The Battle of Rome (PG-13)

[gab131]

Well my first fantasy story...

Plot:It is about ex-romances and war.Yes,it is truly fascinating.And the inspiration for this story is love stories I read here
on Pkmncommunity with a big seasoning of my imagination.



Characters:
Musa
Arthas
Augustus
Cornelius Margius
Agrippa
etc....






Arthas:Ugh...where am I? Who are you? Oh no... Please dont come closer...I am warning you!!!No..please dont...AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!

The scene turns to the bedroom where he slept.

Arthas:Oh...what happened?Musa are you here?
(He then notices she escaped)

Arthas:Oh...WHAT THE HECK is going on here!!!To the divorce office!!

The Divorce Office

Arthas:Sir, I would like to file a Divorce please...

Officer:But sir..

Arthas: DO IT!!!!

Officer:Yes sir...

The Palace

C.MG:Ah,welcome back sir...

Arthas:...

C.MG:What sir?

Arthas:I...well had a divorce and...PREPARE THE ARMY FOR WAR!!!That foolish
daughter of a musician has DESERTED me!!

C.MG:Oh,Boy!!War!!!!

The Roman Palace

Musa:Oh, thank Jupiter I am back with you Augustus!!

Augustus:Ah yes...Musa my wife!!!

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Note:Augustus has 2 sides.Arthas is his dark side.Musa stayed with Arthas
but she deserted with their children.

 

[gab131]

Continued

So after many conquests,King Arthas and Cornelius Margius finally faced the Roman Army south of Rome.The French under Emperor Bonaparte is waiting to strike at the north of the city.

Arthas: So...are you OK Margius?

C.MG:Yes,sire...

Arthas:Very well...General Krabbs,signal the advance!!General Snyder,artillery bombardment,now!!

Krabbs:Infantry,advance!!

Snyder:Artillery,Bombard!!

When the infantry finally stood 30 meters,the artillery stopped,and they prepared to fire...

Colonel:Infantry,front rank kneel...make ready!!... Take Aim!!...Fire!!

Roman Centurion:Pilums Ready!! Fire!!

All this continued for 3 minutes the Undead/Cartoons front rank stood up...

Colonel:CHAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGE!

Centurion:Charge!!!!

After half an hour fighting the two sides withdrew...For now...

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[gab131]

Continued

Augustus:Hmmm....Center,Advance!!

Arthas:*looks on advancing Romans*...Ok, boys let's meet them in the same old way and let's beat them in the same old way.Center fall back behind the ridge!!Reverse-slope defense!!
General Tennyson,General Turner,General Lewis,General McRich,reverse-slope defense now!!!

General Lewis:Reverse-slope defense!!!

Colonel:Yes,sir!!

Behind the Ridge

Arthas:Lie,down!!

General Agrippa:Keep advancing men!!!

When the Romans were on top of the ridge they had a BIG surprise.

Generals:Stand up!!!Take aim!Fire!!

When the Romans received the volley,they did not know this would happen.

Centurion:Retreat!!Back to the lines!!

Generals:Back to your positions men!!Double quick March!!

When they were back in position they anticipated another attack.

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[Jaimes]

Please stop now.. it's getting painful to read XD

It's not even a story.. it's a script.. There's no description, I can't tell what is going on and the characters are just a list of names.. You also might want a plot because "Oh Boy!! War!" doesn't seem to cut it >.>

 

[gab131]

Continued

Arthas looks at his watch...

Arthas:Hmmm...12 o'clock... time to eat!!

Arthas:Boys...bring up those tables and make sure the turducken is ready.

Arthas:Artillery Bombardment!!

This bombardment lasted through out lunch.

C.MG:Sir,what are our battle plans after lunch?

Arthas:Cavalry charge at center!!

Meanwhile at the Roman Positions...

Augustus:Hmm...nothing else to do so..

Aide:Lookout!

The aide pushes Augustus to the side,both of them missing a cannonball.

Augustus:Troops,hide behind the ridge now!

They do as told...

Augustus:Troops,we are under heavy bombardment!Lie down!

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