Metagross smashes itself against the wall, making the ice break. Even though it hurt itself a little, it can still battle.
?Snorunt use icy wind!? Ash ordered his Snorunt.
A white storm goes around the entire room and it hurts Metagross a little but it doesn?t effect Metagross much.
?Psychic!? Simon commanded his pokemon as it released a purple beam at Snorunt, hurting it badly. It quickly headed for Snorunt, but it jumped up right in time, avoiding Metagross? attack.
?Hyper beam!? Simon quickly commanded and as soon as Metagross unleashes his strong orange colored beam which causes rampage in the entire room. It nearly hit Max and co and does destroy the computers in the room and blasts off a few grunts, leaving Simon behind alone.
?Watch it Metagross!? Simon yelled at his pokemon but it seemed to be on a rampage and stopped listening to Simon.
?Come on out Torkoal!? Ash called as he also released Torkoal out of his pokeball. ?Flamethrower and Snorunt use crunch!?
Torkoal quickly released some flames at Metagross, completely frying it and making it stop firing hyperbeams all around the room. Metagross collapsed on the floor but it does try to get up again, but Snorunt quickly bit Metagross in his leg, making it collaps again. Simon quickly returns his Metagross to its pokeball and runs off.
?I will get my revenge one day!? Simon yelled as he ran out of the room, leaving everybody and a destroyed room behind.
?Yes we did it Ash!? May cried out happily and hugged Ash tightly.
?Hey how about us?? Max cried out as he saw his sister and Ash hugging. ?You guys make me sick, but it?s good to see you happy again sis.?
?Good to see you too max!? May commented as she stops hugging Ash and releases her uncle, aunt, Brock and Max as Ash rests on the ground.
?So everybody is okay?? May asked concerned as everybody agrees that they are all fine.
?Well that?s a nice visit, May,? her uncle replied. ?Shall we do this again someday??
?Sure!? May smirked and with the entire group reunited again, they return back to their uncle?s house. There they try to call their parents to tell them the good news that everybody is safe again but there?s no answer.
?Well why don?t you give it a try in Pallet?? Ash suggested. ?Then you could also meet my mom, May!?
?I?d be happy to meet your mom,? May commented with a large smile on her face.
?Great, then that?s our plan. Do you agree guys?? Ash asked Brock and Max and they both nodded in agreement.
They say their final goodbyes to May and Max?s uncle and aunt and take the bus back to Pallet Town. In the bus Max and Brock sit next to each other and May sleeps on Ash?s shoulder.
?So Ash, so you and May are now a couple?? Max asked in a teasing tone.
?Yeah we are. Is that a problem?? Ash asked Max.
?No, so when am I going to be an uncle?? Max asked teasingly but before Ash could answer, Max received a smash on his head from May.
?You know I wasn?t that fast asleep, Max!? May commented as she looked at Max angrily but quickly had fallen asleep again on Ash?s shoulder.
After a few minutes, all four of them had fallen asleep. When arriving in Pallet Town, the bus driver woke them up and the bus stopped in front of Ash?s house. They stepped out of the bus where they were greeted by Ash?s mom Delia and Mr. Mime. Ash and May were holding each other?s hands as Delia quickly hugged Ash.
?Hi Ash!? his mom greeted happily. ?And you two must be May and Max??
?Yes we are,? May replied politely. ?Nice to meet you mrs. Ketchum!?
?And what is this?? Delia wondered as she noticed May and Ash holding hands.
?Uhm mom, May is my girlfriend,? Ash told his mother.
?Honey that?s great!? Delia told her son as she hugged him once more, which kind of freaked out everybody since it seemed Ash could hardly breath.
?Au!? Ash yelled.
?Did I hurt you honey?? Delia asked concerned.
?A little, it?s just that I?ve jumped off a cliff in order to save May and it wasn?t a painless fall,? Ash explained. His mom felt sorry for him badly so they all took them in for a cup of hot tea.
?Oh yeah mom, could we also call May and Max?s parents? We couldn?t reach them when we were in Orre,? Ash asked his mom and she happily told them it was okay.
May quickly dialed the number and after a few seconds of waiting, both of their parents appeared on the screen. They told them the entire story of how they saved Brock and Max and their aunt and uncle and how Ash and May were now a couple.
?That?s great!? Caroline replied happily. ?I?m happy everybody is ok. You know May and Max, we?ve also got some news for you two.?
?News?? May and Max both wondered. ?What?s the good news??
?Well your mother is pregnant, you?re getting a baby sister or brother!? Norman told his children who looked in awe at the screen in front of them, just like Brock and Ash who were also in awe.
?Pregnant?? May and Max both asked again.
Asura Nirosuki
Shes a good person~
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so shiny may it was you wrote this fic? aren't you going to post the rest?.
Shiny May
Gilmore Girls and May Fan!
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I'm still working on the next chapters. I don't have loads of time to write for my fanfics. School is a pain!
Lily Knight
MWHAHAHAHAAA....ahem.
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Wat the haunter girl said. Keep posting!!! Keep posting!!! Keep posting!!! Keep posting!!! Keep posting!!! Keep posting!!! Keep posting!!!
sorry. Wat PAIGE PELLETIER said. Dont hurt me
sorry. Wat PAIGE PELLETIER said. Dont hurt me
Lily Knight
MWHAHAHAHAAA....ahem.
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Keep posting!!!Keep posting!!!Keep posting!!!Keep posting!!!Keep posting!!!Keep posting!!!Keep posting!!! aaaaaah*falls off chair*
Pokemon Trainer Red
Hello my name is Red
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Hey i have readed all right now! keep working please!!!! Even my eye's hurts i want to read more!
Asura Nirosuki
Shes a good person~
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It's sad she did not like brendan..............Over that it was great!
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Nice story but....
you just stopped at chapter 11...and it's already about more than 4 months but you hasent done anything
you just stopped at chapter 11...and it's already about more than 4 months but you hasent done anything
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Hurry write the next chapter I love it so far.
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uh-oh
looks to moi she wont be back for eternity....='( I really luff the story....
looks to moi she wont be back for eternity....='( I really luff the story....
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o_o; Considering this thread is incredibly old and its starter hasn't been around since July of this year...I think it's safe to say this won't be updated. As per the rules, you can't revive threads that are over a month old so I'm going to close this. If the original author comes back and wants to update, s/he can either start a new thread or request this reopened.
*closes*
*closes*
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