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The Misadventures of Detective Roh
I wrote this for the 2010 PokeCommunity Get Together Small Writing Contest just to put it out their and get a feel for how people would like what is in my writing style. this is just for a feel of the characters, this scene will likely not be in the storyline with these two guys :)
Feel free to post feedback in vms/pms :) ty for reading enjoy.
Two figures stand across a clearing from each other in the pouring rain. The sky is dark and full of ominous clouds. Lightning strikes in the distance illuminating the dark battle scene.
One of the figures stands in a drenched khaki coat and a black baseball cap. The shine from the lightning illuminated a 6 pointed emblem pinned onto the breast of his coat. The other figure is not as waterlogged as he stand underneath one of the tallest trees surrounding the clearing, his long hair pulled back over his shoulders, his tanktops purple color darkened by its damp nature and his black jeans hugging his legs as he crouched staring at his adversary from under the shadows of the trees sagging boughs.
The man in the coat speaks up nearly yelling over the torrent, "I'll ask you once more to stop this foolishness. There is no need for us to carry out this battle.". The young man crouched under the tree runs his hand through his damp hair and stands slowly dusting off his legs. He speaks with a smirk on his lips, "Then let's end this charade old man... besides you'll catch a cold if I don't beat you soon."
The two both seemingly simultaneously reach behind them and pull out an active pokeball off of their belts and throw them towards the center of the clearing. The coated mans ball hits first... "Go Gallade!"...right after the young mans ball hits as he shouts..."Go Weavile!"
Medicham bounces out of its ball and swirls into a defensive stance as Weavile leaps forward bearing its claws. The young man laughs walks towards his Weavile who poses ferociously in front of her master. The man snears as he looks at the cocky young man..."Your own overconfidence is what will get you defeated this day Shroud! Or is that just some alias meant to inflate you more!"
The young man stops smiling and pats his Weavile on the shoulder she rubs up against his leg. "Weavile, it's time to take Detective Roh down a peg or two." Weavile seems to smirk and begin leaping and bounding towards Gallade bracing itself in it's defensive stance. "WEAVILE! ICE PUNCH NOW!" "Gallade! Protect yourself!"
Weavile claws seemed to suck in the rain and freeze them around it's claws as it bore down on the Gallade leaving icy claw marks in the ground behind it, as it leapt into the air and came down upon the Gallades outstretched arms in an X in front of him a shiny barrier shines up and bounces the Weavile away.
"Why don't you just join me in fighting off rocket... why do you have to be so stubborn as to make me beat you before you'll help!"
"Because I won't just work for anyone who is weaker then me."
"Then I'll show you..."
The shouting match is interrupted as a loud rumble comes across the sky and the clearing is swept with a powerful wind. As the two look up a large helicopter flies by low to the ground with a slightly lowered platform hanging from it's cargo hold. Two figures stand on the platform as the helicopter stops over the clearing. The wind from the swirling blades pushing over the tall grass and blowing the rain and wind into the previously battling pair.
As the platform reaches the ground the two men step off the platform wearing all black jumpsuits and baseball caps with their hair pulled up under and glasses to match. The only thing that wasn't black about their clothing was the big red "R"s on their chests.
"Looks like we found a quarry to make this evening worthwhile..."
"...Then lets make this not take as long as the last one..."
Roh looks over to Shroud and shrugs, "Looks like I'll have to beat you in your little self promoting challenge later! I have to deal with these outlaws first!"
Shroud looks over swooping his hair behind his ears... "Seriously Detective... you think I'm gonna let you have all the fun with these losers?! Not a chance!"
While they were discussing the two goons had already summoned their partners of battle... Gliscor and Houndoom.
The 4 now square off to do battle... the outcome... to be determined...
I wrote this for the 2010 PokeCommunity Get Together Small Writing Contest just to put it out their and get a feel for how people would like what is in my writing style. this is just for a feel of the characters, this scene will likely not be in the storyline with these two guys :)
Feel free to post feedback in vms/pms :) ty for reading enjoy.
Two figures stand across a clearing from each other in the pouring rain. The sky is dark and full of ominous clouds. Lightning strikes in the distance illuminating the dark battle scene.
One of the figures stands in a drenched khaki coat and a black baseball cap. The shine from the lightning illuminated a 6 pointed emblem pinned onto the breast of his coat. The other figure is not as waterlogged as he stand underneath one of the tallest trees surrounding the clearing, his long hair pulled back over his shoulders, his tanktops purple color darkened by its damp nature and his black jeans hugging his legs as he crouched staring at his adversary from under the shadows of the trees sagging boughs.
The man in the coat speaks up nearly yelling over the torrent, "I'll ask you once more to stop this foolishness. There is no need for us to carry out this battle.". The young man crouched under the tree runs his hand through his damp hair and stands slowly dusting off his legs. He speaks with a smirk on his lips, "Then let's end this charade old man... besides you'll catch a cold if I don't beat you soon."
The two both seemingly simultaneously reach behind them and pull out an active pokeball off of their belts and throw them towards the center of the clearing. The coated mans ball hits first... "Go Gallade!"...right after the young mans ball hits as he shouts..."Go Weavile!"
Medicham bounces out of its ball and swirls into a defensive stance as Weavile leaps forward bearing its claws. The young man laughs walks towards his Weavile who poses ferociously in front of her master. The man snears as he looks at the cocky young man..."Your own overconfidence is what will get you defeated this day Shroud! Or is that just some alias meant to inflate you more!"
The young man stops smiling and pats his Weavile on the shoulder she rubs up against his leg. "Weavile, it's time to take Detective Roh down a peg or two." Weavile seems to smirk and begin leaping and bounding towards Gallade bracing itself in it's defensive stance. "WEAVILE! ICE PUNCH NOW!" "Gallade! Protect yourself!"
Weavile claws seemed to suck in the rain and freeze them around it's claws as it bore down on the Gallade leaving icy claw marks in the ground behind it, as it leapt into the air and came down upon the Gallades outstretched arms in an X in front of him a shiny barrier shines up and bounces the Weavile away.
"Why don't you just join me in fighting off rocket... why do you have to be so stubborn as to make me beat you before you'll help!"
"Because I won't just work for anyone who is weaker then me."
"Then I'll show you..."
The shouting match is interrupted as a loud rumble comes across the sky and the clearing is swept with a powerful wind. As the two look up a large helicopter flies by low to the ground with a slightly lowered platform hanging from it's cargo hold. Two figures stand on the platform as the helicopter stops over the clearing. The wind from the swirling blades pushing over the tall grass and blowing the rain and wind into the previously battling pair.
As the platform reaches the ground the two men step off the platform wearing all black jumpsuits and baseball caps with their hair pulled up under and glasses to match. The only thing that wasn't black about their clothing was the big red "R"s on their chests.
"Looks like we found a quarry to make this evening worthwhile..."
"...Then lets make this not take as long as the last one..."
Roh looks over to Shroud and shrugs, "Looks like I'll have to beat you in your little self promoting challenge later! I have to deal with these outlaws first!"
Shroud looks over swooping his hair behind his ears... "Seriously Detective... you think I'm gonna let you have all the fun with these losers?! Not a chance!"
While they were discussing the two goons had already summoned their partners of battle... Gliscor and Houndoom.
The 4 now square off to do battle... the outcome... to be determined...
