The Chain Poem

mhmm.... that sentence was very large and had many words that were unknown to my 12-year-old mind @.@
i think it meant that we should choose a topic that challenges us >.<
 
Ooo! I like :) The first line... who is gonna christen this new attempt? ... me? I'll try... lol

Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
 
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Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me

(Me like too)
 
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me

A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
 
*totally saves*
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.

To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?

*has absolutely no idea what the poem is about*
 
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Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
 
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
You were blinded from everything,
They never let you see the bad.
 
Um, we seem to be off the theme, which is conformity.

Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
You were blinded from everything
They never let you see the bad
Because when everyone is the same
You can never see beyond the window
 
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
You were blinded from everything
They never let you see the bad
Because when everyone is the same
You can never see beyond the window
Copies of another
with no emotion
 
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
You were blinded from everything
They never let you see the bad
Because when everyone is the same
You can never see beyond the window
Copies of another
with no emotion

Yet another drink shared with yet another clone
One by one, foundations fall to reveal the crust as I unveil
Am I apart of this trust, or does the devils advocate have my vote?

Yes its long sorry, but I was writing more to balance out the above two lines.
 
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
You were blinded from everything
They never let you see the bad
Because when everyone is the same
You can never see beyond the window
Copies of another
with no emotion
Yet another drink shared with yet another clone
One by one, foundations fall to reveal the crust as I unveil
Am I apart of this trust, or does the devils advocate have my vote?

Will we again walk together
Or will they part us for forever?
 
Who'd like to see what it's like to be me?
First remove those tinted screens, nothing is as it seems.
I walk alone, individual
The mindless drones must stalk along me
A glare in the night sky,
Not just any glare,
The gleam of the lustrous moon reflected off the plastic-glass.
To what extent must this go on
Will it end soon?
I dream of the night when you went away
Taken by force, swept into the darkness
You were blinded from everything
They never let you see the bad
Because when everyone is the same
You can never see beyond the window
Copies of another
with no emotion
Yet another drink shared with yet another clone
One by one, foundations fall to reveal the crust as I unveil
Am I apart of this trust, or does the devils advocate have my vote?
Will we again walk together
Or will they part us for forever?
We are alligned, but never
Do we fall alongside each other
 
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