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Team Advice

Ralos24

Resident Hoenn Fanatic
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    • Seen Jan 14, 2011
    This is my team that I've been using over wifi. It hasn't been very effective in any combination, and I was wondering if I could get some help with it. Thanks!

    Swampert
    Wide Lens
    Torrent
    Naughty
    -Muddy Water
    -Aqua Tail
    -Stone Edge
    -Earthquake

    Manectric
    Magnet
    Lightningrod
    Lax
    -Thunderbolt
    -Thunder
    -Discharge
    -Protect

    Ninetales
    Charcoal
    Flash Fire
    Impish
    -Heat Wave
    -Overheat
    -Dark Pulse
    -Protect

    Armaldo
    Rock Incense
    Battle Armor
    Naughty
    -X-Scissor
    -Stone Edge
    -Rock Slide
    -Earthquake

    Flygon
    Draco Plate
    Levitate
    Brave
    -Dragon Claw
    -Earthquake
    -Fly
    -Draco Meteor
     
    Surf>>>>>Muddy Water.
    Leftovers>>>wide lens on pert.
    Aqua Tail and Surf is redundant coverage, add stealth rock.

    Magnet sucks, but Manectric generally isn't that great of a pokemon. Jolteon is a better choice probably.

    Ninetales can be replaced by Mixnape. Charcoal is a terrible item and Fire Blast>>>Heat wave. Energy Ball> Protect.

    Armaldo is a terrible choice, bar rain teams in which it is outclassed by Kabutops anyways.

    Draco Plate is a terrible item, Life Orb is better for Flygon. You could also use a choice scarf if you want. Replace fly with Stone Edge, and U-Turn over Draco Meteor.

    Also, fix your natures and add EVs. Add descriptions as well.

    tl;dr: scrap this team and make a new one.
     
    Here is my adivice, i il puit in order :

    Swapert@Leftroves
    ~SR
    ~Surf
    ~EQ
    ~Proctet/Toxic
    240 HP / 216 Def / 52 SpD Relaxed nature

    Jolteon@Life Orb
    ~ Charge beam
    ~T-Bolt
    ~Hidden Power Ice
    ~ shadow ball
    252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe Timid nature

    Infernape (M) @ Life Orb
    Trait: Blaze
    EVs: 255 Atk / 255 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Swords Dance
    - Stone Edge
    - Close Combat
    - Fire Punch

    Flygon @ Choice Scarf
    Trait: Levitate
    EVs: 255 Atk / 255 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - U-turn
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Punch
    - Outrage

    Blissey@Leftroves
    ~ Wish
    ~ Protect
    ~ Flamethower
    ~ Toxic
    252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe old nature

    I hope that help you :3
     
    Thanks for the help. I'll see what I can do to get the Pokemon you suggested in order. :D
     
    I hope i help you, in mater fact, do u want that i gave u the pokemons that i mention? i have that pokemons so i can give it to u
     
    Thanks for offering, but I can just breed the pokemon that you suggested. My collection on HG is quite large, even if they're not all completely trained. I also have access to the items you suggested. Thanks again for offering, though. It was very generous of you.
     
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