Umm.. I'm so confused. Well, it was very low quality graphics, all paint two second jobs, try getting some pre-sprited graphics from various places, or sprite some yourself.
Same goes for the background, low quality, crappy two tone from paint.
It has no plot, no basic story, nothing really, it has no introduction or ending, and the moral is childish. It looks like someone sprayed blood on the wall, and Gratoh magical teleports from place to place.
To finish it off, it has pretty bad grammar, try working on that, it's the easiest.