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Well I'm not sure if I'm posting in the right forum but xD the thing is I'm not sure if I should make this about a pokemon or something else. I REALLY better not make it an eevee fic because those are sooooo over-used. But I can't think of very many pokemon that fit well in this situation...so I was wondering if I should make it a fanfic at all?
Anyway...
This is just a snippet of this cuddly little cub/kit scene...The way I find that most pokemon-perspective fics start out. It starts out pretty sloppy but I didn't really put a whole lot of effort into this cause I don't know if I should continue it...meh. Err, c/c I guess. *dodges tomatoes.*
[PS: I really have no idea how do describe the sound of licking, i probably will change that because it's not a very good/graceful way to start.]
"It's pitch dark…where am I?
I feel…warm…
What is… that noise?
It was the first noise I heard... a slurping, scraping sound…which was soon accompanied by a feeling of something warm and moist against my fur. I could see nothing, my eyes were blurry and the surroundings were dark. But, I felt…others…furry bodies around me…I felt warm breath on my back and the warm, moist thing touched me again. It was strangely comforting…I don't remember much else after that.
Later I learned many things, but for the first, short and most comfortable part of my life, I knew little of the world outside our cozy den. Mother told us of the stars that made the light at night, and the biggest star, the sun. She told us also of the moon, who shared the sun's glow and helped the stars make light for the world at night. She told us other things…I don't really remember. I was most fascinated with the light outside the den, the bright window that framed the sky…"
Anyway...
This is just a snippet of this cuddly little cub/kit scene...The way I find that most pokemon-perspective fics start out. It starts out pretty sloppy but I didn't really put a whole lot of effort into this cause I don't know if I should continue it...meh. Err, c/c I guess. *dodges tomatoes.*
[PS: I really have no idea how do describe the sound of licking, i probably will change that because it's not a very good/graceful way to start.]
"It's pitch dark…where am I?
I feel…warm…
What is… that noise?
It was the first noise I heard... a slurping, scraping sound…which was soon accompanied by a feeling of something warm and moist against my fur. I could see nothing, my eyes were blurry and the surroundings were dark. But, I felt…others…furry bodies around me…I felt warm breath on my back and the warm, moist thing touched me again. It was strangely comforting…I don't remember much else after that.
Later I learned many things, but for the first, short and most comfortable part of my life, I knew little of the world outside our cozy den. Mother told us of the stars that made the light at night, and the biggest star, the sun. She told us also of the moon, who shared the sun's glow and helped the stars make light for the world at night. She told us other things…I don't really remember. I was most fascinated with the light outside the den, the bright window that framed the sky…"