Sting of the Season

[Shadow]

Here is a small little promo I made to celebrate the winter season. A beloved Ice Pok?mon, Sneasel. Comment and post any errors you see. ^.^

 

[PokemonChampion2K4]

I like it keep it up I give it a 8/10

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

I like it keep it up I give it a 8/10

Uhhh..No offense, but give a reason why it's 8/10. No matter what it's always helpful to give your advice for a card and what that person can do to improve.

Anyways, here's my rating

~Art/Originality: Ken Sugimori art seems to be blurry, I don't know if you ment to have it like that. The attacks are original too. 9/10
~Placement: Placement is perfect. However, you should change the length of the effect text to 96% instead of 89%. Due to a recent discovery, thats what it's suppose to be. 10/10
~Brokeness: The PokeBody is good and the attacks seem to be even. Good work 10/10
~Usabilty: Very usable, but I think there suppose to be a 20x regardless since your doing damage to "Defending" Pokemon. 9/10
~Fun Factor: A Very fun card to use!!!! Indeed good job. 10/10

TOTAL: 48/50 ~ Good Work!

 

[ravenstorture]

Yeah, the art is blurry, but I think it was mean't to be that way. It seems like he is still going fast or whatever. I still think the Poke-Body could be worded better, but I don't have any examples. It may be fine, just me being a dork. Anywho, I like it.

 

[MiNuN*]

SUP SHADOW! XD

ART: Some originality here. Though a bit fuzzled. 3/5
TEXT: Justify thing working.. but Frost Nova; lil overpowered. 4/5
PLACEMENT: Nice.. 5/5
MISSING: Your rarity. Or the Promo Icon. 3/5
NAME: Good job; though still can adjust XD 4/5
OTHER: K00l.. 5/5
OVERALL: Good stuff as always. 24/30
COMMENT: Trying not to be too fancy, yet not too boring, k00l man, just what I like to see. XD

 

[Shadow]

Yeah, the art is blurry, but I think it was mean't to be that way. It seems like he is still going fast or whatever. I still think the Poke-Body could be worded better, but I don't have any examples. It may be fine, just me being a dork. Anywho, I like it.

Pokebody wording was based a little on Rocket's Secret Base or whatever but it could be wrong for newer cards.

~Art/Originality: Ken Sugimori art seems to be blurry, I don't know if you ment to have it like that. The attacks are original too. 9/10
~Placement: Placement is perfect. However, you should change the length of the effect text to 96% instead of 89%. Due to a recent discovery, thats what it's suppose to be. 10/10

Art is blurry because its going fast. Sneasel is a fast Pokemon so it's going fast. =p And the width is set at 96%... If it looks wrong then it's Photoshop's fault, not mine.

MISSING: Your rarity. Or the Promo Icon. 3/5

I wasn't aware of a promo symbol for newer cards.

 

[MiNuN*]

Oh and your font size needs to be bigger. It looks awkward like the way you did it there.
Pokebody image is supposed to be in line with the text. E.g
- [POKE-BODY] Shiny Armor
- Whenever you attach a blah blah vblah balh balh
[c][c][c][c][c] Hyper Beam
You cant attack next blah blah blah blah blah blah
Not..
[POKE-BODY] Shiny Armor
Whenever you balh blah blah blah
[c][c][c][c][c] Hyper Beam
You blah blah blah blah blah periods.

Anyways, if you dont understand that then my new card will be a perfect example.