Super Sonic Mario

[Trainer Ben]

A while back, I made a comic called Super Sonic Mario. It wasn't that good *cough*poorly drawn backgrounds*cough*, but now I've started to redo it. Here is the first issue:

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Please let me know what you think. By the way, this series has Sonic the Hedgehog, Super Mario Bros., Mortal Kombat, Kingdom Hearts, and Quest for Glory (a really old computer game series.)

 

[Esupio]

for a start why is sonic metal sonic :0 ?

 

[Izzy]

...I'll try to put this nicely... the comic stinks...

 

[Esupio]

...I'll try to put this nicely... the comic stinks...

well yes but it has room for improvement

 

[Trainer Ben]

for a start why is sonic metal sonic :0 ?

What do you mean?

I don't mind criticism, but it's only the first issue. It will improve.

 

[Seto7Kaiba]

Its ok. I can't wait to see the next one and how much you have improved ;)

 

[Esupio]

from what teh spandex guy said it looked like metal sonic was sonic and thats not right cause well sonic is sonic and metal sonic is metal sonic o.o

 

[Ark Kuvis]

...................no
no 8 bit Mario with 16 bit Luigi.....