Strange Things

armadilloHD

armadilloHD

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    In the year A.D. 5768 human technology has excelled farther than anyone can imagine. This is the work of the "Wizards" or controllers of nature. These individuals are able to control elements around them like telekenisis. Through this, humans have been able to excel civilization to it's peak. One day the genetic code of one of the wizards breaks, causing it to go on an unstoppable killing spree, soon after, most wizards succumb to this horrible disease as well. Scientists found out, that this disease was caused by a "Soocumbo" or succumbing virus, which causes the wizard to use their power to the fullest. In turn, causing robberies and murders. Yet some have been unaffected, or are even invulnerable to it. Why is this? And who has created the "Soocumbo."

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    Pretty good so far. The only real problem I see wrong is the font which is kind of hard to read. Other than thats its great you get a 9/10.
     
    The font itself is pretty weird. And what's up with the title screen?
     
    DeoxysOwns22 said:
    Yea The title screen is horrible I can't even see what it is or means besides the words at the top. Also, the font, like everyone else said, is horrible and hard to read. Just use normal font next time or something. Overall I give this comic a 4/10
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    What's weird is how that review gives no helpful advice.
     
    Do you know what you just said? Let us review what I put-

    Yea The title screen is horrible I can't even see what it is or means besides the words at the top. Also, the font, like everyone else said, is horrible and hard to read. Just use normal font next time or something. Overall I give this comic a 4/10
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    .....you do notice that I said use normal font next time right? Wow.....
     
    No, not helpful. Italics can be very easily read by a farsighted person without glasses.
    The story itself is very good. But I don't really favor the comic.
     
    DeoxysOwns22 said:
    But how many people can you name of the top of your head who r doing that right now, or have done that to this comic. So far.....well, none! unless u or armidilloh do it.
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    Ok dude, just shut up, your getting annoying and I don't want my topic to be closed by a flamewar. Just realise your wrong and don't come back here flaming me just because I was trying to help you make a better comic ;>>
     
    I give you a 9/10 for the story and font, it reminds me of one of my favorite video game, but a 3/10 for the title screen.
     
    First of all DO22 learn to spell correctly. Plus you can't take off 6 points for italics that just shows that you have no idea how to grade comics. Its a good idea and I can't wait for the next one :D.
     
    armadilloHD said:
    What's weird is how that review gives no helpful advice.
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    rich coming from the guy who says stuff like "stupid idea, stupid comic, stupid everything"

    you my friend are a hippocrit

    anyways although the font was a lil tricky to read it was still a good start, with a solid story line

    cant wait for more
     
    i techniqually give this a 3/10
    since number one... the italics are kinda of hard to read, but then some people who dont have good eye-sight might not read it well,
    then number two, i kidna think you should make the pictures more clear, since in the title screen, i, and nobody can see what it is..
    and number three, if you wanted it to be a "flashback" you could have done it like this:
    In our world, technology has evolved past most people in the past's comprehension
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    *Flashback* In our world, technology has evolved past most people in the past's comprehension
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    and number four: for the title screen, you should kinda make it kina of smaller as well, so it would be more clear

    so thats why i kinda of give it a 3/10, no offense though,
     
    suuuure you do
    anyways I got bad repped by someone, not blaming anyone saying "let it die already"...most stupidest rep bash ever
     
    You might whant to boost the text size by one. It was hard to read. And the title page is very blurry, I can't see what it is. If it is an enlarged picture (it looked like that) try making it smaller.
     
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