Superheroes

[Revelation]

SUPERHEROES

There are many superheroes in my life,
That gave me strength and hope.
They never leave me alone,
Especially when I need shoulder to lean
on.

I really love them all,
Because they show me how much they
care.
They don't want to see me crying,
Because it makes them feel like dying.

For me, they can climb a thousand
walls,
Compared to Spiderman.
They can fly higher than Superman,
Or even stronger than the all-known
Batman.

All of the superheroes in me life,
Are kind and lovable.
They are always there guiding me,
And loving me most of all.

Superheroes are hard to find,
Because they only show up sometimes.
But I'm thankful 'coz I'm lucky,
For having them in my life.

I don't want to lose them
'Coz they're a big part of me.
So that I am always praying,
That God will never take them away.

Like Peter Pan, superheroes are only
fantasy,
Found in Neverland.
But for me there are some superheroes,
Living in our native land.

=P
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[Vie]

awww...thats cute :3
I like the contents, because I think that there really are some heroes left in this world. not much, though.
also, the four line-pattern is very nice. But I think you should try to get the same amount of syllables in one line.
keep it going, dude.
bye ~

 

[Pledge]

Pretty good Hain, a superheroes poem awesome. Keep it up.

~ecto

 

[Revelation]

Glad that you like it people, I try to improve my poems more and more anyways thanks.