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Team New Era!

Is this a good team name?

  • Yea! It rocks!

    Votes: 3 42.9%

  • Yes

    Votes: 1 14.3%

  • No

    Votes: 1 14.3%

  • It should go in the toilet!!!!!!!!

    Votes: 2 28.6%
  • Total voters
    7
  • Poll closed .
yuuichi said:
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The new gardenia town


Take a look at the banner i made for my hack im making (in my signature)
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ok.... this map looks almost exactly the same. boreing and square. U need to add more trees to it and on the sides. make the moutian unsquare. fill up more. also add a path. This is all to help you improve. Ok? im not trying to be mean but thats would you need to do on your maps. Jazz tyhem up make them natural
 
Todoroki Heh Heh Heh said:
ok.... this map looks almost exactly the same. boreing and square. U need to add more trees to it and on the sides. make the moutian unsquare. fill up more. also add a path. This is all to help you improve. Ok? im not trying to be mean but thats would you need to do on your maps. Jazz tyhem up make them natural
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sorry uploaded th wrong one that map was exactly the same

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yuuichi said:
sorry uploaded th wrong one that map was exactly the same

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Hey look the maps are okay But they are still a bit square and empty. I do some mapping myself so i'm gonna give you this advice k?
Try fill out the map a bit more it looks like a hack show not like an official game or proper hack map.
So i've done a quick example (with errors forgive me)
To show you how a map should be and can be filled out. This is a smaller town edited from Ruby with Kyledove tiles.
I know its smaller but its a quick example
[PokeCommunity.com] Team New Era!

Now notice there isn't a lot of free space and there is lots of nature elements. Notice How the mountains are stacked and jagged not like Even and man made if you get me. The water isn't just square and there is path. There are flowers placed nicely and different trees. There is also a town Garden or a town sight/landmark. You should try make something unique about the town. Think about what the people in the town could be proud of or what they like about the town. If you cant fill in space add in some nature eg. rocks, flowers etc. and some signs. Add in some houses. The middle of your town has scattered trees like a maze which is odd. Its empty. And you have a lotta free space on the mountain. Try stacking moer mountain or adding waterfalls!
Remember nature and reality is key*
So is playabilty.
Be imaginitive

Hope i helped!
I'm no expert but I know what looks good xD
 
I'm leaving to school now in like 10 mins so is there anything anyone needs before I go?
 
GavZ said:
Hey look the maps are okay But they are still a bit square and empty. I do some mapping myself so i'm gonna give you this advice k?
Try fill out the map a bit more it looks like a hack show not like an official game or proper hack map.
So i've done a quick example (with errors forgive me)
To show you how a map should be and can be filled out. This is a smaller town edited from Ruby with Kyledove tiles.
I know its smaller but its a quick example
[PokeCommunity.com] Team New Era!

Now notice there isn't a lot of free space and there is lots of nature elements. Notice How the mountains are stacked and jagged not like Even and man made if you get me. The water isn't just square and there is path. There are flowers placed nicely and different trees. There is also a town Garden or a town sight/landmark. You should try make something unique about the town. Think about what the people in the town could be proud of or what they like about the town. If you cant fill in space add in some nature eg. rocks, flowers etc. and some signs. Add in some houses. The middle of your town has scattered trees like a maze which is odd. Its empty. And you have a lotta free space on the mountain. Try stacking moer mountain or adding waterfalls!
Remember nature and reality is key*
So is playabilty.
Be imaginitive

Hope i helped!
I'm no expert but I know what looks good xD
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your the banner maker right
What do you think about the banner with darkrai in my signature
 
yuuichi said:
your the banner maker right
What do you think about the banner with darkrai in my signature
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Dude... Shes giveing you advice and you should take it in. Not just ask about a banner. Thats rude. She took time to help you and you dont care
 
Todoroki Heh Heh Heh said:
Dude... Shes giveing you advice and you should take it in. Not just ask about a banner. Thats rude. She took time to help you and you dont care
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im making changes to it now
 
yuuichi said:
your the banner maker right
What do you think about the banner with darkrai in my signature
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I'm thinking it's disabled....
I'm thinking you didn't even read my post either...
Which is fine ^^
I was only trying to help

PS.
I'm actually a guy i justHave a girly theme xD
I like Purple
 
GavZ said:
I'm thinking it's disabled....
I'm thinking you didn't even read my post either...
Which is fine ^^
I was only trying to help

PS.
I'm actually a guy i justHave a girly theme xD
I like Purple
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i made the changes what do you think
 
GavZ said:
Much better but is there a reason for so many flowers?
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trying to fill up the map i guess ill take away some
since its called gardenia i wanted it to be a garden town
 
GavZ said:
Add some houses and a buildings maybe. Some water and maybe some trees
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ok that seems simple enough

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GavZ said:
Okay good now fix the edges so that there is a bank to the water and that its not just running free if you get me
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ok i just need to now how to fix the things circled
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@yuuchi if you need more help them please pm me GavZ or any other great mapper here. I dont want my team thread overun with ppl asking for help. You know what i mean?
 
Todoroki Heh Heh Heh said:
@yuuchi if you need more help them please pm me GavZ or any other great mapper here. I dont want my team thread overun with ppl asking for help. You know what i mean?
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Yeah i just finshed fixing the edges problem so ill pm you the map so you can tell me what you think
 
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