Space Guard 05's Sprite Comic

[Space Guard]

This is my first ever sprite comic. Critisism is welcome and ideas are welcome!
Episode 1

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4-Phone by adamski148 (Thanx)

Hopefully some one can make some fanart.

Enjoy!

 

[Esupio]

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okay theres nothing great about this at all actually its kinda rubbish why did ELM call him up and OAK be there to meet him
thats stupid and it doesn't work
and people should be able to tell whats going on you don't NEED to tell them ??

 

[Adam_148]

why is Gary Red's Grandson Chris? That's weird

 

[Space Guard]

Sorry I need to edit it. and Balzind Espeo. It is my first comic.

 

[Adam_148]

yeah, you're first, but you still coulda PMed me with it for the next eppy

 

[Karasuma]

I cant see the eppys dude? cant rate it yet.

 

[The Dash]

Links are broken.So....Yeah what MT said.

 

[Space Guard]

I'm just editing them. they should be up in a mo!

 

[Esupio]

Sorry I need to edit it. and Balzind Espeo. It is my first comic.

No exscuse and you made a grammar mistake somewhere in the comic

fr/lg continued is signomi's first comic, thats just an awesome comic. so its no exscuse

 

[Karasuma]

yeah thats good news.................

 

[Space Guard]

So what i made 1 grammar mistake which is Biys intead of boys!

 

[Karasuma]

Now thats better. I love that new pallet town. looks so cool.^^

 

[Space Guard]

Yes, it is from my RPGmaker2003 game. The place on it is Turnsville.

 

[Karasuma]

Well thats cool. Your hack being turned into comics. So will the Hiro fight Gym leaders?

 

[Space Guard]

Probably. While I am at it to continue I need a battle system. A picture will do fine.

 

[Karasuma]

If you want all sprites you must go to SpritesResource.com^^

 

[spam monkey V2]

hi chris i'm posting!!!!!!!!!!! well i think so am not sure yet

 

[Space Guard]

Ok I'll try that. next eppy up probably by tommorow. (Do spriters rescource do the charcters used for batteling in FR/LG)

 

[spam monkey V2]

your comic was not at all original, i must say

 

[Space Guard]

Stop going off topic. Spam Monkeyv2 you don't post our names!