That's what lovers do

Poet of Darkness

Poet of darkness
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    I just made this song up but here it goes:

    I say I love you
    Because that's what lovers do.
    I say your the prettyiest girl ever
    Because that's what a lover does.
    It breaks my haert that you don't love me to
    And that's what happens when a lover is in love.

    (Chorus X2)
    I love you
    but you don't love me too.
    It breaks my heart
    But I just go on loving you.

    Whether you love me
    Or whether you hate me,
    I just go on loving you.
    Because that's what a lover does.
     
    wow! i think that this song is very good. like the other one. there r some spellings
    but its still good
     
    Uhh..not being a mod but short reviews are not allowed.
    Yeah whatever. It's true actually, some people who really believe in love that way do act like that. And I hope that dosen't apply to those loving something that can't love them back..
    Well it was a nice poem..or song. You've improved greatly, but I suggest you make it a little longer. Good job.
     
    That's a very god song/poem, espyon. I agree with Anacortes though. It needs to be a little longer.
     
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