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Burne Starcofski

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    (Okay, so I borrowed the title from Magi Nation, AND it's the name of a FanFic I write in the RW, so what?)

    The setting is approximately 3 years in the future from now. The war between the United States and Iraq has ended, and now five of the world's top countries have discovered a new technology, which they dub upon their new machines as "Airships". These Goliaths and Laviathens own the sky, their capabillities near endless, it's just a matter of keeping it in the air. To save costs and Mass Produce these Airships, the Governments have made them half the size of a traditional battleship, arming them with giant gun turrets and thick hulls. But our story focuses on those who, after recieving a Mysterious package in the mail from an unnamed source, soon find themselves against these Armadas, for they are the only ones who can shield the world from the destruction and World Conquest of Britian, America, Japan, France, and Russia...

    What you put:

    1. Your name, must be a First and Last.
    2. The name of your ship, Must be something you can remember.
    3. Your age, between 16 and 25 sounds appropriate.
    4. The name of your Clan, This will be what you and your crew call themselves.
    5. Provide a description of yourself, or a picture (link format, please.)
    6. An Illustration, picture, or description of your Airship (Pictures and such in Link format.)
    7. The Weaponry:
    (You are allowed a total of 20 points at first.)
    (_) Turrets and Bombardment
    (_) Science; Biological
    (_) Science; Technological
    (_) Science; Weapons
    (_) Crew Training
    (_) Economic Knowledge
    (_) Buisness skills
    (_) Construction and repair equipment
    (_) Fighter Jets {NOTE: Fighters are only available with a 5 in Science Tech, a 2 in Crew Train, 2 Construction, and a 3 in Science Weap.}
    (_) Dropships {NOTE: This requires a 7 Science Tech, 3 Construction, and 4 Crew Training.}
    (_) Robotics and Programming {NOTE: Requires a 15 in Science Tech, and a 5 in Construction.}
     
    8. The names of your top five Crew Members and their positions (Communitcations, Troops, etc...)
    9. Your original Nationality
    10. Your starting location
    11. Your starting Allie, (you only get one.)
    12. You can list an optional Personality.

    Allright, here's my Profile:

    1. Burne Starcofski
    2. GreatBlade
    3. 17
    4. Clan Dragoonz
    5. A slick black coat, White and Kelly Green Dada shoes, Ray-Ban Orange Sunglasses, and dark black pants.
    6. Although it's considered strange, it's a giant Greatsword, one side of the blade Black, the opposite White. With a green hilt, and it's four turbines, each a massive 50 yards across, sticking out on the sides. The turrets sticking out on the blades, missile packs hidden along the top panel.
    7. The Weaponry:
    (3) Turrets and Bombardment
    (0) Science; Biological
    (3) Science; Technological
    (3) Science; Weapons
    (2) Crew Training
    (3) Economic Knowledge
    (2) Buisness skills
    (4) Construction and repair equipment
    8. {Mikella: Communications}, {Melkov: Troop Commander}, {Jade: Head of Research}, {Shawn: Construction}, {Aikaro: Ship Driving and Control}
    9. American
    10. Above the Colorado Rockies
    11. Allie: (Waiting for one.)
     
    1. Kyo Yamagata
    2. Persephone
    3. 19
    4. Crimson Fury
    5. https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v292/Nolofinwe/zoidsc1252.jpg
    6. https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v292/Nolofinwe/pirvalkyrie.jpg
    7. The Weaponry:
    (You are allowed a total of 20 points at first.)
    (2) Turrets and Bombardment
    (_) Science; Biological
    (5) Science; Technological
    (3) Science; Weapons
    (3) Crew Training
    (_) Economic Knowledge
    (_) Buisness skills
    (3) Construction and repair equipment
    (4) Fighter Jets
    (_) Dropships
    (_) Robotics and Programming
    8. Chiron (Ship Defense), Charles Darlier (Statistics and Logistics), Robert Smith, (Enginering and Repair), Phoenix (Infantry), Berkut Nightwolf (Navigation, Piloting and Fighter forces)
    9. Japanese
    10. Over the Orkney Islands
    11. None as yet
    12. Your typical pirate captain, a hotshot cocky rogue with no respect for anyone who hasn't proved they deserve it. Has his darker moments and a terrible temper but they're rarely seen.
     
