Suggestions for White

[AGH-RMS]

I'm about to restart my Pokemon White game and was wondering if the team I've set out to create is ok... Any suggestions? Comments?

Volcarona @ Wise Glasses
Flame Body
Psychic
Bug Buzz
Fiery Dance
Quiever Dance

Krookodile @ Muscle Band
Moxie
Crunch
Earthquake
Brick Break
Shadow Claw

Scolipede @ Black Sludge
Poison Point
Toxic
X-Scissor
Venoshock
Earthquake

Haxorus @ Life Orb
Mold Breaker
Earthquake
Giga Impact
Dragon Claw
Swords Dance

Beheeyem @ Focus Sash
Telekinesis
Psychic
Trick Room
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball

Shuckle @ Leftovers
Sturdy
Bug Bite
Earthquake
Power Trick
Smack Down

 

[RainbowTreecko]

I'm about to restart my Pokemon White game and was wondering if the team I've set out to create is ok... Any suggestions? Comments?

Volcarona @ Wise Glasses
Flame Body
Psychic
Bug Buzz
Fiery Dance Heat Wave or Fire Blast would be much better here
Quiever Dance


Krookodile @ Muscle Band
Moxie
Crunch
Earthquake
Brick Break
Shadow Claw I would go with Return here

Scolipede @ Black Sludge
Poison Point
Toxic
X-Scissor
Venoshock Venoshock is a great move, but it's pretty much wasted on such a physical Pokemon. Poison Jab would be a better option.
Earthquake

Haxorus @ Life Orb
Mold Breaker
Earthquake
Giga Impact Definitely replace with Brick Break, poor Haxorus is too much of a sweeper to be useful with this move.
Dragon Claw Outrage is so much better
Swords Dance Dragon Dance is usually a better choice

Beheeyem @ Focus Sash
Telekinesis
Psychic
Trick Room
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball

Shuckle @ Leftovers
Sturdy
Bug Bite
Earthquake
Power Trick
Smack Down

As great an ideas as this sounds, Shuckle just can't be a good sweeper, even with Power Trick. I'm guessing this was your physical Trick Room sweeper. Conkeldurr with Stone Edge, Drain Punch, Payback, and Earthquake would be much better.

Phew, hopefully I helped :D!