I think it's best that we do the story in increments, like for instance when I just sent you the section from the start to the second route, I think that's a good way to go about it. I'll send you character transcripts too so you know exactly what to make the characters say. That message was just the gist of it, and only contained a few of the quotes. I'll have to write up the whole beginning professor lecture that happens when you start a new game, etc., so whoever's doing the scripting, leave the dialogue itself blank and stick to the movement stuff for now.
In the meantime I have two papers due, two review sessions to attend, two miscellaneous appointments to make, and a midterm to take within the next few days. After that, however, my time should be freed up much more and I'll be able to do a lot more writing for the story. Until then, I'll mostly be doing smaller amounts of storyboarding/writing like the one I did most recently.