((Ooc)) Ray, The mods will be mad if you RP like that. Not to be mean or anything, but perhaps you could change it to something like...
Zeke turned his emerald eyes upon a girl walking not far away. She seemed not to notice him, and this suited the moment. Sunlight flashed upon something around her neck. Instantly his gaze flashed toward it. It was a neckless, similar to his own. Ideas formed in his mind... Could it be that she too had powers? Debating with himself he should talk to her or not, he walked over to her.
"Do you... well... Has anything strange happened since you found that neckless?" He asked, indicating to the pendant hanging off the chain.
Sorry if I anger you. But, the mods will be even more angrier, and this really looks like an intresting RP.
((Ic))
Heartless beings, everylast one of them. I couldn't stand to be around them, out here in the day like this. The sun hurt my eyes and burned my skin. They were so pathetic. I could hear their thoughts, echoing in my mind. Humans didn't deserve to live. They all should be exiled, in my opinion. But, nobody asked me, nobody cared. I fingered the silver chain on my neck, watching the silvery pendant swing from side to side.
"Keh, Keh!!"
I know your uncomftorable, Corrin. So am I. We'll be to the Tower soon enough, I thought, linking minds with the Raven on my shoulder. People looked at me funny, as they always do. Of course, I didn't belong here. I was one on my own.
"Hreee..." Corrin cooed, feeling my sadness and anger. It was all I felt. It was all I knew.
I was a child of Ice....