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The Crystal OOC

OOHH OKAY!

Glowy pink orb it is. :D:D
 
X75flames said:
Hey, we had to wait for your slow butts to get done with the cave! What do you think we have been doing for the last week bub!?!?


Have his little orbady thingy glow :P Our team will be encompased by pink light! All will fear us!!
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Excuse me sir, but I posted every single time their was an opportunity, so don't you include me in that statement, we all know who's fault it really is >_>
 
yea, it was late in the morning, plus i dont actually have word on my comp...i dont think google docs will work either, i have trouble with that.
 
the blazing cellist said:
yea, it was late in the morning, plus i dont actually have word on my comp...i dont think google docs will work either, i have trouble with that.
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Why not just apply your own knowledge of grammar and such to the SU? I too am deprived of Microsoft Word, and wrote my SU in Wordpad at around 4am when I was home alone and scared of an empty house, so i don't see why anything there should affect your SU.
 
Just thought I'd tell you that I'm not going to be active this week. Exams, tomorrow will be revision as will the rest of the week. I'll try to go online as much as possible but don't count on anything.
 
seal said:
Just thought I'd tell you that I'm not going to be active this week. Exams, tomorrow will be revision as will the rest of the week. I'll try to go online as much as possible but don't count on anything.
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Alright, thanks for letting us know in advance.

the blazing cellist said:
yea, it was late in the morning, plus i dont actually have word on my comp...i dont think google docs will work either, i have trouble with that.
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There has to be somthing you can do. Your not even capatalising anything. That would be a good start. Lenghten up your SU too.
 
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Ack, I have manymanymany exams next week too. :(

I probably will come online a lot (revision? What revision?) but I will have periods of virtual silence. D;

Also, I'm trying to draw Jen and Spoink. I suck at anatomy, but this picture looks ok! Now I just need to steal a scanner and I can show it to the world. :D:D
 
Kon~ said:
Ack, I have manymanymany exams next week too. :(

I probably will come online a lot (revision? What revision?) but I will have periods of virtual silence. D;

Also, I'm trying to draw Jen and Spoink. I suck at anatomy, but this picture looks ok! Now I just need to steal a scanner and I can show it to the world. :D:D
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Oh dear. Brace yourselves. Hell is on its way.
 
OK, here is my revised SU, btw, i did try to apply my knowledge of grammar, but even though i make straight A's in english, im still a crappy writer. so uncreative. but anyways, I tried to make everything close to 2 paragraphs, except the personality part. im not good at that at all.


Name: Leck Giztrap
Gender: male
Age:22
Faction: Arleon
Personality: Leck is a charismatic, easily amused, and light hearted individual. he is almost always in the best mood, and influences others around him into a good mood. He rarely becomes upset, and that is only when his partner, Rhyperior is seriously injured. He does not seek to be the best out of the group but is a naturaly talented fighter and leader.
Appearance: On a normal day, Leck prefers to wear a light green and white shirt. His pants are a lightweight but durable material that does not tear even through the most rugged usage. he always carries a short sword, with a black ebony handle, polished with silver dust, and a crossguard made of a saturated black metal that curves upwards. The blade itself is made of dark red earth metal, and is coated in a thin layer of neurotoxins, that are produced from the metal itself. the blade is honed to a perfect edge. Leck only uses this powerful weapon against lightly armored foes of worth. His battle armour is thick grey scaled plate armour made from the shell the rhyperior that he is soulbound with. this armour is lightwieght, and is capable of the same protection it gives is partner. although he cannot survive volcanic eruptions due to the lack of coverage, he can take hit from heavy pokemon, and any weapon. the only disadvantages to his armour is its lack of coverage to vital areas such as the face, and its weight. In battle, the only way to harm him is to hit an unprotected area, or to hit him with enough blunt force to crush inside his armour. Leck stands at 5'7", with short spike blonde hair. He has a smile that rarely leaves his face, and a light agile body type.
History: As a child, his father taught him to be a farmer. He tended to the rice patties for years, but when his father died in an attack by the witherains, he knew he wanted revenge. He set out to join the military, and found he had a natural talent for leadership and swordsmanship. He quickly worked his way to the top, but purely on acccident. When Leck joined the military, he had no intent to reach the top ranks or an elite warrior status, but by the age of 15 he had become one of the youngest elite force leaders. Unlike most of the leaders, it was not hard work for him, due to a natural charm and talent for warfare. When the crystals were discovered, he was immdiatly given one, due to his rank, and he set out to find a perfect pokemon for the job. before he met his rhyperior, he wore plain metal armour, with a black colour, and \gold trim, but after having a bloody encounter with the wild rhyperior, he decided that a pokemon with that much power, and a strength that rivaled his own, would be the perfect partner.just before getting mauled by the rhyperior, he rolled out of its charge, and struck it on the back with the crystal. Immdiatly, the rhyperior stopped and showed signs of friendship. during the battle, Leck had taken off some of the scaled armour that protected the rhyperior, and after cleaning it up for presentation, he took some more scales, which the rhyperior would regrow later. He took the scales to a master blacksmith, and requested an armour to be made from it. 3 months later the blacksmith returned with a perfectly crafted plate body and plate legs made of the scales, and with a chainmail of a dull grey colour that wrapped around the plates to protect against slashing.

