Camp Kill Yourself
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- Seen Feb 16, 2006
I wrote the first part of this a long time ago, and used it in something else. Then I read it and go another idea from it. I liked the second idea a lot more. I'll post both the orginal and the edited version.
Orginal
You say you can save yourself
But broken wings keep you grounded,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
Your dreams melt away from you
The world takes everything away,
The thought that keeps you smiling
Is that it will soon be over.
To see the world through your eyes
Through all your pain and suffering,
Knowing everything is wrong
But saying everything is right.
Sing a song about your life
A song about cutting your wrist,
Sing of sorrow that you feel
A song about how they hurt you.
Even if I could hold on
You`re already lost anyway,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
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Edited (song) version
You say you can save yourself
But broken wings keep you grounded,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
You want someone to give you the world
But you're always settling for less
But when I see you now
You say you have it all.
Oh so lost in the world all alone
The girl with the reluctant smile
I tried my best to keep away
But you always seemed to follow.
And to look through your eyes today
I wonder how you see us all
I wonder if you know how perfect it is
I wonder if you really care at all.
Oh so lost in the world all alone
The girl with the reluctant smile
I tried my best to keep away
But you always seemed to follow.
I feel reluctant to listen anymore
You always think somethings wrong
But I see no problems at all
Why can't you be happy?
Oh so lost in the world all alone
The girl with the reluctant smile
I tried my best to keep away
But you always seemed to follow.
And I never thought it would be like this
No, I never thought at all
And I never thought to look away
I guess I just care too much.
And when the world wants to kill you
You cry all alone at night
When the world seems to hurt you
You cry alone at night.
Even if I could hold on
You`re already lost anyway,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
Orginal
You say you can save yourself
But broken wings keep you grounded,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
Your dreams melt away from you
The world takes everything away,
The thought that keeps you smiling
Is that it will soon be over.
To see the world through your eyes
Through all your pain and suffering,
Knowing everything is wrong
But saying everything is right.
Sing a song about your life
A song about cutting your wrist,
Sing of sorrow that you feel
A song about how they hurt you.
Even if I could hold on
You`re already lost anyway,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
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Edited (song) version
You say you can save yourself
But broken wings keep you grounded,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.
You want someone to give you the world
But you're always settling for less
But when I see you now
You say you have it all.
Oh so lost in the world all alone
The girl with the reluctant smile
I tried my best to keep away
But you always seemed to follow.
And to look through your eyes today
I wonder how you see us all
I wonder if you know how perfect it is
I wonder if you really care at all.
Oh so lost in the world all alone
The girl with the reluctant smile
I tried my best to keep away
But you always seemed to follow.
I feel reluctant to listen anymore
You always think somethings wrong
But I see no problems at all
Why can't you be happy?
Oh so lost in the world all alone
The girl with the reluctant smile
I tried my best to keep away
But you always seemed to follow.
And I never thought it would be like this
No, I never thought at all
And I never thought to look away
I guess I just care too much.
And when the world wants to kill you
You cry all alone at night
When the world seems to hurt you
You cry alone at night.
Even if I could hold on
You`re already lost anyway,
Cast away from perfection
The first to fall from paradise.