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@ Vivaa
Oh so they aren't being used to much? Well that's a releif! And will do, I'll keep it all s p a c e d for a while. ;D

@Gunners
It's vector?Ok then I win =] Lol, so much love for spidy in here, I'll be re-using that render =]

@Slytherfang
Mmm, yeah I was heading for a very monotonal look so, I guess I win =]

@Ambellina
Lol. No love for 5? It's one of my faves, meh anyway, glad to know you like my stuff Ambey ;D

@Kyen
That depends, I've been Dukey until recently so yeah ;-)
Lol more love for Spidey. Mmm glad you like them! =D
Yeah four is probably my best to date imo =)
Mmm, finally some comments on 10, thanks, and yeah 11 is nice =]
Aww no love for 8? No matter, hope to see you commenting again soon!
 
+12 A collab between Mukkomato and I for Vivaa's Homeroom.
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Why do I bother with all these comments?
Just kidding, kidding

12. I'm sorry, but I'm not really a fan of it (or maybe I'm just not a fan of Metroid.) Samus seems a bit dull, though that's probably due to the glow of the laser thing, which shouldn't be quite so shapeless for lack of a better word, it looks like she's firing a fireball or something, and then the blurring on Samus doesn't look quite right. Samus's hand is blurrier in appearance than the shoulder fartherst away from you, which is supposed to be blurrier than her hand. The lighting seems pretty accurate though, I assume most of the light's coming from the laser, so nothing wrong there, and the text isn't bad either.
 
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Ooh big update.

+13 Meh. I didn't like it but whatever. I got tired doing CME's tut.
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+14 I like this. First time doing C4D clipping masks
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+15 This is... meh. The only thing I like or the shades of brown squares xD
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+16 Yay for this. And yay for Tiny for helping me out with the lighting.
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+17 Yayish for this. Tiny resized it to the appropriate.
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Phew...
 
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14= Pretty Badass ^^ that glow behind him is pretty cool. Not to bright to be annoying or anything

15= Looks like my Dungeons & Dragons character XD

17= Very nice, though I'm not quite sure whats going on in the left-hand corner
 
@ Ambellina.
Thanks, the lighting is a bit... out of place. But anyway, it's pretty cool.
Lol. It most likely is xD
Nothing is going on =/
 
Haha. No it isn't that's my outcome of that tutorial.
I suppose that kind of indicates I followed it pretty well xD
 
+13 Meh. I didn't like it but whatever. I got tired doing CME's tut.
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+14 I like this. First time doing C4D clipping masks
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13. That's a sweet render xD Okay, the thing about this is that its rather plain, aside from the render and the text, there's not much going on. And the background is pretty nearly all black, except for faint floral-ish designs that I don't think really compliments the banner much. Something that's been rotated to go with the diagonalish flow you've given the banner might work, and you could make it more defined towards the center and fading away as it gets closer to the edge, idk though. I just don't think the background works too well. Okay, okay, adding something more on a positive note, I like the red in the banner, it makes it look more interesting, and I like the text, I can't really judge the text itself, but I like the chosen words and stuff ^_^

14. Okay, the first thing I notice apart from the focal is that glow in the back, which looks pretty cool, since you put some in the bottom right section of the piece, making it look like the render is in front of some structure which is in front of something that's illuminating the piece. However, since the glow's the light source, then unless its surrounding the focal, then the focal should be cast into shadow, since its blocking the light. Okay, yeah, no comment on the clipping masks, since I fail at them, pretty good overall though ^_^.

More to come...
 
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Thanks Slyther.
New Update now!
This one is pretty good imo.
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+19. A gift for Ambellina.
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+20. This is my entry for the latest NSOTW on PlanetRenders.
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+21. A gift for .Oblivion
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+22. Eww. This is rather... meh.
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+23. My entry for SotW 'Girls with Guns'
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Hi there twenty,love all your new arts,there simply fabulous. I like that gift that you made for Oblivion,as I can see your definitely getting better,keep up the work.
 
Far out. I wish this place could get some more attention.

+24. This kinda dark.
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+25. Very quick to prove to my friend that I made my other stuff.
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Far out. I wish this place could get some more attention.

+24. This kinda dark.
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+25. Very quick to prove to my friend that I made my other stuff.
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Hai there

24. You already know what I said about this one.

25. First off, that's pretty sick (which techically means its pretty cool, in my vocabulary.) The thing that bugs me the most is how the entire thing looks so light, like someone laid a sheet of slightly scuffed up or cloudy plastic over it, not enough to make the piece unclear or anything, but to make all of it annoyingly light. That's just how it looks to me, though its probably not a big deal since you did say that it was thrown together quickly. No comment on the text (cause I fail at text), and um, yeah, with all due respect, I'm too depressed to write any more.
 
God I wish this place could get some attention.
Anyway, no update description because I can't be bothered -_-

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There we go. It's been a while since I've updated, so it's pretty big =/
 
Your 'House' tag is the best in the latest update!
Love the use of C4D's and effects.
The only thing I can pick is the almost nonexistent depth. Blur and sharpen please. :)
 
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God I wish this place could get some attention.
*sighs* So what do you want me to do about it? (Bad mood, sorry)

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26. Not a fan of the border. Too thick imo. Barely any color variation, since it stays around a brown-white palette, and not a definite lighting source, though I really can't say since I suck at lighting. The skull's a nice touch, though a bit weird and could be better placed, and...yeah, nice job though.

27. Okay then. Its cool, there's a lot of text though (hmm, nice fonts), and it might not be a bad idea to lower the opacity for some of it, since a lot of it remains rather dark. Soul Eater doesn't necessarily have to be repeated so many times in order to get the message across, and try to make the text more like part of the background. Or whatever. The clipping mask is neat though.

28. Hmm....its very...blue. And part of Sonic's head is cut off, which bugs me like heck. The long canvas is nice, while the borders aren't really. And the repeating "sonic" thing is rather distracting, an interesting touch, but it gets to looking a lot like a thick, semi-transparent line. The overal design is good, except for the lack of flow, and....nevermind. Interesting tag to look at though.

Ugh, these comments are so unhelpful its not even funny.
I'm also lethargic beyond a joke right now.
 
30 / / / I only really like this one. I'm a big fan of Nike accessories, and let me tell you - Those shoes are awesome. Good render, good colors, and a good job to you, Dukey.
 

29. I agree with what noxious. said about there being very little depth in this (oh the hypocrisy of it all). Anyway, I find the text rather distracting, but that's probably just me, since I get distracted easily, even when looking at a piece of art, which this is in my book. Everything's also a bit bright, I hate things that are really dark, but some of the areas on this are coming really close to pretty much pure white, which isn't natural first off, but yeah, shan't say too much on that. Either way, it is an eye catching tag, definitely with some planning involved. Which proves that PLANNING DOES NOT, IN FACT, LIMIT OUR CREATIVITY. Erm, yes, unless I was wrong and you didn't plan this at all.

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Still not much attention going on.
Anyway, thought I should update as it's been a few days, and I made a few things worth showing off :P
Oh and I'm considering opening up a shop some time this weekend.
Anway. Onwards!

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