Pokemon: Rhyperior
Leck chose rhyperior during an encounter when he set out to find a suitable pokemon for his partner. he encountered many differnt pokemon, and he considered capturing and aaron due to its iron armor, but it lacked the fighting ability he was looking for. After killing several bug pokemon he decided that their poison abilities did not justify their weakness to blades and crushing weapons. it was while he was leaving the forest and heading into the mountains that an abnormally large Rhyperior attacked him, nearly killing him on the first hit. As he got back up, he smiled because he knew this could very well be just the pokemon he was looking for. He fought with the rhyperior for almost 15 minutes before it has left a gaping wound in his thigh and multiple cracked and broken ribs, and he knew he would die if he didnt take it soon. After getting up after its last attack, he rolled to dodge an aggresive charge and leaped at its back crystal in hand, and hit its head with the crystal. immdiatly it stopped fighting, and Leck collapsed. after regaining conscience, he found the ryperior, barely scratched, besides some of the scales he took off, standing beside him, and multiple dead pokemon who may have been trying to attacking him in his state of unconscience. Leck tried to stand but was to injured, so he crawled, and gathered the scales he took off of the rhyperior, and climbed onto its back, guiding it to the village, where he recieved medical attention to make a full recovery.
 
Cellist, it has gotten better. I would like some spaces in between the sections, and before I accept you, I need to know that you are going to get Word, or something similar. I still found quite a few capitaliztion erros, and I also need a RP sample.
 
X75flames said:
Cellist, it has gotten better. I would like some spaces in between the sections, and before I accept you, I need to know that you are going to get Word, or something similar. I still found quite a few capitaliztion erros, and I also need a RP sample.
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I guess this isn't the right time to admit to not having Word. Thankfully I've got good grammar anyway.
 
seal said:
I guess this isn't the right time to admit to not having Word. Thankfully I've got good grammar anyway.
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Gah, I just discovered a new pet peeve. I hate it when people dont capitalize stuff they need to, and pointlessley capitalize stuff their not -_-

This is going to be a long week.
 
X75flames said:
Gah, I just discovered a new pet peeve. I hate it when people dont capitalize stuff they need to, and pointlessley capitalize stuff their not -_-

This is going to be a long week.
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I guess I should have told you earlier. Doesn't matter though,a nuclear bomb isn't about to fall on my house because of it.
 
seal said:
I guess I should have told you earlier. Doesn't matter though,a nuclear bomb isn't about to fall on my house because of it.
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Told me what earlier? A Fat Man falling on your house would suck....
 
seal said:
The fact I was going to be virtually away for a week.
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No thats fine, its just that in EXTERMANATION there is this guy that does not capitalize right at all!!! And I want to yell at him, but its not my RP, so I might get in trobbel -_-
 
Yell anyway. Please yell anyway. Capitalisation is the most basic point in grammar, and if you aren't going to use it, you are not allowed to speak English.

And note how I used the English spelling of capitalisation, and not the bastardised American version with a goddamn Z in the middle of it.
 
X75flames said:
No thats fine, its just that in EXTERMANATION there is this guy that does not capitalize right at all!!! And I want to yell at him, but its not my RP, so I might get in trobbel -_-
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Yes, and end up exterminated ( my puns are getting worse)
 
Kon~ said:
Yell anyway. Please yell anyway. Capitalisation is the most basic point in grammar, and if you aren't going to use it, you are not allowed to speak English.

And note how I used the English spelling of capitalisation, and not the bastardised American version with a goddamn Z in the middle of it.
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Nah, Its probebly just my absloute crap spelling, if you havnt noticed :P
 
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