Swords of Fate

[«Chuckles»]

Swords of Fate

Hello world, I have decided to try my hand at sprite comics alot like rockscolbs one. The overall summary of the story is a young boy who does not know that he is secretly the kings son and he has been shipped off to train to become a powerful swordsman and stop the evil that lurks over the kingdom

Rules

1. Obey all forum-wide rules
2. Obey A&D rules
3. If you wish to become a fan say "Fan me"
4. Take a look at rockscolbs comic that basically made me want to make one (Here)

Issues:

Chapter 1: Cover
Chapter 1: Beginning
Chapter 1: Secret's
Chapter 1: The meeting or is it?
Chapter 1: Characters!

Fans

chuckleslucifer
Shekoa
Joeyhugg

Goal's

Post First Cover
Complete Chapter
Post 5 Pages (inc. Cover's)
Post Second Chapter
Post 10 Pages
Post Third Chapter
Post 15 Pages
Obtain 5 fans
Obtain 10 fans
Obtain 15 fans
Obtain 20 fans

css by twilightblade

 

[joeyhugg]

It looks good so far, apart from the minor grammar errors. I guess fan me!

 

[Ajin]

The basic plot premise seems to be interesting but the sentences aren't quite going together, you should probably use more connectors, and I think the story's going a bit too fast not to mention you're relying too much on text and not enough on the images.

That being said, it's just starting so I'll reserve bigger judgement for further installments, but it's looking so far, please continue :3

 

[«Chuckles»]

The basic plot premise seems to be interesting but the sentences aren't quite going together, you should probably use more connectors, and I think the story's going a bit too fast not to mention you're relying too much on text and not enough on the images.

That being said, it's just starting so I'll reserve bigger judgement for further installments, but it's looking so far, please continue :3

This is how the story is supposed to begin before everything rolls into action there will be a large story arc before the actual main plot is rolled out.

New Chapter

Spoiler:

plus a character sheet at the end of the chapter I will make a bio of each character on what they like their names what they do and stuff like that!

Spoiler:

*NOTICE*
Next Issue will feature some very different dialogue hlaf of it will be dialogue whilst the other will be action at the festival!

 

[*Riolu Master*]

Pretty unique comic! Some grammar issues but over all awesome!

 

[Falsever]

This is good, keep it up!
I really like the plot. Also, fan me.
Anyway, I suggest you to make the picture smaller, it's too big for me.

 

[Logiedan]

You seriously don't know how happy I am because comics are coming back. :D

KEEP THEM COMING.

 

[«Chuckles»]

You seriously don't know how happy I am because comics are coming back. :D

KEEP THEM COMING.

taking that as a fan meh, also yeah this is only really a trial thingy so once this finishes I might or might not continue with comics I am just trying my hand at it

 

[Karasuma]

I did not know you made sprite comics. I used to make sprite comics a long time ago.

Anyway, keep up the good work. Remember to always take criticism well even if you get some negative ones. I'm very proud of this thread.

 

[joeyhugg]

I am thinking about making my own comic, but IDK what it would be about...

 

[«Chuckles»]

I did not know you made sprite comics. I used to make sprite comics a long time ago.

Anyway, keep up the good work. Remember to always take criticism well even if you get some negative ones. I'm very proud of this thread.

I have recently had a go at everything I posted a fanfic aswell I am just looking at stuff to pass the time