+//. [t w e n t y - t w o .] → [g a l l e r y] +//.

[Dukey]

+37

+38

 

[Yrie]

+35.

+36

Yay, 'tis another couple of comments. Which are probably unhelpful, as always.
35. Okay, this is a rather interesting, if plain, tag. The focal area is rather good, though I don't like the way it just cuts off and then begins to fade into a darker color. Yeah, somewhat hard to describe, but the way the white/light colored section is seperated from the darker section is rather choppy, and reminds me a bit like the darker section was colored on with Sharpie marker. The second thing I don't like is how it just cuts off on the left half and becomes completely black, because if you divide the tag into thirds and take the third closest to the left, that area's pretty much a flat black color, as far as I can tell, and though it definitely helps to draw the eye to the focal area, which is pretty much radiant with the light colors, its almost like there's a bit too much black. Maybe making the canvas smaller would help, as in cutting off a small..wait no, tiny, section off of the left of the tag. Now that I'm finished with that, I really like the concept of using a plainer background to attract attention to the desired focal, just as long as the plainer, flatter areas aren't overdone.

36. Wow, this one's just plain cool. Seriously. I have absolutely no leads to what makes it so, but yeah, that's just what I think of it. Except for the green circular thing, which seems rather random, since its just sort of floating there almost aimlessly. The text is really cool in how it seems to be iluminated by the green glow though, as well as the surrounding areas around it. And the green thing almost creeping up his arm and around his shoulder's pretty neat too, though it reminds me of a potion that somehow came to life o.O I don't know, I just tend to think that way on occasion. Anyways, I'll end this hella unhelpful comment by saying that its really great, and I love the effect you put into it, like there's some rock formation behind him, from how I view it. But yeah. Its a really nice piece, though I still can't say why I find it so interesting.

 

[Comic Tragedy]

Numbers 20, 35, 36, and 37 are you best so far.

They have the best composition, utilization of effects and their placement. All that other good stuff too. xD

Good stuff, I love to see the huge improvement in your work, plus it spans like two pages.

 

[Dukey]

@ .Twenty Six
Thanks Slyther, dw your comments are always appreciated, if you don't know how to critique it, just say whether or not you like it XD

@ Comic Tragedy
Thanks. Your comments are great, hope fully I can squeeze a few more out of you in the future.
Lol @ Huge improvement, we obviously remember my first thread then -turns head in shame- XDD

And now an update.

+39.

+40.

+41.

+42.

+43.

+44. [I'll add text to this if needed]

+45. Yay for Spray Cans XD

+46.

+47.

 

[Donnie]

42.

I love the style you used with this one, you should use it more often, i love it. the only thing that throws me off is the total blankness on the left side. and the render, since its kinda low quality, to me.

44.

Graffiti! XDD <33

46.

The colors are stunning, personaly i dont like brown tags that much so blue is a nice change to me. The text is fun, I like how you emphisized "Tag" but the render isnt all that hot. D:

 

[Dukey]

Thanks Donnie. Update time.

+48.

+49.

 

[Yrie]

+39.

+40.

[/b]

39. Wow, its absolutely amazing, I love it! I wonder why...

40. Pwettyness, except that some parts seem on the verge of over saturated. What else to say? Flow's a bit messed up, but still pwettyful.

Wow...helpful comments. I'm taking a break xD

 

[Dukey]

Update time. To save my gallery from the scary second page.
+50.

+51.

+52.

+53.

 

[Yrie]

41-49 are all prettyful Dukey
Except on 49 the text is somewhat distracting =l

The flow on #50 is completely messed up. The arrows to one way, the blocks of horizontal stripes to the other way, and then there's some things going horizontally. But otherwise, the colors and everything are nicely done.

Gah I'm so tired

 

[the bitter end.]

Lots of Planet Renders tut tags.

 

[Dukey]

+54.

+55.

+56.

+57.

+58.

+59.

+60.

 

[Comic Tragedy]

Hokay.

I think whats really bugging me the most about your latest tags is the lack of color. I mean, the amount of desaturation in these is strange. And if one tag does have color, its like monotone.

I would work on that.... Otherwise the effects are pretty good, and so is everything else.

I don't know how much I am into this tuns of c4d usage style. I just think you are better at other styles. But it is always good to branch out.

Good work.

 

[Ezzo!]

Hokay.

I just did that for the lolz. xD

/ontopic/serious

I'm going to have to agree with CT here, but I also think you use Topaz, right? Cuz for +54 the camera in his hand is looking a little funky. So is his finger. I like the C4d placements, but the first 2 are lacking some color to them. Maybe you're just trying out a new style, idk.

 

[BHwolfgang]

Hey there Duke! Is this what you go by?

Well, I personally state that your work is most amazing. How long have you've done this?

I can't really criticize your work, Duke, as I'm not a graphix designer. However, there are some that you've made that maded to my most favorite. :-)

+3, +11, +12, +18 (This is my favorite out of all yours), +30, and +43 (The render looks like a friend of mine. (Lol)).

I would totally request some from you, but sadly, I don't know where to find good renders...

 

[Dukey]

Thanks everybody, time for a big update ^^
Oh and Renders can be found at Planet Renders BHwolfgang.

+61.

+62.

+63.

+64.

+65.

+66.

+67.

+68.

+69.

+70.

+71.

+72.

This is like a month of work, with 72 being my earlist, 70 my latest. Enjoy, comments are appreciated.

 

[BHwolfgang]

Alright, thank you Duke. You'll be expecting a request from me then.

Out of all of those, I like +62, +63, +65, and +68. Aren't some of these the banners that you make for other members?

 

[Comic Tragedy]

Your latest tags are smex compared to your older tags. Great progression in work. I don't know why, but I want to see you attempt typography. xD

 

[Tiny]

ok dude seriously

i didnt give you that psd so you can idea rip me
that is almost the same as lokis request
the background, the text, the pentooling,the textures. Urgg ><
I hope yo didnt use any of my layers cause it you did youre ripping.
i would like to to see the psd for that tag please.

 

[Witch]

61-This render is really good. ^^ I like how you have that little bit of light stream across the tips of his claws

64-I love that for obvious reasons. XD I love the colors. They go so well with her hair & everything

65-Sexy 'nuff said XD

67-Again, the colors are great & the bubble that holds the text is so 90's haha

70-I'm not sure why, but I like it X)

71-Yet again, another wonderful TWEWY sig. Are they your specality or something? ^^