The Adventures of Homie Joe

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    I'm new at this stuff... well this is my comic, The Adventures of Homie Joe. I'll make a few of these, and if you guys like them, I will continue.

    Episode 1
    Episode 2
    Episode 3
     
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    Hmm, nice, though can't really say it's a Sprite Comic, it has no sprites in it. I think a comic like this would be best off in the Art Gallery. So I shall move this along for you :)

    ~Moved.
     
    Sorry, I wasn't 100% sure it would go there.
     
    Ha! MJ! Tee hee hee ha!

    Jindai
     
    Yeaaaah...sorry bud, that's not too funny. Or well-drawn.

    Extend the comic size and make a coherent story, it'd work much better if it wasn't two panels in each comic. I say two because the first and fourth are pretty much the same throughout. Yeah. Also, It's fine that the art isn't good, but try to fit your humor to compliment it, perhaps adding more sarcasm, which CONTRASTS the art therefore complimenting it!

    It doesn't make sense now, but I've totally seen it work.
     
    Short, and the art is not really to my preference, but as a short comedy, it works.

    I love the "Find out Soon!" in each episode!
     
    I like how each one ended in suspense!!
     
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