    Welcome, and btw: good stats. But I must point out that if you want to earn cash to upgrade and such, I'd suggest you allie with someone who knows Buisness and Economics.
     
    (Then again, I don't know anyone who would join, so let's just start.)

    A chime sounded to my side. An eye opend to just a slit allowed me to see that my alarm clock was going off. Sliding my legs to the side, I pushed off and entered the Closet, my usual attire hanging from the ceiling. With a soft green carpet below, light blue walls, the occasional painting of a mountain, and Red Oak furniture, my Dorm was what you'd call, on the exquisite side of decoration.
    "Gooooood morning!" a young child's voice rang.
    "Gir, why did you set my alarm to go off at 4 am?" I asked.
    "To see if you'd wake up." he replied.
    "And am I awake now?" I asked again, this time a tone of discomfort.
    "Yyyyyyyyep!" he slurred, the unmistable tone of a very young child was really getting unwelcome right now...
     
    <OOC>Alright, I'm up for that.<OOC>

    "Sir" the lieutenent snapped to attention, a firm salute already in place. I'd recruited this guy from the Holy American Empire and still I couldn't beat their habits out of him. I asked exasperatedly "What have I told you about saluting?" He dropped the attentive posture but still didn't relax. Dropping my head into my hands I asked "What is it?" His reply was concise, one good thing about his training. He said "We've reached our destination. No sign of enemy pursuit. My reply was as brief, I ordered "Good. Take us down for refuel and resupply."
     
    cool

    1. Max Hunter
    2. Blue Lightning
    3. 17
    4. Clan Dash
    5. blue eyes,black hair,black shoes,pants,t-shirt,coat,gloves
    6. A little bigger than a normal Airship, blue with silver, two turbines,two turrets,and the missile pack below each wing , it has more speed , comfort, durability, etc.
    7. The Weaponry:
    (3) Turrets and Bombardment
    (_) Science; Biological
    (3) Science; Technological
    (2) Science; Weapons
    (3) Crew Training
    (3) Economic Knowledge
    (3) Buisness skills
    (3) Construction and repair equipment
    8. (Maltug-Air, and Infantry Commander) (Rick-Construction and Repairing) (Joey-Communications) (Mary-Research) (Charlie-Air, Ship , Infantry Forces)
    9. Mexican
    10. A harbor on the Atlantic Ocean
    11. I want Burne Starcofski as my allie
     
    (Ok, just to keep it smooth, how about we all allie and know one another, k?)

    "Status report Gir." I requested.
    "Your TA is nearly ready, the Weapons Research is preparing the presentation of their new weapon, the Tech Research is still working on the project, a large majority of our items sold on eBay, increasing our budget by 200 K, and we're above the Rockies." he listed, the voice emitting from each intercom as I glided across the Walkway.
    "Gir, remind me to thank the Tech division for the improvement to the Magetic-Field corridoors." I asked. It really was better, now we could fly along long halls without tiring.
    "They're only temporary, you know." he informed.
    "Yes, and so is your aged-opinion program." I laughed.
    "Huh? When are you bringing me my Chocolate Bubble-gum Slushie?" he asked.
    "When you do something nice." I replied. "By the way, how many have I given you?"
    "Only one." he lied.
     
    (ok, good)

    I was standing outside the harbor, it was a foggy morning, and cold too.
    "Sir" ; I heard a voice coming from behind, I turned around and I saw Joey.
    "Joey, you can call me Max if you want, anyway what is it?
    "Sir -I sigh- um, I was spying a conversation of a australian clan"
    "and...."
    "well I heard that they were going to attack us tomorrow in the morning, at the 1035 hours , Sir"
    well , go and warn the crew of the air force , that we gonna take off at 10 o'clock in the morning and we gonna destroy that australian clan"
    "yes Sir"
    "call me Max"
    Joey went inside the harbor and warned the crew , I entered one minute later.
    In that afternoon the crew trained a little.
     
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    I ambled down the landing ramp after we'd set down at our primary cache. Our ground grew dashed out immediatly, beginning the usual maintenence checks. I myself went straight for my decently appointed rooms to catch some rest. First though, I opened a channely to the GreatSword's command deck, redying myself for a brief conversation.
     
