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The dragons. Saga number one: The begining

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The page refreshes every time I click the spoiler thingy, anyways, I'll just have to make due without:



See,the worms were made to infect the dragons, and weaken them, but however, they'll only work once the dragon they've infested is full-grown. And also, they will give the dragon a few special abilites, which you will make up.XD
 
ooc: Okay then,. I'll give him the ability to makea shield that temporarily repels any biological matter within range of him.

ic: Crimson felt rather strange, and suddenlyhe threw up some strange sheild, tossing the tentacles off of him. "Wow, how'd you do that?" I asked him.

'I don't know." he said in surprise. "I'm not supposed tohave that kind of power, I'm the elemental breather!"
 
OOC: as for the red worm that's infected my charecter? or does it have the same effect?

IC: I had trailed them, and without really thinking, gathered lightning in my throat and sent it at Crimson, and becasue I was really too big to hide anymore, I stayed in clear view.
 
OOC: Hmm, I think one of my "worm powers" Will be the ability to encase something in crystal.

I had followed Eclipse all the way back to the city, but tried to stay out of sight when she attacked. "Why does she keep striking at the others?" I thought, very confused.

OOC: Just a filler post to let you know I'm not dead, -yet-
 
I got ready to attack again, and a sort of harness was visable on me, black as my scales, designed to force me to attack the creatures that were viewed as light members..
 
The dragon stepped back in shock as he saw that crimson managed to repel his vines. "No matter." He said, turning to Cal. His eyes turned yellow, and the vines went underground again, and reappeared around both Cal and his tamer, the dragon snapped, "DIE!", and the vines slammed dow, and twisted all around cal and his tamer, and the vines began to tighten, and the thorns came out again..
 
Cal screeched an unearthly sound. He saw the vines tearing into his Tamers flesh, and this enraged him. A strange red aura pulsated around the blue dragon. His eyes glowed a firey red and he unleashed the unearthly cry again.

Every single tenticle exploded.

Nat clutched her arm, a deep thorn wound in it. She looked to Calamous, who was now normal again, and staring quite shocked at the scorched remains of the vines.

"What was that Cal?" Nat asked, grimacing in pain.

"I'm not sure..." Cal relented. "I'm supposed to be an ice-breather and shape-changer... Explosions aren't one of my powers... At least, not that I know of..."

Nat suddenly turned on the green dragon, her eyes burning and blood blossoming on her once white top.

"What Do You Think You Were Doing!?" she screamed, still clutching the wounded arm.
 
"Hmm... this was an interesting display of power." The green dragon said, and then, a figure behind him said, "Well, now we can go.", and stepping out of the shadows, revealed a man wearing a vine green outfit, and holding a rose on the tip of his index finger, he said, "We may leave now.", and the green dragon said, "But sir-", and the man replied, "NO! We will destroy them later. I have a feeling we will see them later...", and sighing, the dragon nodded, and spreading his leaf-like wings, he waited for the man to climb on, and then, he flew away, just as one more dragon, the same one who I thought I had killed, stepped out of the shadows,(Man do I milk this.XD). and watching the dragon fly away, she shook her remaining fist, and said, "They will pay. Those tamers and their dragons, will die...", and then, huge metal pillars rose up from the ground...
 
OOC: Wow, I'm beggining to get sick of all this fighting.

BIC: Nat didn't notice the pillars, as she was sitting on the rooftop, tending to her wound. She tore the bottom half from her white shirt and wrapped it around her forearm, stopping the bleeding and leaving her stomach exposed. Cal used an extremely weak ice breath to bring down the swelling that had occured.

"Cal," Nat said quietly. "You'd better be careful. It seemed like, when you got angry, your strange power came. Perhaps you should try to remain calmer in situations like that...."

I fear that is impossible. You are my Tamer, and I will let nothing happen to you! Cal's mindvoice said.
 
ooc: Yeah, I know what you mean. But I'm not sure he'll do a peace period, especially since the last time he tried taht it didn't go over so well. a good shor tpeace period or training period is all we really need right now.

ic: I picked up Crimson. "Hey buddy, you okay."

