Sonic: The Path To Success~

Jolteon

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    Ok XD, this is gonna be my first sprite comic, so dont blame me if its kinda crappy XD, so ok, theres a little plot before the actual making of the comic, to just push it forward XD, and here it is:


    Everyone, every team, has finished the tournament battle, after team Dark picking up the win, alot has changed in the world, and that was just in 24 hours, Charmy goes missing, Amy, Cream and Cheese have also disappeared, leaving Big the only member of Team rose, Froggy has went missing, and everything has went up into a huge tangled up into a height of confusion, Omega, in the battle, was the main cause Team Dark won, after selfdestructing over an unknown team, who cheated there way to the finals, and since Team Sonic were the only team to get away -safe-, they are getting prepared for the tourney next year, but who knows what awaits them, which brings them to just now, they were transported to the four corners in the world, just not with eachother...


    *image removed*

    edit: Ok, done XD
     
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    you might want to put up two boxes each, it'll make each of them much more clear ^^ or Image shack might help
     
    Its weird and kinda small i had to squint at it to read it

    But for a first try it pretty good

    *gives jolteon a bag of cookies*
     
    Jolty it's pretty good ^_^ I love the backround! It's awsome! And the charecectors are amazing! You must have really looked hard for them =D just you might want to make it a bit more clear on what's going on, like what team lost? XD and where are they? XD anyway I thought it was funny! If you need any help i'm always open for questions
     
    Where did you get those Sonic X sprites??
     
    I don't like to be mean but this comic like AHD said makes no sense.
     
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