The Hoenn Saga

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    Yo, heres my first attempt at a comic, if you have any suggestions PM me.
    If you want to be in my comic just post your overworld's and tell me about your character (Pokemon,Personality,Background)

    Its rated PG-13 (If even that...)

    *If you see a major spelling mistake PM me and I'll fix it when I can...
    *I try my best to make this funny, but the point of the comic isnt its humor quality...
    *The Speech bubbles may be confusing in the first few episodes but I made them better in newer ones...

    [PokeCommunity.com] The Hoenn Saga


    Chapter 1: Journey Begins...Kinda?
    Episode 01: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic001.jpg
    Episode 02: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic002.jpg
    Episode 03: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic003.jpg
    Episode 04: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic004.jpg
    Episode 05: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic005.jpg
    Episode 06: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic006.jpg

    Chapter 2: The Road To Rustboro
    Episode 07: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic007.png
    Episode 08: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic008.png
    Episode 09: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic009.png
    Episode 10: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic010.png
    Episode 11: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic011.png
    Episode 12: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic012.png

    Chapter 3: The First Gym Badge And Contest Ribbon
    Episode 13: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic013.png
    Episode 14: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic014.png
    Episode 15: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Comic0015.png NEW

    Plot: 3 beginner trainers meet up and start traveling together, each for there own reason, they eventually
    come across Team Aqua and Magma and decide to put a stop to there crimes as well as pursue there dreams...

    Character Bio's:

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    Seth: He's the hero of the story, he's originally from Johto but moved to Hoenn when his dad became Petalburg
    city's new gym leader, and although his dad is good friends with May's dad, Seth never got the chance to become
    good friends with May, or even talk to her that much... (He has a small crush on her though) He was very popular
    in Johto but now that hes in a new region he doesnt have any friends until he meets Wally and get to know May...
    (Its also his dream to compete in Pokemon Contests) *Seth has a Blue text bubble and Blue text*
    Trainer Card: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/TrainerCard01.jpg

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    May: She's Professor Birch's daughter and she always helps him do feild research, since she's always so busy
    helping her dad she's never got the chance to pursue her dream of participating in gym battles and winning badges,
    She finally decides to pursue her dream after what she beileved to be a near death experience with a heard of Aron's!
    (May is kind and is usually the responsible one of the group) *May has a Red text bubble and Red text*
    Trainer Card: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/TrainerCard02.jpg

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    Wally: He's the last of the trio, and hes the weakest of them too... (In personal condition and with Pokemon)
    He has health issues and his only dream is to be a trainer and be healthy, after his parents tell him he cannot
    have a Pokemone because of his poor health and he has to move to Verdenturf Wally runs away and meets
    up with Seth, Seth gives him his very first Pokemon and he begins to travel with Seth shortly after that... (Wally
    is abit touchy at times but overall hes a good friend to Seth and May) *Wally has a Green text bubble and Green text*
    Trainer Card: https://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/TrainerCard03.jpg

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    Silon: Silon is your average spunky 13 year old guy. Having but only three Pokemon, he is ready for any battle thrown
    at him. He is kind, smart, and athletic. When apporached by water, he releases his Lapras to glide across to any nearby
    land. He is also the top executive of Team Aqua only bested by Archie himself. But during a mission Silon's attitude changes
    and he wont hesitate to destroy his opponent and he doesnt know the meaning of holding back... He takes his job very seriously !
    (Silon appears to be on the side of evil but evil is not in his true nature) *Silon has a Dark Blue text bubble and Dark Blue text*

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    Shelly: Shelly is the top executive of Team Aqua, if Silon wasnt around that is... She was the best of the Aqua's and was a very nice woman until Silon took her place as the #1, which made her mean and bitter, now she hates everything and is pure evil, she wants world domination and is a very twisted character.. *Shelly has a Orange text bubble and Orange text*

