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The Adventures of Opal, Amethyst, and Jasper
Hey, this is my fan-fic that I'll be writing.
It takes place in the Ciara region which includes about 114 new Pokemon in it.
Constructive criticism welcome!
Chapter 1: Starting out!
It was a bright summer morning in Felnet Town, a secluded area in the southwest of Ciara. Today also just happened to be the starting point of three young children who lived in Felnet. The only thing wrong with that was that all three of them had a meeting with Prof. Pine in Pinegreen City at 9:00, and they were still sleeping! Fortunately their mothers were already hurrying up to each one's bedroom. A few minutes later they all finished eating breakfast, got packed, and left for Pinegreen. Along the way, they were all talking together about what Pokemon they would each get. The one named Jasper was thinking he might get Grasmander, the grass lizard Pokemon. Opal was thinking about getting Cubburn, the fire lion Pokemon, and Amethyst was thinking of Aquabird, the water bird Pokemon. They had no idea of the journey they were getting themselves into. When they finally reached Pinegreen, they saw a bunch of thugs standing around outside Prof. Pine's lab! One of the thugs standing in front of the door yelled at them, "What are you stinky little kids doin' around here?" Jasper then told him why they were there. "We're here to start our Pokemon adventure, so get out of the way!" Just then, Prof. Pine tried to go outside, but he bumped into the thug who had yelled at them. "Just what are you people trying to do to me?" Prof. Pine inquired. The thug told him, "We want your Pokemon, so open up the vault!" "No way on earth will I give you my Pokemon! But you three over there, Opal, Jasper, and Amethyst, come over here and pick your Pokemon! Then teach these hobos a lesson!" Prof. Pine responded. Then the three kids picked their Pokemon. Jasper, Grasmander, Opal, Cubburn, and Amethyst, Aquabird. Then Jasper began to battle one of the thugs. "Grasmander, I choose you!" Jasper commanded his Pokemon to come out of its Pokeball. "Grrrrassmandi!!!" it said as it came into battle. "Snakir, go!" The thug commanded to his Pokemon. "Ssssnakiiirrr!" the snake basket Pokemon said as it came out. Then Jasper exclaimed, "Use Razor Leaf, Grasmander!" Then leaves flew off its head and began to spin towards the Snakir. "Ssnaaakir..." it said as it was engulfed in a fury of spinning leaves. "Oh no, Snakir, you fainted! Oh well, I lost, so I have to leave now, but if I had another Pokemon, I would whoop you good!" the thug said as he ran towards Sunflower Island. "Well, that was very weird, I wonder who those thugs were... Anyway, congratulations on your first battle, Jasper!" the Prof. congratulated Jasper.
Next Chapter: Gyms? or Contests? or Both?
Remember, constructive criticism is welcome!
Hey, this is my fan-fic that I'll be writing.
It takes place in the Ciara region which includes about 114 new Pokemon in it.
Constructive criticism welcome!
Chapter 1: Starting out!
It was a bright summer morning in Felnet Town, a secluded area in the southwest of Ciara. Today also just happened to be the starting point of three young children who lived in Felnet. The only thing wrong with that was that all three of them had a meeting with Prof. Pine in Pinegreen City at 9:00, and they were still sleeping! Fortunately their mothers were already hurrying up to each one's bedroom. A few minutes later they all finished eating breakfast, got packed, and left for Pinegreen. Along the way, they were all talking together about what Pokemon they would each get. The one named Jasper was thinking he might get Grasmander, the grass lizard Pokemon. Opal was thinking about getting Cubburn, the fire lion Pokemon, and Amethyst was thinking of Aquabird, the water bird Pokemon. They had no idea of the journey they were getting themselves into. When they finally reached Pinegreen, they saw a bunch of thugs standing around outside Prof. Pine's lab! One of the thugs standing in front of the door yelled at them, "What are you stinky little kids doin' around here?" Jasper then told him why they were there. "We're here to start our Pokemon adventure, so get out of the way!" Just then, Prof. Pine tried to go outside, but he bumped into the thug who had yelled at them. "Just what are you people trying to do to me?" Prof. Pine inquired. The thug told him, "We want your Pokemon, so open up the vault!" "No way on earth will I give you my Pokemon! But you three over there, Opal, Jasper, and Amethyst, come over here and pick your Pokemon! Then teach these hobos a lesson!" Prof. Pine responded. Then the three kids picked their Pokemon. Jasper, Grasmander, Opal, Cubburn, and Amethyst, Aquabird. Then Jasper began to battle one of the thugs. "Grasmander, I choose you!" Jasper commanded his Pokemon to come out of its Pokeball. "Grrrrassmandi!!!" it said as it came into battle. "Snakir, go!" The thug commanded to his Pokemon. "Ssssnakiiirrr!" the snake basket Pokemon said as it came out. Then Jasper exclaimed, "Use Razor Leaf, Grasmander!" Then leaves flew off its head and began to spin towards the Snakir. "Ssnaaakir..." it said as it was engulfed in a fury of spinning leaves. "Oh no, Snakir, you fainted! Oh well, I lost, so I have to leave now, but if I had another Pokemon, I would whoop you good!" the thug said as he ran towards Sunflower Island. "Well, that was very weird, I wonder who those thugs were... Anyway, congratulations on your first battle, Jasper!" the Prof. congratulated Jasper.
Next Chapter: Gyms? or Contests? or Both?
Remember, constructive criticism is welcome!
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