The Datriot's Official Fake Card Thread

[Datriot]

Well, the placement thingys are fixed a bit in this. there's proberbly some errors in the placement proberbly, please point them out.:)

 

[Smarties-chan]

I don't know much about placement but, I do know that fortree's gymleader is called winona and not winoa.

 

[Datriot]

oops, I always forget to put the other N, here is the new and improved version.

 

[QFred]

Betta!

I like it, for the first time in most of your cards.

Very good indeed, but you can still improve in visualization and in writing/wording.

Glad you have followed my advices.

 

[Datriot]

Betta!

I like it, for the first time in most of your cards.

Very good indeed, but you can still improve in visualization and in writing/wording.

Glad you have followed my advices.

Yeah, if it wasn't for you, I would have been doomed to making crappy cards!

 

[QFred]

Oh, thanks! :embarrass

The idea of making a new set is very good, I think you should try and complete that goal.

But I tell ya, compleitng a set is really difficult, especially if it passes the 50 cards.

 

[Datriot]

I'm only gonna make this new set about 80 cards, if I have it anymore it's gonna take too long.

EDIT: Newest card

Please tell me what you think?

 

[QFred]

As I told you, the visual isn't the better and the wording is still bad.

Push the attack a slot below and will be fine. Now about the wording:
- attck doesn't exist;
- After the "Flip 5 coins" thingy should be a period (.) and begin the following sentence with a Capital letter, finished with a period (.) and so forward in and sentences;
- Special Conditions are always Capitalized, same with Defending, Pok?mon, Energy(ies);
- That pic isn't very suitable to that kind of card, maybe another, with it alone;
- The Effect box is always 10 pixels from both borders (left and right) of the lighter box (the one wher the Pok?-Bodies/Powers and Attack show up).

I think that's all!

But it's good, I suppose!

 

[Datriot]

8Sigh*More probs like usual, I also accidently mistype words...
Anyway, my next 2 cards!:D

 

[QFred]

Why do you repeat the same mistake all the time

- The Effect box is always 10 pixels from both borders (left and right) of the lighter box (the one wher the Pok?-Bodies/Powers and Attack show up).

I think that is the only mistake in Onix, apart of using an anim? in-battle pic, that is not even a big mistake, if you know what pic to use.

The pic of Celebi is from Pok?mon Colosseum.

Same mistake of Onix.

Another mistakes:
- The attack is Solar Beam;
- Celebi is Psychic/Grass, not reverse;
- The Effect text is on the same size on every attacks;
- The Effect text shouldn't have been shrunk 'cause it looks good at 14, too. Just bring the attack a Slot up.

I think that's all.

I prefered the Onix.

Onix: 9/10
Celebi: 7/10

 

[M4rtyn]

You know it doesnt matter which way the dual type goes. I mean dark pokemon are dark then there type.

:edit: third page

 

[Datriot]

Well, I thought I'd rename the names just to make them more original, it's not that bad....I that **** textbox thingy is so annoying.

 

[dragon-fyre]

Your cards are great! I made a "Red's Umbreon" and it looks awful (and i mean awful!) Where do you get all of the pictures from?

 

[Datriot]

I just use the good 'ol google search.:)

 

[Datriot]

well, here is my latest card, not a very good crystal onix pic.....


Pleae don't be cruel to me....

 

[QFred]

Sorry datriot, here comes the cruelty!!

WHY DO YOU ALWAYS DO THE SAME MISTAKE???!!!!

But I like it, it's cool! Good use of a Dragon blank!