"I'm fine." he said. " I'm not about to let some mean old prickle bush get the best of me!" he said. I laughed.
 
Nat turned her head, hearing laughter. She smiled at Jack and Crimson, cuddling Cal to her.

"Don't worry. I know you'll never let anything happen to me," she whispered to him, breathing in the scent of his soft, blue fur.

"That statment may be more true than you think," Cal said, almost darkly. He then giggled a bit. "NAT! YOU"RE SQUISHING ME!" he cried, sounding more like the infant he was for a moment.
 
'You think we should get down from here?" I asked, remindering Nat that we were on top of a building. " I mean, there must be a nice hotel or soemthing nearby where we could get rooms. It would be more comfortable to sleep in an actual bed for a change."
 
OOC: I'd do one, but pogi apparntly doesn't like them. Well, like it or not, pogi, there's gonna be a peace period.-_-;


IC: As I emerged from the shower and laundromat, I was fully dressed, and was clean.As I walked back, I was shocked to see that Nat and the others were seriously injured. "What's going on-" I said, as ruby and the wyvens flew past me, and landed near crimson...
 
Nat smiled, her now halfed shirt flapping in the breeze. "Maybe there'll be somewhere I can have this professionally fixed," she said, motioning to the bloody bandage on her arm.

Cal took up his perch on Nat's shoulder, his eyes clouded with worry over Nat's injury.
 
ooc: I never said I didn't like it, it's jsut taht you create a climactic scene, where a major character dies, and then you jsut expected us to fall into a one page long peace period. Not exactly a good storytelling point, if you think about it. :D.

ic: WE shoudl probably get that cleaned out, before it gets infected. " I said worriedly about Nat's injury. "Wait here, and I'll be righ tback." Iclimbed down from th building and began looking around for the nearest drug store. I finally found one and returned with Cotton swabs, a bottle of rubbing alcohol, and a bundle of bandages. I took the used bandage off her arm and noticed it was already getting infected. "now this is going to sting a little." I cautioned her. I dabbed a cotton swab in some rubbing alcohol and applied it to the wound.
 
Nat cringed and her fist involantarilly clenched as the rubbing alcohol was applied. She fought the urge to cry out and allowed Jack to tend to her wound.

Cal watched aprehensivly, fighting the urge to lash out at the one harming his tamer, even though the pain was a good thing.
 
OOC: Look. There's peace period. So now, no attacks for a while.XD


IC: "Hmm. well, there's always Ucra city. That's the largest metrpolis in the world. People from everywhere in the world go there. It has evreything you could want. I bet we could relax there. and fix your arm!!" I said, rubbing my chin, looking philosphic. I then said, "Ruby, at your current stage, can you at least carry Nat?? I don't think cal can hold her or anybody, in his current condition.", and nodding ruby said, "Well, I probably could. But don't think you can join the ride!!", and tripping Nat, he caught her on his back, and then, he waited for the signal to let him carry her to Ucra city.

Turning to the wyvens, I said, "Hello?? In case you didn't notice, you're the only ones who can carry us to Ucra!!!", and realizeing what I said, the wyvens apologize, and two of them bended, waiting for Me and Jack to get on, while the others took flight. I climbed on one of the wyvens backs, and turning to Jack and Crimson, i asked, "Well, are you getting on, or not??".
 
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'Hold on a mintue, I'm not done!" I said to (Sitll don't know your character's name.) I grabebd a length of bandage and wrapped it around nat's wound. I then tied it off ,making sure it held tight. " There, that should do it until we can get a professional to look at it." I told her. "Come on, let's go." I jumped up onto one of the wyverns, and Crimson jumped up into my lap.
 
Cal shook his head defiantly. "I can carry her, thanks," he muttered, growing to a soze large enough for her to ride on, yet not large enough to tire himself out.

Nat climbed aboard his back, thanking Jack for tending to her arm. She'd have to get some new clothes... she thought as she looked down at her torn shirt and now frayed skirt.

Cal floated gracefully, nearly lulling Nat to sleep as they journeyed on.
 
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