    The intercom chimed as the door slid open. <Captain on deck.> they rang. "Someone remind me to disable that ringer, please?" I asked.
    "Too late, now get ready, you got an incoming hail, frequency 5." a beautiful young lady answered.
    "With who Mikella?"
    "It's from the Persephone. Seems like they want a little talk." she smirked.
    "Patch him through." Even though we had just recently met, I was really starting to like the guy. He was a great assistant in combat, but wasn't too good with his pennies.
     
    "What up" I asked in a friendly manner once I saw Burne's profile come in onscreen.
     
    After the static cleared, his face came Center-Screen. "Not much. Been time, hasn't it? Cut to the point, what do you need, or would you like to know? Before you answer, don't ask for cash. You still have a 4 K debt from the past times." he replied, a smirk of pleasure covering his mouth.
     
    "It has indeed been a while" I drawled, relaxing before I said "Anyway, I'm not looking for cash. There's a Russian cargo ship headed my way soon enough...Anyway, I'm actually wondering if you'd like to come to a meeting. A while ago I was contacted by a few other captains, they're talking about organizing."
     
    Finally, 10'clock in the morning , the Blue Lightning took off from the harbor, "Everybody at your positions" , 4 people to the turrets, 2 one turret, the other 2 at the other turret, the same number of people need for the missile pack. I told Maltug that he will fly the airship, just to make him feel pain. 30 minutes later , the Blue Lightning was infront of the enemy, it was a big white airship, it started to attack, Maltug evaded the attacks. "Joey, start a conversation with the captain of that airship" , "yes, Sir!" , I sighed, again. I walked over the communication screen, then the captain of the enemy airship appeared. "Max, long time no see" said the enemy captain. "I'm sorry , have we met before?" , "so you don't remember me" , "what do you think, australian scum" , "don't you remember the mexican attack against Auastralia? , you destroyed a lot of soldiers , ships , and aircrafts, you thought you killed me when you destroyed the main base of military forces of Australia..." then I interruped "oh yes! , now I remember you, now you want revenge, but let me tell you something, australian scum, you will not have revenge, you will have a really noisy dead" , then I finished the conversation. "5 missiles against that airship". From the missile pack , 5 missiles were launched against the enemy, the enemy clan's airship was destroyed. "Australia is poor , their defences in every military unit are very low, well let's return to the harbor" Maltug flied the Blue Lightning to the harbor and he landed the big blue airship. After all people went inside the harbor , I stayed in the Blue Lightning , in the airsip I have kinda a small bedroom, I entered the room and inmediatly I layed over the bed , thinking
     
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    (Nice intro Max, but some things don't make sense. Like what was the Nationality of the Enemy? But since my explanation was a little cloudy, I'll clear it up a bit, there are Crews and a Captain for each ship, and the chances of knowing one another are very slim. Good narration, but that's something that would fit a Fighter description. Sorry.)

    "Where, pray tell, did you come across this?" I asked. An orginization of us all would be very good, but unfortunately, I was a loner, since I first went to school. "And, as you might not recall, I don't trust Russians, they're too clever. Most likely, they'll be ready for you. As for the meeting... I might drop in, but don't expect it."
     
    I nodded cooly, saying "If you want to join, we're meeting in Revjak two weeks from now." I ended the transmission and headed straight for my bed. Caffine was no substitute for sleep.
     
    ooc: hm well , I will edit them, I will try to make sense
     
    1.Acarty Namly
    2. The B.G.
    3. 19
    4. Jaspers (Jas-pars)
    5. https://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:SCb9DYcaV7oJ:www.a1hobby.com/F18PILOT
    6. My Jet
    7. The Weaponry:
    (You are allowed a total of 20 points at first.)
    (3) Turrets and Bombardment
    (_) Science; Biological
    (5) Science; Technological
    (3) Science; Weapons
    (2) Crew Training
    (4) Economic Knowledge
    (1) Buisness skills
    (2) Construction and repair equipment
    (*) Fighter Jets {NOTE: Fighters are only available with a 5 in Science Tech, a 2 in Crew Train, 2 Construction, and a 3 in Science Weap.}
     
    ooc: ok my posts have been changed
     
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