Sunflora's Art (Revived Again)

[Sunflorazumarill]

Okay. Since my last art topic is approximately 4 months old to this day, I have decided to start up a new one. For a link to my previous thread (which has a link to my first one), go here. Anyway, I have just finished the first pic I have done in 4 months. It's a pic of a miscallenuos hula girl Trainer. Now note that I may have made her a little thin, but I think that's all right. Anyway, I'd like to hear comments on her. Here she is:

 

[Alex_]

It's..okay. Too stick like though...=\

 

[mistywishmaker]

Good job, Sunflorazumarill! But I agree with _Alex_ that the lines may be too straight on some parts. But overall good job, and I like the coloring :)

 

[Crystal Clair]

It's alright but she desperately needs shape, especially on her hips and her face.
Try out some internet tutorials like mangatutorials. I bet you can get real good if you just learn tips and techniques.