The Legend of Zelda Fan Club

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Somebody can PM it now. We have everything we need but the Ganon, Link, and Zelda characters...now that nobody is really active anymore, I say we just leave them out aside from Ganondorf (still main evil) and we get started before people begin to lose interest.

Name: Ganondorf
Race: (I have no idea)
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Physical Appearance: Clicky the Linky. xD
Personality: (I can't do it right now, my hands are cramping from the 6 page report I had to type today. xD)
History: (I don't know enough...)
 
I haven't been on much. Sorry for the delay.

The cosmos, an endless realm of worlds upon worlds. Things that are considered normal in one world are a mere fantasy in another. This is the base of all legends, of all worlds... of all of us.

And no realm is more embedded in Legends as the Realm of Hyrule. Created by the three goddesses of Power, Wisdom and Courage, this world has received a celestial gift: the Sacred Triforce, a source of ever lasting power this sacred relic is said to once have been within the reach of any who wished to see them up close. Nowadays however they are hidden in the Sacred Realm, this the greatest of treasures has been searched for by mankind for many years….Those of a righteous heart brought the land of Hyrule peace and fortune, but there are those whose heart has been stolen by darkness, They brought ruin and despair upon the green fields of a world that had never before seen such darkness.
- You're making reference to "them" and "they" but haven't explained that the unified Triforce consists of three parts. So, in the context of what is written, you're using plurals to refer to a singular object - the Triforce.

One of those men was a man named Ganondorf, he had always tried to get hold of the golden treasures of the goddesses. And for that he has rightfully earned the name of The Dark King. And so each time he got a hold of the Triforce the land of Hyrule became a dreadful land, full of monsters and evil beyond human comprehension. Thankfully from the realm of Light came a hero, clothed in a green tunic and wielding a legendary blade he defeated the Evil King, and sealed him away in the Realm of Darkness where he can do no more harm.
- Evil King, King of Darkness, King of Evil, and Dark Lord would be a more accurate title than "The Dark King".
- Dark World or Evil Realm would described the tainted Sacred Realm; not Realm of Darkness.


Hyrule profited from this time of peace and started to flourish. Hyrule became prosperous and the people did their very best to keep it that way. The economy, art, agriculture… every race gave their best. The Goron clans dug up minerals and gems which they sold to the Helians who crafted the most beautiful jewels and ornaments which they in turn sold to far away lands. The Zora's were masters in fishing and guided the fishermen across the waterways of Hyrule so that only the freshest and best fish would be sold in the markets of Hyrule. The Gerudo's brought supplies that only the dessert could provide things such as coconuts, dates, knifes, satin and the like….
- Should be tribe instead of clan.
- Hylians, not Helians.


But beneath that golden glimmer of wealth, something had started to move…. Within the darkness, the power of the Evil King had started to increase…. He would be back…and this time it would take more than one hero to stop him in his search for the Ulimate Power.

His minions, evil creatures with no faces and no other purpose than to serve the one that they belived to be the only one worthy to rule the Realm of Hyrule, were gathering, leeching together. Like a swarm of gnats, they began to devour the land with a pace set by their own need to find their true master. Following their leader's command, they swept the cities dry of everything it once called its own.

Monsters, with their gnashing fangs and blood encrusted claws, set out to fulfill their order. Taking anyone who stood in their way hostage, they began to dominate. The residents of the towns and societies dropped like flies as they were attacked. If one had not lost his life, the only fate he could dream of was becoming a slave to the Evil King himself. The monsters were too great for one man to destroy. Many tried to fight back, but their efforts were in vain. He and his minions were in a league of their own. Darkness proved to be more over powering than anticipated. Their desire to rule Hyrule, and obtain the golden delicacy known as the Triforce proved far too much.

But... there was something these heartless beasts did not have.
- Why don't the evil creatures have faces? Are the Skull Children? O_o

Hope.


Though the circumstances grieved hopelessness, a vague, dim light was beginning to pick up momentum, and shine. The Dark King was building his power of darkness, but a group of rebels were going to prevent that. No one was entirely sure how it started, or whose idea it even was, but an underground group of elite citizens was beginning to grow. This group had their hearts bent on righteousness, and aimed to return their home to its once prosperous state. They came from all lands alike with the same heroic desire; stop the Dark King and free Hyrule of its evil.

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It is said that every being is born with a purpose, some are destined for greatness, the best example of greatness was the one known as Link, the Hero of Time. He single handedly defeated the Dark King and his minions by using the Legendary Master Sword along with ancient weapons that he found on his journey. The great Link is long gone, and the only legacy left of him resides in the hearts of those old enough to have known him. The Dark King is said to have started causing distress to the residents of Hyrule the day that Link died, could it possibly be that Link was the reason why the Dark King had not attacked until now?
- Those most be some really really old people, to have known Link. We're talking hundreds of years here.

It was seen that one morning the gate to the Realm of Darkness opened and darkness spilled over into the land of Hyrule. This caused those people who were sensitive to it, to become just as evil as the Dark King himself. Those people became the King's generals, powerful they began to control the different regions of Hyrule. And yet there seemed to remain the glimmer of hope within the hearts of the people of Hyrule, the hopeful return of the one who defeated the King before.

What luck of those few with Hope, if only they knew that it would be more then one person who shared in the light, who would vow to defeat the Dark King and his minions. Let the Darkness be destroyed.
 
Let me try what I can make of it.

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And thanks Triforce... I'll correct it. =D

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Uhuh, I corrected what Triforce advised. Sometimes adding a little...
 
What I miss? *slids in and falls to the floor* We havn't started the Rp yet have we?! *stands up and fixes hair* In read everything.... and I agree... with everything! *raises arms and falls again*

~JBCBlank
 
Don't break your leg, JBC. =3 Or worse an arm, then you won't be able to rp. XD

So does everyone agree that I post this: (if you have anything to add, raise your hands, now plz... 'cause now I'm sure of it.. I'll try to post it tomorrow. :D (before my b-day party is starting. XD)

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I approve. And happy birthday. ^^ I won't be able to start RP-ing till Monday because I'm going to be away on a class trip.
 
Thanks. =D Okay, I'll go ahead and post it now. *suspense is reraching it highest point*

And I had a wonderful b-day, yesterday. 83

Oh, before that... what about a title?

The Legend of Zelda: Rise of Darkness or something?
 
It sounds a bit like Rise of Darkrai. XDD But anyways, we can still ask mods to change the title if we find a better one. XD

Ps: I posted it... Now all we gotta do is wait for it to be approved; =D
 
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*waves hands around* PUT LINK HERE WHEN APROVED! *falls again* I'M OK! I'm just to exciteble... ^.^ ((No pun intended!))

~JBCBlank
 
Weird... mine only took a day to be accepted.... *smiles* cool.

~JBCBlank
 
Yeah, let's hope it gets acknowledged... It'd be cool if they posted a profile message to see if it didn't get approved. =o
 
I don't see why it can't be approved...all moderators get hundreds of PMs a day. I'd seriously just cut her some slack. Plus she's my friend. ^^ I admin my own sites, and at sometimes it can get pretty hectic...especially when two people know each other in real life...begin to go off topic, ect.
 
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