sam_sdc: You need to work on your outlining. In many part (especially around the head), it seems too light. It needs to be a bit darker. That's the only major thing I can see.
Is this better? I added some outlining.
sam_sdc: You need to work on your outlining. In many part (especially around the head), it seems too light. It needs to be a bit darker. That's the only major thing I can see.
As I said before, can we keep posts not relating to the game out of this? You can post it in the Spriters Showcase / Discussion Thread, or maybe send a VM/PM to the person who gave you criticism.Is this better? I added some outlining.
This is a game, not a thread for you to post your irrelevant sprites and spam by blatantly advertising your game. :\wow xD rate this on how sucky it is, and i didnt look at last post by accident
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this is why i need a spriter for my MMORPG, pm if ur interested
give me a ....... gengar / ghastly
Um.. yeah, can we not do this from now on, please? If you were beaten and want to show off your sprite, go post it in the Spriters Showcase / Discussion Thread, or, if you have a sprite showcase thread, post it there.Aww, I'm late. I might as well post my Flymaldo anyway. What do you guys think?