[Pokémon] The Crystal Of Happiness

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    Hi! Im ganna start With the first two chapters. Then ill add other chappters and Books later!

    Chapter 1
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    It was Thursday Morning. I Slowly made my way to the dresser. I grabbed my clothes and headed down stairs."Good morning billy!" May said. I almost forgot that ash, may, and misty were staying at my house."Oh, Hi guys."I said in reply.

    After My shower we went for a walk at Pinlock Park.This is why me and ash love it. In The center is this awsome hang-out.All of my friends are usaully there. May And Misty came to go to the flower contest. So me and ash split up with the girls.What a bad move that was.But Before That happen, let me tell you more about me and ash.

    Well, when i was 8, I still lived with my mom. But When I said I wanted to be a pokemon trainer she said "NO!"
    So, I ran away in hope of finding A new home, A new Pokemon, And new friends. And I did at 458 Wertest St. That's Net's house.

    Net's real name is Nick, but since he's so good with computers, he's called Net.Well, Without him. I woundn't be talking to you right now. I would Have Not Even be alive without net. Thats also how I met Ash, Is by net.

    Chapter 2
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    So On 8/10/07,Net found me being chased by A guy name B.K.A, Because that means Best.Killer.Around. So he was chasing me, and Net let me into his house.
    "I've never seen you around these parts." said Net."Thats because I've never been around he before..." I said."What do you mean?"."Well I ran away from home because I wanted to be a pokemon trainer...."*BANG BANG* "Oh God, Billy,Get DOWN! Thats how Net saved me life from two bullets.
    Later on in the day I asked Net if he had a computer, And of course he said yes. Well, He showed me all his friends on Pinkurt, A online Video chat room. But one of the names....No, 2 of the names...Sounded Strange..... "Ash and Misty are also my best friends,"Net said. Those 8 words changed my life.....
     
    Chapter 3!

    Chapter 3
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    *PEW PEW* "Billy! Get Down!"
    Now, Im ducking on the floor from a crazy gunman, all my memorys come back. Fighting with my mom, Runing away, being chased by B.K.A,Having no where to sleep.All Nightmares.
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    After awhile I headed out to seek Ash and Misty. All I knew is that they were in Snowpoint city.And That was pretty far from me. 6 citys away to be ecact. So, Net came with me, and he let me borrow a bike.And what a harsh snowstorm on the ride there!
     
    "what is this i don't even"

    Yeah, that's my reaction to this summed up in an Internet meme.

    This story doesn't meet the rules or guidelines of this section. I mean, chapter three is three lines of mass confusion. People are getting shot at, memories are returning, and no reader can follow exactly why this is happening.

    Probably because chapter two isn't there.

    When you post a story, make sure that it follows the standards of the section, and take your time writing it so you don't have short chapters with mistakes riddled throughout.
     
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