The adventures in Orre!

[empoleonrules]

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This is my(7th or 8th) fan fiction.Full on digust-comments(or a 3rd quarter+)arn't allowed!
Charachters:
Ash(main)
Leslie(the Female character that goes with Ash every season)
Brock(you know-the guy whoo has a crush on any Female character)
Espeon(the character that drags brock away)
Pickachu
Introduction:
After Ash conquered the Sinnoh league;he is heading to Orre to train and test his skills.Dawn is heading to kanto and he is too.
Will Ash's journey end;thrive?(just to let you know, semi colon[;]can replace a cunjunction,like or,and,but)

 

[diamondpearl876]

I'd advise you to work on your grammar and spelling first.

And post your first chapter before the moderator here closes this thread. :O

 

[Xairmo]

I'd advise you to work on your grammar and spelling first.

And post your first chapter before the moderator here closes this thread. :O

i agree, you probably should

 

[Careful With That Axe Pichu!]

This is a joke.

Read the rules and while you're at it take a look at the docs on Writer's Lounge.

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