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    Archie & Team Aqua: Archie is the man behind the evil Team Aqua, he wants to awaken Kyorge and use it to rule the world,
    or somthing like that... He needed Seth's Pichu for reasons that arnt clear yet, he rules Team Aqua with a iron fist, he also
    acts like a father figure to Silon since he is so impressed by Silon's skills as a trainer. *Archie has a Grey text bubble and Grey text*

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    Norman: The Petalburg city gym leader and father to Seth, he uses Normal Type Pokemon and is basically the same as in Ruby & Sapphire...
    *Norman has a Light Brown text bubble and Light Brown text*

    [PokeCommunity.com] The Hoenn Saga

    Professor Birch: Hoenn's #1 Professor on Pokemon and father to May, unlike Professor Elm & Oak he does most of his research outside, he gets help from his daughter from time to time... *Professor Birch has a Orangish Colored text bubble and Orangish Colored text*

    Credit (will be updated as I go along)
    Zeon
    Swizzler121
    FOXRULES
    BADASSBILL
    Avatar
    Epona4
    Rock Lee
    Rocket Seviper Shadow
    Pokemon Elite 2000
    The Spriters Resource
    The Video Game Atlas
    (If I forgot you, or forgot a resource that you know sprites in my comic are from tell me!)

    I love to hear what you think so please comment...

    People who have appeared in The Hoenn Saga: Silon
    People who will be appearing in The Hoenn Saga: Mace, Ulitimate Latios, Mark Arrow, Dash, (YOUR CHARACTER CAN BE NEXT!!!) ;)
     
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    No, actually. Is this your first attempt at a comic? Because if it is, you're actually doing pretty good.

    One suggestion for speech bubbles though. Whoever is talking first, you should put their speech bubble at the top.

    And those ones where you connect them. Should have the intervention between the two. Well, at least that's what I think.... Wait a sec... I THINK?!?!?

    I can't wait to see the new episode. :)
     
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    @Gohan: Yup this is my first attempt at a comic! and thanks :D
    about the speech bubbles, I'll start doing that as best i can, but somtimes it only fits
    a certain way. but I'll start doing that. I'm not going to edit the comics I already have up though.

    @XiaolinDragon: Thanks alot :P

    @Silon: I'll add you in when I start taking requests to be in the comic. (if anyone besides you wants to be xD)
    but can you tell me alittle bit about your guy? like his personality or background? just so i get a idea of how to make him act :classic:
     
    Silon is the average spunky 13 year old guy. Having but three Pokemon, he is ready for any battle thrown at him. He is kind, smart, and athletic. When approached by water, he releases his Lapras to glide across to any nearby land. (? Oo ?)
     
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    cool comics i like it....keep up the good work..ur a beginner and ur comic already has a better story line then mine...anyway good luck with the rest
     
    jedite1000 said:
    cool comics i like it....keep up the good work..ur a beginner and ur comic already has a better story line then mine...anyway good luck with the rest
    thanks, i wouldnt go that far though, i really like your comic :)
    im kinda just making mine up as i go along though... i only have a small story line really... xD

    comic 4 and 5 are up now ( i have nothing to do so i just whipped up 2 more comics ) O_o;
     
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    Mattthegreat said:
    This comic is good. Quite funny too. Do u save as JPEG? Becuase u shouldnt
    thanks, reading Pokemon KD is what inspired me to make my own comic. :D
    and i save mine as TIFF... its the only one that photobucket would take without messing it up.
     
    Mattthegreat said:
    Thanks. I say save as PNG and host it at www.tinypic.com!
    i tried using tinypic and it wouldnt work for me. so i gave up... :(
    but i'll try again later on. maybe after i finish chapter 1. which is almost finished.
     
    Episode 6 is up, and thats the last Episode of Chapter 1, so now if you want to be in my comic you can. just post your overworlds, and tell me about your character... (like what pokemon they have and there background)
     
    Your comic is looking great! <33

    *debates on making Silon having an evil twin..*
     
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