Super Luigi 64

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Dylan and Cole Sprouse
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    Ok So The Plot Is...

    Mario Was In A Fight With Bowser Usualy And Mario Well DIED!Then Luigi Took Over So Peach Got KILLED Too!Then Daisy Took Over So Know Luigi Is Trying To Save Daisy Like Mario Saving Peach But This Time Not From Bowser... From BIG BOO!!!!!!!!

    So What Ya Do Is Be Helping Luigi In His Quest (Be Like Uhhh Waluigi Or Wario Or Yoshi Or Well You Get The Point Be A Friend Of Luigi) So Heres The Form

    Character You Are:
    Whos Going To Be Your Rival: (Big Goomba ect.)
    Who Is Your Sidekick: (Toad,Red BombOmb,ect.)
    Why Do You Want To Save Daisy or Help Luigi:
    What Do You Want Your Power Flower Ability To Be:

    Heres Mine
    Character:Luigi
    Rival:Uhhh Big Boo
    Sidekick:Baby Luigi!!!(Hes A Good Friend Of Mine)
    Why Do You Want To Save Daisy:Shes A Hottie HOOT HOOT
    What Is Your PF Ability:Invisibility I Can Walk Through Walls And Enemys Can Hurt Me!!!
     
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    Okay, first of all, don't get me started on your plot. It was thrown together with little thought, and is very confusing, and doesn't give very much insight to the plot. Second of all, use punctuation. Life isnt a run-on sentence, and your posts should be either, especially your RP posts. Add periods, commas, ect. Last, but not least, think your form over more carefully. How will everyone know what your character acts or looks like?
     
    you:Yoshi
    Whos Going To Be Your Rival:lord crump (from Paper Mario 2)
    Who Is Your Sidekick:Baby Bowser (good version)
    Why Do You Want To Save Daisy or Help Luigi:Luigi is a mate
    What Do You Want Your Power Flower Ability To Be:Spicey breath
    natural ability: baby bowser can ride on me
     
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